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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 5


after angad ties kripa to the sofa angad sites on the other sofa and watchs the movie "girlfriend". kripa was grossed out at seeing angad watch such a movie but she had no choise but to watch it sence she was tied down. kripa knew it was no use to try and run away because she was tied down hard and there were about 50 guards watching her every move

after the move angad closed the tv

a-ok ready to go and get killed

k-no iam not ready,(yelling) i dont want to die!!!!

a-come on its not that bad there can be things worse then dieing

kripa gives angad a mean look

k-i cant belive father hired an underworld gangster to be my teacher

angad gives off an evil grin then unties kripa and carries her to the car. as angad carries kripa out to the car kripa screams and yells and hits angad as hard as she could but it was no use angad just wouldnt listen to her and every time kripa hit angad it was hopeless it was like he was tuffer then rock and now kripa was crying relising that her life was realy good with her father being over protive of her. kripa realized that she may never get to see her father again after this day. slowly by slowly kripa started crying more and more.

angad put kripa in the back seat of his car and was tieing her down and saw her cry and started feeling bad.

a-(strick adult tone)stop crying right now!!!!!i hate it when girls like you cry for there life!!!!(yelling) LOOK JUST STOP!!!!

but kripa couldnt stop crying. to kripa it was the end of the world it was hard for kripa to stop crying knowing that she is going to die with out even able to say good bye to her father or any of the body guards that are nice enough to buy her ice cream behind her fathers back.

a-look stop crying or else....or else.... i will make you quite

angad relised it was no use and just tied kripa down then sat in the frount seat and drove off to on the streets of europe

a-(thinking)god,this stupid girl wont shut up. all she can do is cry

angad continues driveing untill about 40 mins later he comes to a house a little bit bigger then his house but not to big. the house was made from black stones and the door of the house was a french doors that were made out of thick dark cherry wood that were realy tall up.

angad went to the back of his car and untied kripa from the back seat. kripa wasnt crying any more because of her tears all dried up but kripas eyes were all red and kripas cheeks were a bit red. while untieing kripa angad felt kripas forehead and could tell she had a fever. angad then continued untieing kripa

a-come on kripa were here

as soon as angad was finished untieing kripa. kripa when almost crazy she started yelling realy loud

k-NO ANGAD, LET ME GO!!!!! I DONT WANT TO DIE!!!!

kripa was yelling so loud her whole face turned red. angad could see kripas vanes pop out from her neck and he saw kripa scared like heck. angad grabed on to kripa realy hard but this time kripa whouldnt give up kripa tried with every thing that she had in her to get away and see almost did get out of angads grip but angad got the better of her. angad then started draging kripa to the black stoned house and kripa beged angad to save her but he just wouldnt listen

k-please, i will give you anything just let me go!!!!!LET ME GO!!!!

now kripa was all red. kripas eyes were red her face was red her arms and legs were red from the rope that tied her down in the car. kripa was red all over and angad was just makeing it worst by draging her in to the black house.

angad finliy reached the door and rung the door bell and grabed on to kripa as hard as he could. angad was realy tired from looking after kripa for over an hour. at the door a guy with a gun in his hand opened the door

guard-can i help you

a-yes i come to give away kripa sharma for my 100,000,000 pounds

guard-sure come in

the guard opens the door all the way and angad drags kripa inside the house with all his might because kripa was fighting realy well for a girl. angad gose to the liveing room and we see a guy siting on a chair with a realy good looking girl on his lap makeing out with her. the liveing room floor was made out of glass and underneather was water underneath. angad drags kripa across the liveing room to the guy makeing out with a girl.

a-sir

the guy looks at angad and stops makeing out with the girl

guy-yes

a-i brought kripa sharma and you own me 100,000,000 pounds, raj

r-oh, right!

raj takes out 2 big brif cases and opens both of them

r-your money

raj closes both the brife case and handed it to angad

r-now hand over the girl

angad give kripa to raj and kripa starts screaming again.

raj-you can go

angad picks up his brife case and starts leaveing, he hears kripa screaming his name

k-ANGAD!!!!HELP

but angad didnt care...he barly knew kripa and countined going to the door angad was only one step away from leaveing the house when he heard one sentence that made him go back for kripa. it wasnt something kripa said that made him go back for her it was some thing raj said that made angad go back for kripa. raj had said

r-she will be fun to play with

angad knew what he heard was right and he knew very well that raj was going to rape kripa. angad quickly turned back and went strat up to raj and punched him in the face

a-WHAT THE HELL DID YOU JUST SAY!!!!!!

raj and all the guards around him were shocked. even the guards didnt know what to do. should they kill angad or not because angad was one of raj's best buissiness dealers. raj starts to laugh after he got him self back togather

r-all i said was miss. shrama will be fun to play with

a-you cant rape her

r-i wouldnt call it rape i would call it enjoyment

a-iam not going to let you do that you might not know this but i do. rapeing is 10 times worse then killing any girl

r-and what are you now, mr.goody good. iam going to do what i want to do

a-then iam going to do something i never planed on doing

kripa who was being held back by some guards looks up to see angad take out a gun and shot raj in the head. for the fist time kripa saw some one get shot and was shocked out of her guts, and just fainted. every one around angad all the guards were shocked at what angad just did.

