Geet SS: Revenge of a DAMSEL LAST part pg 74 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
THANKS FOR THE DOUBLE UPDATES
GEET THINKS SO WRONG OF MAAN AND HURT HIM SO MUCH
AND HE LASHED OUT AT HER IN ANGER

PARI HAS GONE TO DEV'S ROOM - WILL THE TRUTH BE OUT
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
Thanks for double updates
waiting for more updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
both parts were mindblowing
loved them
waiting for next part eagerly
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates
geet restless thinking about dev
maan kissed geet
dadi telling about maan's nature to geet
maan confessed his love for geet
finally geet knowing the truth
eargely waiitng for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ofmg maan ka gusa..awsome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 14
nice part...
Geet is changing from her motive slowly...
Pari is cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 15
nice part...
finally the truth is gonna come out?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for double dhamaka
precap is worth w8ing
n maan is angry
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Posted: 12 years ago


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NOTE:I have never written anything Emotional 😛 i suck at it..But this is the part i have tried hard to write..This is a bit emotional i want ur reviews on this emotional part. .Each charcters act willl be justified in the next part of this chapter😲 😲 😲

PART 16

Geet enterd dev's room and stood frozen..There pari was standing on his bed and looking at the photo of Dev naintara's marg which was adorning the wall.Geet couldn't believe that at all..She moved further inside the room to see the wall covered with naintara''s picture taken at different times..She stood there frozen..Now she understood dev is in love with naintara yet she has to confirm it..

Pari seeing geet jumped into her arms and asked geet "Massi mumma and papa..Look they are beautiful haina??But see they are too poor am not there in the pic"She said making a sad face..

Geet was not able to utter anything.her world had stood still...all that she could do was to nod the head..She then asked pari to not say anything to dadi and exited the room..Still she needs to clear her doubt..

When once they are out pari said bye to dadi and went out to play in lawn before she goes to her house..

"Dadi whose photo was there in dev sir's room??"Geet asked to clear her doubt..

Dadi looked at geet for a while and said "Dev's wife's photo..She is no more that's why he never allows anyone in his room.he don't want anyone to even see their happiness that was crumpled and the dry life he is having now.."Geet felt the land skip away from her feet..

Dadi shook her and asked "What happened geet??"

"Kkuch kuch nahi dadi..Now I need to go..Will meet you soon with a surprise dadi " saying this she crushed her in hug and flew away as fast as she could with a big smile'

Dadi for a minute couldnot understand whats happening around her..She had seen geet smile whole heartedly for the first time in these days.She found her so happy today but couldn't understand any reason of her sudden happenings..

Maan calmed himself after his outburst..He felt sorry to scream at her that way..He felt bad to burden her more with those words..He knew she is really upset over some issues he should not have bursted at her and that too after that night behavior everygirl would think of him in such way only..Now he should apologize her and say his love to her in a proper way so that she could open up herself to him..He knew where she must be..Either she must be in KM or started with pari to her house..He would check on Km first ..thinking on this he started making his way to KM..

Geet was really happy with the outcomes..Now no more of her stupid revenge..Going in khurans's car heading towards her house she kept thinking how their life gonna change in sometime..She would say the happy news to her sis ,will ask sry to her dev jiju for thinking so wrong about him and to plan a revenge which she very well knew cant do it and then Maan.

Her lips curved into a smile thinking just his name..She was actually hurt by his words but she felt very bad to use those cheap comments on him..She knew he will not use her such was nor those was his motive but hering him say I don't wan't responsibility made her snap on him and all the frustration turned into anger..For heaven sake being a girl she has taken up the responsibility of 3 people who never bother on her but whirl around on their world and their sorrow..Being a man why cant he take up the responsibility ..

The words he spoke made her realize the position of her in his heart..The eyes of him clearly said how much he was in love and the pain her mere word caused him..She knew somehow that he was just carried away that night and would not have done anything which she will not be ready to accept..Once everything sorts out she would confess him and take shelter in his heart..Then they both would sit and laugh at the crazy outburst that has happened in the office..They will lead a life that none of the lovers would lead'By his love she would get back to the happy world once she existed..He would give her all the love she has lost in the past years 'She would completely relay on him in emptying her heart about the pain she has undergone these years standing alone to balance her family..

With these dreams clouding her mind she forgot what she must do' it was the driver's voice that disturbed her..

"Madam where should I go??"

"One minute " saying this she called her sister to know where she is..After talking with her she said "Bhaiya u go to railway station and drop me there.."

