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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Awww...ha nahi bolna to puchha kyu? Lolzzz...cont soon


i will updated but not sure...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey khushi ji...sry for the late commnts...
It wz a lovely update...
Virat z really smart huh...luv hw he gt Maanviz no..
But the precap wz quite emotional...though m very much luving ths Hard to catch me Game by Maanvi, it hrts to c virat so sad...
Story z gettin really interestin
Plzz cont soon n thnx a looot fo the pm!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-12
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Maanvi looked at him who gave her warning look..she scared what happen if he knew abt her lie..but she didn't want to saw him her fear on her face..
M-i have my car..so don't worry..
V-passinotly-mujhe Dekhne me itni kho gai ho ki ye dekh nahi pa rahi ho ki hum tumhari car me hi ja rahe hai..he indicate with his eyebrows..smirked
maanvi looked down nd realise that he was right..
M-woh..woh mujhe pata hai..main bas ye kahe rahi hu ki main khud ja sakti hu..she said without looking at him nd moved towards her sided driving seat door nd opened..
Virat shut car door angrily nd walked towards her side..maanvi abt to sit on driving seat virat held her wrist nd pulled her out..maanvi surprisely looked at him..
M-virat..
Bt he ignore her nd pulled her away from car nd closed the door..he dragged her towards other side nd forcefully make her sit in passenger seat..
V-angrily-don't fagot..who i m..bol diya ki main chhod deta hu..to bol diya..
Maanvi cannot say a word..what the problem with him..why didn't he understand that now nothing happen in between them..he closed the door forcefully nd moved towards driving sit nd sit inside the car..
V-looking front-apni seatbelt lagalo warna woh bhi mujhe lagani hogi..with fixing his seatbelt..
Maanvi fixed her seatbelt..he shook his head nd starts the car..he drove the car out from hotel..
V-driving-ab main koi jin to hu nahi ki tumhare ghar ka rasta apne aap pata chal jayega so speak up..kha nahi jaunga..he said ruddly
m-gave him cute angry look-in mind-thodi Der pahele to badi badi mar raha tha..
V-galiya baad me dena pahele rasta batao varna viren wait karta rahe jayega..
M-looked away-tum pahele use mera husband kahete the aur ab viren kyu?
V-smirked-kyu ki ab mujhe yakin ho gaya hai ki woh jyada din tak tumhara husband nahi rahene vala..
Maanvi scared..
M-imigeatly-tum asa kuch nahi karoge..looked at him worriedly..
V-stoped the car-looked at her-main kuch bhi nahi karunga..smile evily
m-confuse with his smile-tum chahte kya ho?
V-smile nd raised his eyebrows..
Maanvi understand what that means..
M-helpless-virat..kyu kar rahe ho ye sab?..kyu nahi samaj rahe ki humare raste alag alag hai..
V-passinotly-alag alag hona hota to har bar bar hum yu nahi milte..aur don't worry Maine kaha na main viren ko touch bhi nahi karunga..
M-tum pagal ho..
V-tumhare liye..nd again starts the car..
M-looked away..
V-ab jaldi se bataogi ki kaha jana hai ya mere saath chalogi..jaha main le jau..he said lovingly with instance tone..
Maanvi imigeatly looked at him..
V-jaldi sochlo varna ye n ho ki kal sab Hume dhundhte hi rahe jaye..nd smiled
M-scared but manage to say-nahi..
V-smiled-so gave ur guidance..
M-first take left...
Nd she saw him the way for her house..in whole journey she thought abt his words nd what happen next in her life..she scared with his intention..for now he knew her phone number..her friends..her office work nd now he abt to knew her house address..what happen when he knew that she lies to him..already his changing behavior nd madness make her confuse nd scare..
Here virat was thanking god to bring her again his life..he also didn't knew why he everytime behaved different why he cannot believe in her truth..he saw her husband nd baby by his own eyes then why his heart says no for believing on that..he was still same virat who cannot successful to express his feeling to right way..he didn't knew how to do that..nd he never gave attention on this..bcz he didn't want to anyone understand him..instead of her..every time when he try to be a normal he feel she going to away from her..nd then he make everything under his way..he want her back..no matter how..he want to go back in past..before 4 years..nd make her own..he didn't want to believe in that she can love someone else..she can go near to someone..she cannot split from him..his heart does not make him believe on this stuff..his heart everytime saying that she comes on earth for him...just for him..he want to knew abt that last 4 years but he didn't knew how..
Maanvi looking out from window when suddenly he stopped the car..maanvi realize that they reached at her apartment..she still scared abt future..she even not looked at him turned to door side nd opened it..she abt to come out from car when she heared him..
V-looking passinotly towards steering-tum usse pyar karti ho?
Maanvi imigeatly turned nd feel some pain in his voice..
He feel something killing inside him when he asked her..
Maanvi saw seriousness on his face..
M-gulped..woh..main..main..
She try to say when she cut by him..
V-tighted his grip on steering-passinotly nd also possasivly-plz..haa mat bolna..
Maanvi shocked to hear this..in mind-jab janna nahi hai to puchha kyu?
V-looked at her-confuse mat ho..bas tumhara reaction janna tha..smile..jo maine Jan liya..
M-just starring at him..but she cannot tolerate his passinote gaze on her..she looked away..
V-smirked nd moved his gaze..
She come out from car nd he also come out..
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continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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okey guys sorry for late update...
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i changed the precap little bcz some readers didn't want to broken virat in this time... So i changed in updat..
Hope u like...
Precap after some time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
khushi khushi mein jhooome jarahi hun 😉
am first...

amazing update ...full of virman 👏⭐️⭐️

virat's feeling and emotions ...
am sure for manvi he will change himself ...
loves her alott 😊

and manvi bechari to buri phasi ...
bt i hope virat sach jaldi jaan jaye ...😊

and the last part its jstt amazing ⭐️
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey its ur ur first post... Nd i m the lucky that u posted here...
Thanks... Nd i already updated..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alicemath

Hey khushi ji...sry for the late commnts...
It wz a lovely update...
Virat z really smart huh...luv hw he gt Maanviz no..
But the precap wz quite emotional...though m very much luving ths Hard to catch me Game by Maanvi, it hrts to c virat so sad...
Story z gettin really interestin
Plzz cont soon n thnx a looot fo the pm!!! 😊


its okey...
Take ur time for reading...
I will continu soon this time...
Nd i will try to remember to pm u again...
Thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊amazing update waiting for the next part
.jai. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ..😊😊
update soon..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updt...loved their convo frm core...the dialogue was so effective...cont soon

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