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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: eman-khan

uff girl em tu become fan of ur story.. great update.. next update jaldi dy dooo.. n ur doing great in ths story..in luv wth ths insane virat..👏


thank... U...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: avika26

When u vl update next?


in some time...
As my mobile charged...
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Posted: 12 years ago
we are totally ok with tht
Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
All the chapters were amazing.. great job dear...👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-9(b)
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Virat smelling like mad with looking her in front of him nd maanvi damn scared nd shocked..she cannot even want think abt next moment..how can she handle now everything?..her head starts spinning with somany question..but she cannot getting one single answer..other side she heared nisha's mother calling her..
M-just whisper-aap plz use sula dijiyega main baad me baat karti hu nd cut the call..still in shock..
Virat heared her nd come in reality..he thought arti invite her here nd she was talking abt her baby..but still he was happy to see her..like he decided at moment that no matter what happened..he loves her nd he cannot fagot that true atleast in this life..nd only she make his life happy nd beautiful..he abt to say something when suddenly arti come in front of her nd hugged her..
A-ecxitly-hey..maanvi..i m so happy..
Maanvi hugged her back bt still looking at virat..with this virat's smile turned into smirked..nd maanvi moved her gaze from him..but no matter he staring her continusly..he get the reason for his presence in that function..
They broked the hug..
A-happily-maanvi tum yaha kaise?..i mean Maine tumhara number try kiya tha lekin woh fail bata raha tha..tumhe kisne bataya ki meri shadi Delhi me ho rahi hai..
Maanvi get another shock..means arti was yash's future wife..great now she has to handle the situation for another 4 days..she feel her throat drying..
M-woh..main..i mean mujhe..
Just then nisha saw maanvi on door nd rushed towards her..
N-hey maanvi tum aa gai..
All looked at nisha..
She come near to maanvi..
A-hey..tumhara naam nisha hai right?
N-ji mem..
A-confusing-lekin tum maanvi ko kaise janti ho?
Maanvi want to gave answer but in front of him she cannot utter word..
N-woh..aap jis wedding planner ki kal se tarif kar rahi hai woh aur koi nahi yahi hai meri chief..maanvi..
All surprised..specialy virat..so she was not come her by invitation but she was wedding planner..great..so she lived in Delhi with her family nd i m searching her in Mumbai..
A-surprisely-really?..this is great..i m really happy..
Maanvi try to smile..
N-to maanvi-maanvi lekin problem ho gai hai..worriedly
M-kya hua?
N-woh..tujhe to pata hai ki rahul sir ne sangeet ek kawwali group k performance k liye kaha tha lekin humne jis group ko iske liye bulaya tha woh nahi aa raha hai..
M-what?..worriedly..tumne mujhe kyu nahi bataya..ab itni jaldi ek naya singer kaha se arrange hoga..
Maanvi nd nisha get worried..
Virat also get upset to she her worried..
A-ecxitly-hey..don't worry..singer chahiye na..hai na..looking at virat..mera bhai..isse bada singer mil hi nahi sakta..
All looked at virat..but virat only looking at her..
N-aap?
A-bhai..i knew ki aap shadi yo me gana bilkul pasand nahi hai..aur ye to apka zone bhi nahi hai..lekin plz madad kardo..
Maanvi looking at arti..
N-plz..sir..
Virat waiting for maanvi..but he knew she never do that..
V-okey..
A-smile nd hugged him-thank u bhai..
V-looking at maanvi-tumhare liye kuch bhi..he said with passion..
Maanvi looked at him nd saw same passion in his eyes..his one short sentence felt like her heart skipped beating for that moment..nd she moved her gaze..
N-thank u sir..ab Hume under chalna chahiye..
All agreed nd go inside the hall..
Maanvi decided to be a normal otherwise he doubted on her lie nd then...no she didn't want to think abt..
She wet to function meet to rahul nd yash nd there family..nd say sorry to not present in other function..but all understand her problem...

Maanvi make arti sit with yash nd she meet with everyone nd stood near arti bcz arti want..maanvi told nisha to checked other preparations nd take care of guests with help of other workers..but still worried from inside..but she manage to hide her feelings..
Here virat moved towards quwwali group who sitting in front of guests nd of course couple..all waiting for his singing..he steped back towards group nd continusly looking at her but she ignored his gaze..he slowly sit in middle on stage on steps..he smiled little wide nd indicate the musician to start playing..all smiled nd happily start playing their instrument..first they start with full force which make whole atmosphere colourful..then music become slow nd virat closed his eyes with looking at her..
After mint he opened his eyes nd start singling like he sang from his heart..
V-
DIL KO AAYA SUKOON TERE DIDAAR SE..
he sang first line slowly..with looking at her..she imigeatly looked at him..
V-continu..
DIL KO AYA SUKOON TERE DIDAAR SE..
AB NA HONA RUKHSAD APNE DIDAAR SE..(2)
he sang this line passinotly with smile...
Nd maanvi looked at him with surprisely..nd getting nervous..
Other start enjoying her singing...
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continue with this song...
In next part..
Sorry...I have little work so i have to stop..
Next part with virmaan alone scene..
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
avika26 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg nw virat vl find the truth waitng excitdly
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

<font size="4">All the chap<font size="4">ters were amazing.. gre<font size="4">at job dear...👏</font></font></font>


thank u so much..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohhh he again misunderstood...but never mind chalo at least they met...cont soon waiting fr there alone moments...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update.. Virman meeting was superb.. Virat is singing for her.. Wow.. Thanks for updating 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update kushi...really loved...⭐️...so virman finally aamne saamne...will be waiting for next update...😊

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