"Par madam dadi asked u to drop u in home"

"Haan bhaiya but my sister is coming ill go home with her"

Saying this she tried to call dev to say that naintara is alive and she is her sister but still dev didn't switch on his Mobile so she left a message saying

Jiju,Naintara didu is alive..Am sry for my stupidness ..will say everything in detail when we meet by chotti(Geet)..

Now the job in her hand is to burst this news to her didu and everything would be at place..She happily came to the railway station with pari..Pari was really confused by her maasi's behavior..She seemed to be in too good mood..

Maan on the other hand reached Km and met with dadi who was in the lawn sitting confused with geet behavior..Maan got down and Dadi said what happened ..He was confused but somewhere in his heart a restlessness creased up without his knowledge..He knew something big is going to happen..He went towards his car to meet geet in her house but saw the driver who took geet with him and from him he gathered the information that geet is in railway station waiting for her sister..

Train came to the platform after half hour..As soon naintara got down geet rushed to her and crushed her in a hug..Naintara after knowing that Dev has searched for her in village was actually angry on geet for bringing them to Mumbai selling their house..it was her thought that if she had been in her native she could have met with dev..

"Kya hua geet" she asked checking her luggages getting away from her hug..

Geet smiled at beeji and naintara with teras in her eyes..

"Dev jiju" she could say only this much and naintara grabbed her by shoulders

"Chotti???Say me what happened to him??" she asked in a hurried tone..Beeji was looking at her expectantly..

"Didu cool am coming from his house only and he is thinking ur dead and he is heads over heels in love with you" geet said happily..

"Chotti say me everything please" naintara urged her holding her tightly as if her entire life depends on this..

Then geet said everything how she has collected info on dev and joined his office her plan to take revenge and them going to native she was forced to stay in KM and till the way she discovered the truth..

"Come didu lets go to Km" she said on completeing everything and took hold of her sisters hand pulling her towards the exit...

"Wow wow wow what a plan miss.handa" maan came from behind her clapping his hands and rage in his eyes...Maan reached railway station and witnessed geet hugging someone and was about to reach them when he heard his brother name followed by the entire truth..

"I never expected this from you out of all' you step so low..Here am following you from KC to apologise you and you played with my emotions..You freaking girl..You B****'.How could you even think to play a silly game without knowing the truth .i never expected this from you..You were thinking to make me fall for you and dump me..you cheapo..How could you do this to your sister??How could you geet ahan say me???" maan screamed jerking her by shoulders..

Geet was startled to see maan there.."maan listen'." She said tryinh to get hold of his hands..But she was cut off by his words

"Ya now I know your intentions after staying at KM for days together and enjoying the luxury you want to make a permanenet entry over there so that now you said the truth to bhabhi otherwise you wouldn't have revealed about my brother..You gold digger 'Your are after my money..So cheap of you..Now I understand why you said those words back to me in kc..Why am I talking with you..WHO ARE YOU to me..All I want to do now is take my bhabhi and pari back home to my brother.."

Geet closed her ears unable to believe those words coming from Maan..He was yelling at her and the whole crowd stood there watching them..

Geet turned towards her sister "didu u say me na am not such way.." she pleaded with the tears..But before she could say anything naintara slapped her

"Just SHUT UP geet..no more words..you know from the strat that dev is alive and still u didn't say me..you hiden it from me..how could you even think of some revenge when u know the reason of my living is dev..Even after coming here I asked u about dev but you didn't say me anything..How could you?Now only I can read your intentions..Afterall your after money nah'?" Naintara bursted out without thinking of the accusations she is placing on her sister..

"Bhabhi don't waste your time here talking to her.. chalo lets go to KM and meet with bhai.."Saying this he took pari in his arms and went towards his car..

Geet took hold of her sister hands her tears flowing non stop unable to believe its her sister who said those words.. but naintara not even sparing a glance towards Geet rushed out following maan to see dev..

Geet glanced towards beeji who was standing still without supporting her.. She moved towards her beeji and was about to hug her "DON'T TOUCH ME geet I never thought you could be this way..After seeing your didu suffer these days you have hidden the most important information from her.." saying this she too followed her where geet slumped to the ground'


Do leave ur review on this part fingers crossed 😭 😭 I was actually having tears after doing this part but i don whether u ppl feklt that much emotional😲


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Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
buk paniyachu...

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definetly i dnt expect such an update frm u...u kno was wit tears..aftr finishing up thz update tht too last paragh...thz is nt fair at all...geet felt very bad ...wi no one in her side...wen ll thz get solved...waiting fr next update...one side happie fr naintara nd dev..othr sise feeling bad fr maneet :-(:-(:'(:'(:'(
Edited by satana - 12 years ago

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