Geet SS: Revenge of a DAMSEL LAST part pg 74 - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago
Felt sorry for geet
Hope Maan understand her soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 16
nice...
OMG poor Geet...
how could they do this to her?
and Naina shes a fool...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago



Geet deserves this all...

she is the one who plotted everything on her own POV...

not caring what others want...who gave her right to decide about Naintara and Dev...if she has any misunderstanding then she should have told everything about Dev and his family to Naintara and then coming face to face they can decide what they want...if really Dev is betraying NT then he could have told in tehir face...why will he fear them...but if not then Naintara must have been living happily with her family...yes she loved her sister but love don't give u right to decide about other's life and relations...

now she is all alone...no body with her...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n shocking update! Maan hears n is angry! NT n Beeji nw hate Geet! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful as well as very emotional update.

Geet getting to know how much Dev luvs
Nt. Very happy now as she will re unite then.

Dadima finding her behavior strange.
Telling the truth to Nt.
Everyone misunderstands her n
Maan ne usko accuse bhi kiya. Usko
Aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.
Broke Geet's heart.

Nt is very selfish. None really cared for
Her till now in her house so how can
They support her.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjukta19

Srry bt after this update I hate maan and nayantara.how could they accuse her without knwing the proper reasn.I want geet to leave them and maan to suffr minimum 6 month fr his stupid behaviour towards geet.nice update.cnt sn


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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART 17

Geet glanced towards beeji who was standing still without supporting her.. She moved towards her beeji and was about to hug her "DON'T TOUCH ME geet I never thought you could be this way..After seeing your didu suffer these days you have hidden the most important information from her.." saying this she too followed her where geet slumped to the ground'

Naintara and beeji followed Maan and got into his car..Maan drove towards KM..He said Naintara how much his bhai suffered after hearing from the neighbous that people in the house was dead and his bhai asuuming that naintara is dead..

Whereas naintara said him how they came to Mumbai and from there to delhi..and she also added how she was depressed and had undergone a treatment with psychartist and it was just now she recovered from the depression..

Maan on the way to Km called dadi and informed everything that has happened in a short ofcourse editing done in part of geet..She was happy to get her elder bahu in KM..Maan kept trying to dev but it came busy..On the other hand after reading the text from Geet dev was on cloud nine and couldn't believe anything..HE tried calling geet again and again but she wasn't attending the call..

Maan's car entered KM and naintara was welcomed in after arti..Dadi was happy to see her elder bahu and pari 'Unusually pari seemed so quiet and sitting secluded..Naintara said what all happened how maan got her here again no word about geet to dadi..

Dev enterd the mansion redialing geet's number and was stunned to see naintara and pari there..His brain now registered pari is indeed his daughter..HE ran and hugged NT..elders had a smile in their face and maan was trying to talk with pari realizing he is her chacahu..Happy tears for his brother in his eyes..

After the stry being repeated to Dev about their missing dev asked

"Where is geet dear??She left me a message"

Dadi too said "Ya now I understand why that pagali hugged me after seeing ur photo in room and said I will have a surprise in few hours..Waise where Is she??"

"Is she packing things in your house??She is right under my nose but I didn't recognize her at all.She asked me sry in the message dono why must speak with her" dev said rejoicing having his love beside him..

"Maan u go and help her with packing"

Seeing everyone quiet dev and dadi was worried

"Maan say me what happened to geet??"

"I'll say dev..She betrayed me" naintara said atlast

"What??" dev asked shocked..

Naintara explained what has happened in the railway station and how they had slapped her for her mistake..

Dev instantly stood up from her and moved away" Donnt really say me you have done that to the poor soul??" he asked shaking maan

"Yes bhai indeed I have done that..She is not a poor soul but she is a freaking B***"

Maan cheeks burned by the intensity of the slap..he looked up to see fuming Dev stand in front of him with his raised hands to slam him once again..

"Naintara did you say that she betrayed you??How come you can say that?? All that she did was helping u and our kid to have a proper life and you are blaming her..How could you do this ??OMG I really cant believe u did that to her..U fools ..Can't u think once straight..Am the one who did the mistake..You have known me only for 6 months at max and u still believed me for these many years but the one who born with u and grown up with you..you didn't believe her..I made the mistake without revealing the truth..i made the mistake without bringing u to KM..I made the mistake by not saying you before Iam going to abroad..i made the mistake by not giving you my address I made mistake by not giving u my permanent number.I made these much mistakes and u still believed me and u lost into depression but choti she was so small to take up the responsibility but yet she had searched herself a job and treated u made pari grow up with good values and took care of ur beeji but all u could do is blame her.Sorry to say this but this is not the girl whom I loved..She was the one who loved her sister and took care of her like a mother but the person standing me before is selfish soul who only care about herself..Do you think after that much u have undergone just because of my absence ,choti would come and hand u over to me..You yourself said that she wanted to make sure that it was u I was married to and she wanted to confirm tht I ws still in love with you..But you dont take those words into mind..It was because of the truth that she knew me for past 20 days and know about my whereabouts and yet she had nt said u made her slap at her..Do you know something our pari loves her more than she loves you..Its all because of you..You never ever cared about anyone after my absecnce..but she was always tending to you and pari and beeji..Am really ashmed of u three"

All the while dadi was standing still unable to digest the fact that the innocent girl was accused beyond any limit..

