An ArHi SS: Scandalous *Thread One*

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#771

nooo...m dying to read da nxt update...
sooo zabardast...
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the ring scene was perfect dear...the way it should hv been...
i jxt love ur arnav...so calculative n able to elicit the right response from khushi...
brilliant part...
continue soon
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thnxxx 4 da pm...

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SStephy

@SStephy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#772

I liked how you compared Khushi's feelings during the almost kiss with the cliff edge imagery.

The ring scene was nice... Arnav being all stubborn and insensitive with his mind working to achieve one thing- Khushi. And Khushi being conflicted between her unknown attraction for Arnav and her obligation towards her engagement with Shyam.

The stars bringing solace to Arnav but not able to calm Khushi...was a nice touch!!

Aah!! So Arnav hears Shyam's full name... wonder whether this will bring out any significant change to the current situation.

And the injections... insulin injections, by any chance?

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#773

The battle of egos has started. Bring it on, I say! ;) ... And this Arnav of yours is no doubt over-bearing and arrogant, but he's also kind of sexy ( not because of the arrogance, but despite that). I really don't know why I feel this way... And don't worry about your less frequent updates, because you're more than making up for it with your action-filled and satisfactorily long updates. I'm loooving it! :D

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#774

fantastic update...loving the fireworks between arhi ..wonder if arnav knws shaym...continue soon...

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#775

WOW WOW WOW WOW

AMAZING UPDATE! :D

LOVED it.

I hope this Shyam Manohar Jha is dealt with SOON.

Can't wait to see Arnav and Khushi together.. :P

Though I know its quite oing before we reach there..but still :)

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#776

Loved the update ! I love the length of the chapters from this SS. Its reasonably long.

As for ASR, i know he is getting hate from the readers. But i understand that he has grown to be a guy who gets everything he wants. Through looks, money and power.🤢 So i guess thats why he is very forceful. Plus, he feels strongly for her.

His instincts are driving him nuts! 😆

As for Khushi, she is one confused soul. At one point, when she was shouting at him, she sounded like she will accept Shyam for who he is and not give Arnav a chance.But the way she flusters around Arnav, it is a diff story. 😳

Anyways, i loved the ending. You're always great in keeping suspense. 😃

Edited by selcouth-names - 12 years ago

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#777

since we love your stories you owe as a good story which you do every time beyond that you owe nothing !

fantastic update!arnav with his magnitude of emotions doesn't know where is he headed ,what to do with the girl he met by chance who made herself his agenda ...

interesting play of situations all through...so does this shyam manohar jha sound familiar to arnav as in the serial or is it something else!

very eager to read the next update already!