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So Rani SAA is angry over the fact tht Arnav is leaving for US...and she had no idea yet...:D Hmm//Rani saa is being possessive and Demanding i Like it..! ;)
Arnav knows...she's angry but still is worried about the fact tht he should be pacifying her...but is busy Calculating how far a progress his wife had made in accepting him :D Sahi hai! :D
And then...tht definitely came as a blow tht Arnav chose to show her what Deepu lives through everyday... I felt tht Khushi's reaction to his state was not completely justified there.I wanted to know what she is feeling now tht she confronts..dEepu has wasted his life on her and yet she never realised it. But otherwise the update was good.
and what the-? the grahm Bell girl is Khushi?
NEW THREAD
Then...LOADS n LOADS of Congratulations to u for New Thread!! I wish u many more such threads! :)
The "Extra-out of story" post was really amazing!! I had my jaw hung open..at the idea with which u wrote about the whole of train Journey. Really beautiful! thanx to u Di..for mentioning this "TT GIRL" there! :)
CH- 32/3
the shock, confusion, jealousy and possessiveness..all were clearly visible as u had etched them on the face of Raja Sa...As he learns avout the GRAHM Girl being Khushi only.
I liked the way u wrote how Arnav was not able to comprehend the idea tht all the while..the only woman deepu had loved is Khushi. Especially the thought tht he still continues to love her and plans to do so as fiercly as ever...this was best of the chapter.
still...this man, RAja Sa doesn not want to accept tht he does love her and is keen on pushing it off as responsibilities and duties.
but what the? Khushi heard it all? OMG!! but her anger is justified. but then again is it? She herself had wanted to push him away...and now she had a good excuse to push him furthur. still can't do it.
Anjali and shyam met an accident. Is tht Shikhar's doing? i m guessing it was. :(
The pride chin wanted to go to Ranpur...but he doesn't want her to go...but she had left...Ohh! this is so gonna bring another fight..still, I m holding on tighter ;)
Pursuit Prologue...
The Rani Saa had quit all..the food, the sleep...every activity sh'e expected to do. her dishelved state...threatens to even to Buaji to not disturb her and all...A really nice representation of her heart's longings.
The belief of mirage tht Arnav was here...and in each of those mirages looking upto him and her oasis in him...again a striking representation.
Her belief tht He finally gave up on her..well...Rani Saa still has to Learn tht what Arnav loves...he can never give themup...becz whenever he had loved...he had loved with all his heart. and nobody gives away his Heart.
but I wonder why was there delay by one week? why didn't arnav comebk to meet her the same day as he landed?
However, her statement Arnavji aap aa gye..wow...tht definitely tells her earnestness to see him again.. tht clearly says how much she misses him..and how much she want to be a part of him.
Beautifully written.!
I m assuming tht this time it was no trick of her mind..and tht Arnav was truly there... and if he was then..Arrgghhh DI...then why did u leave at tht cliffhanger?? :X
so m done with posting with reviews for all missed chapters and now heading to write the promised review! ;)
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