Dev turned towards maan and took hold of his shirt "Did I raise you this way???I have given u all comforts cant u once think straight'U accused her as gold digger ..Ur mouth will rot..Do you evn know how much she would have suffered..You was angry on her because you think she used u..But I would rather say u was using her all the while shamelessly flirting with her...Dont ever name the feeling u have for her is love..If u have truly loved her you wouldn't have done that..Do you think she has really having an intention to take a revenge on you..If that was so she wouldn't have made you this much professional where you have signed a deal for crores..She would have made u a useless guy who wander in pub after taking shots and stots of alchol...But all she was doing for you was to make u a good professional..Did she at any time said she was in love with you to betray u..Did she say that she is gonna enjoy the luxury in KM..it was u n me who forced her to stay here..

Say me maan if Our meera was in Naintara situation being a brother would not u think twice and thrice before giving her to the guy by whom she was left behind'Being a bro wouldn't u kill him for abonding her..Then choti also done the same thing..And u accused her as b****'.I thought u as my son and took care of u..now am feeling ashamed even to say u r my brother..How come she knew tha I ws thinking naintara to be dead..none of the people know who my real wife his they wer thinking that I married some forginer when I was abroad so its obvious for choti to think I betrayed her sister.."

Maan ,beeji and naintara now understood their fault..Pari stood up and came towards dev and hugged his legs.."papa all bad..They beat and scold massi..i want her" she said with tears in her eyes..

"Sorry bhai it was in my anger that my bro didn't deserve his happiness because of her I shouted at her..Now I want her back..Bhai its true that I love her.I love her with all my heart..Am gonna get her back bhai.."

Maan saying this went out to search for her..

"Am sry dev" both naintara and beeji apologized..

"I don't need apologises its to geet u need to apolgise..Have pari with u ill go and come with geet" saying this he went out..

Geet who was very numb after hearing the accusations couldn't fathom what life has in store for her..Her tears were flowing continuously..

She stood up and moved out of railway station in random direction where her steps were taking her..

"Just SHUT UP geet..no more words.. Now only I can read your intentions..Afterall your after money nah'?"

"Bhabhi don't waste your time here talking to her"

"DON'T TOUCH ME geet I never thought you could be this way."

"You freaking girl..You B****'...You were thinking to make me fall for you and dump me..you cheapo"

"You gold digger 'Your are after my money..So cheap of you..Now I understand why you said those words back to me in kc..Why am I talking with you..WHO ARE YOU to me"

Only she could hear these words repeatedly..She now knew that she is a extra wastage in this world..no one really loved here..Everyone was being selfish around her..But she was blindly in love with them..She felt greatly humiliated..Tears were flowing down..Her legs took her somewhere..

Maan and dev after searching her in her house and not finding her there went to railways station..

Maan was asking the passerbye people about geet..

"Ya ya the girl who you accused as gold diggr and b*** She just walked out crying after u ppl went " a fellow said..

Maan was about to punch him hard on face but dev pulled him and went out.Maan's blood was boiling in anger to hear someone accuse geet by those words but he ws the one who said those words to her..How much she would have felt'

Maan and dev was driving and stopped due to a traffic signal..Maan was cursing himself for saying those words.when he turned towards his window side he saw a lone figure walking aimlessly crossing the road and he recognized it to be geet..Before he could blink his eyes she has been thrown across after hit by a truck.

Maan scremed "GEET"



PRECAP:Geet in hospital😲


NOTE :PPl I was overwhelmed by ur responses..But those who asked me why this track is that i dont want geet to be a normal heroine where she would accept all words and turn to be a gud girl..I wanted her to givethem the medicine she has received..And I want maan to woo her back..This stry will have a happy ending this emotinal genre would wrap up by next update..


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Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
dev and dadi are superb love them sorry how can I forget pari she is such a cutie pie
three idiots😡

Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update... dev... too good... those 3 idiots deserved all tht...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsme update.I love dev and dadi's charecter more than maan and nayantara.New track is suparb.I hope maan suffer a big time.plz sn.

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