Geet SS: Revenge of a DAMSEL LAST part pg 74 - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




the question nagging me is why Beeji and Naintara are rude towards Geet...Beeji also don't care much about Geet and more cared for Naintara...is there any reason...

so Dev meet Pari...Maan is head over heels in love with Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


NO spl reasons for it but when a person is emo stressed n our home care drift towards them han others ..THis is the reason naintara is emotional drained so beeji take care of her..
n thanks😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyfanofdsdv

loved the update

loved that dev felt an instant attraction to dev
cant wait to see maan and geets love story progress
hopefully pari is ok
will the hospitalization lead to maan and dev finding out the truth
can't wait for the next update

thanks a lot dear😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydream


Beautiful update.

Nowadays no one really cares for
Geet... But why
Aww Pari is d only one who cares..
Loved d way she was showing her
Concern.

Pari at office.. ... She stole both
Dev's n Maan's heart

Precap is scary.. I think Dev will
Help them.

I hope wid the help of Pari, Dev
Comes to know abt d truth.


thanks a lot fr ur detail comment dear😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 11
nice part...
oh Pari is so nice...
why are NT and Beeji behaving like this?
cont soon dear...

thanks di😆
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Posted: 12 years ago



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PART 12

Dev bent down shook hands with her and said "am dev..nice to meet you..friends??"

"Friends.." she said smiling..

Geet was relived that pari didn't say her full name..

"this is bad am hurt'what about me angel??am I not ur friend ?" maan asked beding towards pari..

She smiled and said "u r also my friend.."

Geet felt tears seeing the bond between khurans and pari how she would have been happy if this revenge is not there..

She knew its not time for her tears..She had lost the love from her sis .her sis no more care for anyone the one thing she dwell is in her past and her marriage life with dev its all because of him'.

"par what should I call you??" pari asked in her sweeyt tone..

Dev and maan thought for a while..

Maan said"what do you call her??" pointing towards geet..

"She is my sweet maasi" pari said giving a chuckle..

Dev and maan smiled at this sweet liltle girl's innocence..geet was all mum throughout..

"Then am your sweet massad"

Dev let out a chuckle and held Pari in his arms..

"Wow o its shhooo difficult nah" she said with a frown..

"Acha then call me chachu " maan said winking at geet..

Geet was restless seeing Maan's advancement towards pari and bonding of father daughter duo..She was more shocked when maan asked pari to call her chachu...

"Done ill call u chachu but how can I call u??"

She asked with a doubt towards dev..

Mann thought fr a while and said "Call him bade papa..If am ur chachu he is ur bade papa nah??"

"But that's sooo looong ill call him papa.."

All three were rooted to the spot..Geet was finding it difficult' Maan was worried thinking of dev's reaction seeing him smile and kiss pari's cheeks he thanked his stars which has given dev a happy moment in his lfe..

"Ok pari u can call me papa..Waise what ur papa do??" Dev asked..

"Didu is a single mom " geet instantly replied Dev and maan became quiet with it..They felt bad on bringing that topic..Dev had no heart to leave this sweet bundle..

Maan saw the sadness in Geet's eyes..he felt bad for her..

Dev got a call that the delegates had arrived and waiting for him in the conference hall so he excused himself said bye to pari and went to his floor..

Pari was playing in the corridor '

Seeing geet quiet and thoughtful made maan worry ..

"Acha so pari ki masi nah?? From now on she will call u chachi because am her chachu ryt?" he said advancing towards geet

"Maan have u lost ur mind or what??she is just a baby??n ur saying her these things..see I don't have any ideas towards u.."

"Haaa achaa no idea towards me I could see that in your eyes geet don't ever try to deny the fact that I affect you..Why were you jealous on that day when I called dadi sexy??haan bolo???.What still more u need from me??cant u see that am so much into you??" he stated the known fact he was so restless seeing her deny his love

Geet was happy to hear those words from him..her heart was thumping heavily but she felt some loneliness and dark part within her saying not to let her emotions affect her revenge..It was time to take the revenge..but she knew she is in a stage that she couldnot take it..Its better for her to leave delhi and go to Mumbai soon before he proposes and finds out that she is truly in love with him..

She was about to reply back when she saw pari is not anywhere around..She pushed maan back who was so close to her and started screaming for her "Pari pari"

Maan instantly got alasrmed and ran behind geet to search for pari..

They both searched the entire floor and pari was not there..by now geet's tears found its way to her cheeks..pari is like her treasure her baby how can she be so careless with a 3 n half year baby..She should have been careful..

Maan instantly called dev and informed.. dev made his securities search everywhere but they couldn't find her anywhere in the building..It was when maan tried for the lift to get into Dev's floor he saw that the lift was jammed between two floors..

He tried to open it to add to his tension geet was constantly muttering curses for herself..

"am careless"

"am fit for nothing"

And it was going on..

"WILL YOU KEEP QUIET FOR A WHILE" he shouted at her and called electricians who worked on the lift and it opened..

Maan and geet ran downwards to see Dev carrying unconscious pari and running into parking lot..Maan went ahead of him and strated the car meanwhile dev gave pari to geet and dialed hospital '

Geet was numb to see pari unconsicious the pure little soul is laying lifeless because of her carelessness..

The doctors started examining pari and said she was unconscious because of shock and they have given sedatives to her and said pari would gain conscious soon..

Maan and dev sighed a relief..

A minute of love crept up in her life and she is seeing the result of it..She doesn't want her jiji or pari to get more stressed with dev and his family.Within a week they will return from hoshaipur and she is gonna vacate delhi and get settled in Mumbai again..

But she had a good feeling seeing dev care for pari..What if he still loves her didu then everyone can settle happily in her ..She decided what she needs to do..


precap:REVENGE OR NO REVENGE😲 😲 😲


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Posted: 12 years ago
dddooodddrrrhhhjjj...hw sweet bonding does pari shares wit khuranas..reali u r indeed gu in ryting sentimental stories too dear...today definetly i shd doo agree wit it...u hav done ure best...just cute wit pari da...bt :-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(:-(...wat hapnd to her da...wi tht shock ...ll u revela it in next episode...nd plz i dnt want revenge babe...let geet cum to kno abt all th truth...its obvious she loves maan truely no doubt...she can never nd ever chaet him da...waiting uppp
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part

loved it

chachu and papa so much care about pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago


very interesting update...

hope Geet gets some brain that she try to go into depth of the matter and know reality that dev never cheated Naintara...and she should get to know the truth before doing something stupid...

how can a person ignore other person behavior...she is clearly seeing Dev behaving with everybody...how can such a person not care about his own daughter and wife...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
part 12
nice part...
OMG how did she get there?
and how did the lift move?
cont soon dear...

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