guard-your the new perfect killer

another guard-mr.khanna are new master

a-spread the word theres a new underworld ruler and that is ANGAD KHANNA

all the guards run from here and there some guards start takeing raj's body to barrie and some got shovles the dig a whole

guard-sir what do we do with the girl

the guard ponits to the fainted kripa

a-i will take her, iam going to my house and tell all the guards that after they burrie raj to spread the word to all of europe gangs that threre's a new leader in town

guard-yes, PERFECT KILLER

angad carries kripa to his car and puts her in there. angad feels kripas forehead and relised that her head was burning hot. angad quickly drives to his house and carries kripa inside. inside the house prithiv was watching tv and dosnt see kripa in angads arm

p-(calm)sup angad

but then prithiv turns around and see kripa in angads arm

p-ANGAD!!!!!

a-prithiv, i some good and bad news

p-tell me bad first

a-kripa is still alive that means iam going to have to keep kripa here with me other wise for sure she will tell her dad that i killed a person and kipnaped her

p-and good news

a-iam now the new perfect killer

p-oh my god.....that means were i mean you are the new ruler of the under world.....THIS IS SO COOL

a-not to cool

p-why is that

a-prithiv, you know i can never kill a person unless i have no choise. i cant kill kripa but i cant keep her with me all my life but i cant let her go because she will tell her father that i kidnaped her and murdered a guy

p-but you saved her life. she cant hate you for that

a-prithiv, we have to keep kripa here untill we can think of some thing

p-i think it would just be easy just to kill her

a-PRITHIV!!!!

p-what, if your going to be called the "perfect killer" mind as well be a killer

a-i can kill people that are strangers and the ones that are pure evil but i just cant kill a person that i saved. if i wanted i could of had her killed 10 time by haveing raj rape her, but i just cant kill a person i just saved

p-i tell you, one day your little soft corner will make you suffer.

a-its a chance iam willing to take....prithiv take kripa to my room, she has a ferver. iam going to call the doctor

p-hello, you cant do that

a-why not

p-she is the minister daughter. news is all over the place that kripa sharma is missing. kripa sharmas wanted sign is all over the place, on the sports channal it shows kripa missing on, mtv kripa sharma missing, even on childrens channal kripa sharma missing. if you call a doctor he will call the police faster then a bullet

a-then what do you want me to do let her die

p-yes

a-PRITHIV!!!!!

p-ok fine, i will take care of her. i studied to be a doctor for one year i think i might be able to treat her

a-great

p-angad take kripa to your room and i will get wet cloth and i need you to go and get the medcine i write down ok

angad quickly takes kripa to his room and lies kripa down on his bed then angad goes down stairs and goes to the pharmcy to get the medcine prithiv wrote down for him. angad then quickly when back home and quickly ran upstairs to were kripa was

a-hows kripa doing

prtihiv looks at angad

p-she is very sick.....pills wont work for kripa she needs shots

a-and were can i get that from

p-did you get the liquid BV14(iam no doctor so iam makeing up the whole BV14 thing so dont go is that realy a medcin becuase i dont know)

a-ya i have it

angad takes it out and gives it to prithiv.

p-put the cold wet cloth over kripas head iam going to be right back with the shots

a-ok

angad pust the wet cloth over kripas head and continues doing so soon prithiv comes back and gives kripa a shot in her arm.

a-are you sure she will be ok

p-lets hope. i mean i only studied to be a doctor for a year untill i quite finding it very boring, but iam sure it will work because i remember realy well studying about over high ferver

a-i hope so

p-iam going down stairs to have a nap iam tired and its late at night

a-ok you go iam going to stay here and watch kripa

p-i realy think it would have been easier just to kill her

angad gives prithiv a mean look

p-ya ya i know, you cant kill some one you saved

angad simles

a-your a nice friend

p-dude so are you....and you better make me your second hand man while being the perfect killer. other wise iam going to kill you and become the perfect killer myself.

angad laughs a bit

a-dont worrie you will be more then just my second hand man your like a bother to me, remember partners for ever.

hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-guess(becuse i dont know either iam makeing it up as i go)

ok i know some one will be thinking that prithiv is going to kill kripa with the whole medcine thing but trust me nothing like that is going to happen. in this part i wanted to show how close angad and prithiv are and how they are like brothers to each other even if they disagree sometimes and this part was also about how angad became the underworld ruler and got the title of PERFECT KILLER. another thing in this part was how angad has to stay close to kripa because he cant killer her or let her go home with out kripa telling sulben what angad did to her
Edited by night girl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow! This is awesome! I love the suspense and EVErYTHING! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
nice part ruhee 😊
contonie soon!!


Hina
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
oh wow that was amazing 👏 👏 loved it! the suspense is amazing 😃 si howz ur bad habbit going so far? of continueing constantly 😛 😆

-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
wow and i agree with ruby! lol!!! that was an awesome part! cont soon yaar! cant wait!!!!!! u showed the relationship perfectly!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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perfect
i love this fan fic
plz contineu soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh my my That were Brilliant parts!!!just loved it awsome job ruhee ......cont sooon


Iqra
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fab part!!!!

AWESOME!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful prts plz cont soon 😛
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hey....just finished th entire game time in one sitting(loved it.) u sure have a great style ... 👏
continue this one soon too...
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