ARHI FF-THE MIRAGE -Thread 3 Chap-37,p 146

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_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

I love ArnavJi !😳

I love Rani Sa !😳

I love Writer Sa !😳

Hope no MU !!🤣

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fatim28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

thx for the update and the clarifications .

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

hey ANU,

SORRY FOR THE DELAY...MISSED OUT ON THE UPDATES...

SO READ LAST PART OF THE MIRAGE N PROLOGUE OF THE PURSUIT TOGETHER...

WHAT CAN I SAY...WHY DID ARNAV HAS TO BREAK HER HEART JUST BEFORE GOING TO USA.?

STUBBORN AS SHE IS KHUSHI HAS TO ALWAYS TO RUN AWAY FROM LOVED ONES...?

BUT THEN THINKING DEEPLY...ARNAV BETTER SAID WHAT HE BELIEVED RATHER THAN LEAVING KHUSHI WITH ANY MISUNDERSTANDINGS...I GUESS KHUSHI HAD TO UNDERSTAND HIM BY WHAT HE FELT FOR HER THRU HIS ACTIONS RATHER THAN MERE WORDS HE USES TO EXPRESS...BECOZ WE ALL KNOW HOW GOOD IS ASR WITH WORDS ESP TO EXPRESS EMOTIONAL STUFF

NOW COMMING TO THE PURSUIT...

I AM SERIOUSLY RUNNING OUT OF WORDS TO PRAISE THE WAY U DESCRIBED KHUSHI'S EMOTIONAL TURMOIL...THE SCENE ...THE MOOD U CRATED FOR ASR ENTRY...TRULY MIND BLOWING...AMAZING, EXQUISITE...DEFINATLY ONE OF THE BEST PEICES OF WORK GET TO READ ON THIS FORUM...

P.S: I CAN UNDERSTAND U MIGHT BE HARDAT WORK FOR UR BLOG...BUT JUST TO REMIND U I STILL DID NOT GET MY REQUEST...

mail id : jyothim29@gmail.com

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

u wrote emotion painn everything beautifully ... amazing prolgue so finally she admit it that she cant live without him ..😊 continue soon

if u dont hav prb pls add me in ur buddy list hav prb sending buddy request

thanx

continue soon

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Anu, I am seriously in love wid your writing ! Really loved the start ! Seriously Im Angry at Khushi more than Arnav ! That girl hav to learn to trust others ! Really loved it ! I love u Arnav for giving this The MIRAGE !

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A_R_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

By chance I came to ur FF 'Mirage' and I'm so glad it happened. U r a wonderful and superb writer. I have spent the last days and also nights in reading ur FF.

It's written so amazingly and with so much details, it feels, that u are live at all the ceremonies happened in the story or the emotional battle between Arnav and Khushi telling it from each pov. And yes it's good u continue with a sequal. Kyun ki picture (story) abhi baakhi hai. 😉

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