ArHi FF! Gravity - Thread 1 - [Completed] - Page 109

Wicked twist!!! Wonder how Arnav is going to react

A big sorry for commenting this late.i'll b MIA for sometime now.great updates.the interlude just touched my heart.so far there will be people like Garima and Shashi on earth's face,world is not that a place to live in.

currently at chap 12 and am marvelled at the way you write.I have a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes at their pain.Arnav's,khushi's,payal's and everyone's pain.*sniff* great job !!

"You always had a choice Khushi. You chose not to trust anyone. Actually, you never believed that someone else can have a perspective clearer than you and come up with a solution - a better one with much less collateral damage. But you didn't. So, please, stop blaming me for the choice you didn't make."

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

"You always had a choice Khushi. You chose not to trust anyone. Actually, you never believed that someone else can have a perspective clearer than you and come up with a solution - a better one with much less collateral damage. But you didn't. So, please, stop blaming me for the choice you didn't make."

That statement is so true and can be placed anywhere and in any person context.

You know, RB, even if I say I wish I had been in it from the beginning, I know it will not be true because angst stories which are the vision of the writer of whose imagination I don't have even 0.00001%, I invariably seem to touch it only after it is over because I don't seem to have the courage to wait for which way it is going to turn.

So thank you so much for allowing readers like me also to read after the journey is totally complete without having contributed any encouragement during the process.

It is going fab. But then your writing really makes the mind wander into the crevices of our own mind and forces us to think of our own viewpoint and whether the reasoning given by you is acceptable to us or not. I don't even know if I am making sense.

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Originally posted by: Japonica

You make perfect sense, Usha! Very well said! HI after ages, just chance that I saw your post-🤗

This is such an amazing FF. Can't stop reading! You are doing a wonderful job. Love your writing.

i dont know how i reached this story but when i did...i read this story in one go and trust me this is amazing..

the emotions.. the insecurities...the problems... their love and the end... wow...

this is a wonderful story...

" I will probably wake up in the middle of the night, take the typed story out and scathingly scratch out the part where the two people in love die and rewrite the story with a happy ending. May be then, I will miss you less."

OMG! I am so lucky to have stumbled upon this masterpiece. Do write a book. And when you do, I so hope that I stumble upon it by chance and read another awesome heart-wrenching line. That will be the day I'll realize no amount of cherishing this was over the top. ❤️🤗

Read it in 1 go
Nice story