PERFECT KILLER/last part page 37 - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

306

Views

59.9k

Users

49

Likes

20

Frequent Posters

mpatel97508 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#71
woah ruhee did's!!!! Angad is the perfect killer!!!!! 👏 Atleast the villian raj is dead!!! awesome job!!!!!! 👏
night girl thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#72
ok every one next part comeing in a few mins 😊
delicateangel thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#73
hurry u guys ryte to shorttt godd lol ryte longg plzz
night girl thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#74
part 6

a-dont worrie you will be more then just my second hand man your like a bother to me, remember partners for ever.

prithiv gose down stairs and gose to sleep on the sofa. angad stays up stairs and sits besides kripa to stop her from running off if she wakes up. all night angad checked every hour if kripas fever was going down and it was. as the night pass kripa started getting color back in her face and was going back to normal but angad was getting more and more tired staying up all night. soon around 5 am angad went to sleep with his head resting on kripas stomch.

10 am

around 10 we see kripa wakeing up. as kripa woke up she didnt know where she was she was so confused as the whos house she was at and who saved her yesterday. as kripa starts to sit up in bed she feels something heavy on her stomch kripa looks down to see angads head resting on her stomch and his arms around her waist and the rest of his body one the floor

k-(thinking)maybe i can run....just have to make sure angad dosnt wake up

kripa slowly moves backwards and gets angad to let go of her. then kripa quitly and sliently opens the door and gose out the room. out side of the room kripa quitly tip toes down stairs and made it to the door but rught when kripa was about to open the door and run some one grabed her from behind her waist

k-aahhhh!!!!!

kripa turns around to see the same guy that was makeing a sandwhich yesterday

p-ssshhhuuu!!!! will you be quite...angads sleeping and he was up all night takeing care of you, give him a break

k-what do you mean takeing care of me

p-you had a high fever if angad didnt look after you. then you could have died

k-well, he's the one that took me towards death in the first place, now i want to go home

p-well you cant other wise you will just go home running to daddy say that man kidnaped me

k-i am so not like that

p-look i dont make the calls, angad dose and angad said you cant leave the house....now come have breakfast you havent eating sence yesterday

kidnaped or not kripa had to admit that she was very hungry and out of engry. kripa followed prithiv to the kitchen and helped prithiv make breakfast

k-what is your name

p-prithiv

k-so do you work for angad

p-no, angad owns all the money and fame but he always shares it with me. sometimes even with i dont deserve it.

k-how are you and angad friends

p-its a long story that is not ment to be told

k-oh

kripa took out some bread and put it in the toster then took out some milk to make coffe

k-do you want coffe

p-yes, but iam not going to let you drink coffe

k-why not

p-your fever probly killed many cells in your body already, coffe will just make it worse

k-fine i will make some for you only

prithiv then gose up to the toaster and took out the bread kripa put in

soon prithiv and kripa were done makeing breakfast and set the table. as soon as kripa and prithiv get ready to sit down to eat prithiv and kripa hear angad yelling from up stairs

a-PRITHIV, KRIPA IS MISSING!!!!!!

prithiv and kripa laugh a bit seeing as how angad was so worried to death

k-(whispers)arent you going to tell him iam right here

p-(whispers)lets make him suffer a bit

soon angad comes rushing down stairs to see kripa and prithiv eating breakfast

a-prithiv, why the hell didnt you tell me kripa was right here

p-you never asked

angad was turning red in anger

p-have some breakfast it will calm you down

angad sits at the table with anger but trys and controls it. at breakfast prithiv and angad talk about things kripa clearly didnt understand and didnt bother asking about because she was still very scared of angad after what happend yesterday. kripa wasnt that scared of prithiv sence he was nice enough to offer breakfast. soon around the middle of breakfast kripa got the courage to talk to angad

k-uuummm....angad i was wondering if you could let me go home

a-for get it miss.sharma it will never happen

k-but why not

a-because i know that girls like you will go off tell there father who kidnaped them and set them up to be killed

k-i promise i wont tell father

angad could tell kripa was clearly lieing and kripa also knew she was lieing

a-do i look stupid

k-ii...what...i..

a-i said do i look stupid to you

prithiv buts in the conversation

p-yes

kripa starts laughing

a-shut up miss. sharma

kripa shuts her mouth mostly because angads mean voice scears the crap out of her.

a-iam not going to let you go miss. sharma, i just dont trust you and untill iam sure that you wont go off running to your dad telling on me. i wont let you go

kripa becomes up set and continues eating breakfast with out saying another word

hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-kripa makes a run for it
Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
blah_blah thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#75
awesome part!!!

btw, that is part 6 😛
sweet_jaanu27 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#76
gr8 fan-fic, gr8 part, keep it up 👏 continue soon, cant wait to read what happens next! 😃
night girl thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awesome part!!!

btw, that is part 6 😛

oops totlly spaced out lol😆 i will fix it right now thanks for pointing it out😳

mpatel97508 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#78
awesome!! kripa is kind of funny!! 😆 love it and yeah it is part 6!! 😛
blah_blah thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: night girl


oops totlly spaced out lol😆 i will fix it right now thanks for pointing it out😳



i'v read it like 3times now!
hehe.. 😳 😳 😆 what can i say..
i LOVE it! 😳 👏
night girl thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: blah_blah



i'v read it like 3times now!
hehe.. 😳 😳 😆 what can i say..
i LOVE it! 😳 👏

3 times wow😲 i my self dont like reading my own fan fic and 3 time 😲 you all must realy like it

maybe i should plan on becomeing a realy writer some day😆(lol just jokeing)

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

10 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1018 page no 28 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1018 page no 28

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

3 months ago

Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3)

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

8 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

3 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #13 updated episode 971 page 155

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".