Mayur SS...Yaadein, part 10 updated on page 28 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome concept Kiran!
loved part 1 and 2...but this SS is a bit confusing
Mayur are married and they have a son Arjun, but then Mayank got married to Arti 😕
i think Nupur is Arti...but how?
looking forward to read more updates
please continue soon, waiting for your pm for next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pm me Next Time !!!!!!!
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Hey Indra I just luv ur SS ❤️ It's really intresting...
I will be waiting for the next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mayank got married t aarti. right? then nupur??????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wao kiran...
u write amazingly...
loved it so far...
do pm me nxt time...
would love to read...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely start ...
cont soon n add me in your pm list
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Hey, loved the starting..
Continue soon and thanks for the link..
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awesome.. thanks for pm..
update soon and dont forget to send me a PM
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Omgg it seems interesting
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Part ' 3

Mamma i want two chocolate ice creams as u promised me, said arjun excitedly

Ok baba granted and lifted arjun in her arms settled him in her lap shushing him..

Now let both of us fresh up first. With in next few minutes Nupur makes Arjun chose what he would like to wear, she took him for bath.. She is telling him cute little stories for which she would keep him occupied till she would soap him nd take him out.. nd to some extent it always works... (guys our arjun wont like bathing). Both are ready and arjun is more excited as he is now going to have two chocolate creams at once.

"Arjun first we will visit temple and then ice cream ok beta.." said nupur

"Ok mamma", arjun jumped into nupur arms with his million dollor smile.

Nupur covered her head with her dupatta nd washed her hands nd feet to step into the temple.. alongwith his arjun in arms. Sitting infront of the idol, she made arjun sit infront of her...she sat on her knees infront of the Idol that was placed there.. a lone tear escaped her eyes when she rewinded all that happened in her life till date..

The only prayer she always did is and was "Please bhagwan, Mere arjun ko hamesha khush rakna. Dont separate arjun from me. I will never ask anything in my life time", tears rolled from her eyes.

Mamma, why are you crying? Arjun said while wiping her tears with his cute little palms. Nupur kissed his both palms lovely and hugged. No beta mamma is not crying. How can she cry today. My little son won rhyming competition so i am so sooo happy and kissed his both cheeks.

Ok now we r going to celebrate with ice creams. She lifted arjun in her arms and made their way to his favorite ice parlour. Arjun jumped wid happiness in her arms and hugged her placing his around her neck tightly. She too hugged him forgetting all her pain.

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While on the otherhand in mumbai, Mayank was in the office.. he was working so hard for the project. Actually he wanted to occupy himself wid work only work, otherwise he would have die with guilt and pain. But he randomly now and then glancing at his cell to ring. He is eagerly waiting for a call from that source whom he hired for nupur news. Mayank is searching from 5 years for nupur but till now, no one got her single news. He knocked many private detective doors for finding his nupur. His cell vibrated making him come out of his thoughts. He saw the screen, it is from his detective. He lifted the cell with shaky hands with hope, this time he may get some news of his life.

"Hello, hmmm ok..." he said slamming his cell roughly on the table. He is very angry on himself. Again no single news or clue about nupur. From 5 years, he is failing to get a single information about nupur, his life.

Mayank silently sat in his car and drove towards the "Shanti orphanage building" where his life, his nupur spent 18 years. Within half of an hour, he was settled on the bench on the small garden of orphanage with closed eyes.

This is his routine when he felt the pain is unbearable, he used to come to this orphanage. After nupur left, he took the responsiblity of this home.

" I still feel u nupur, ur aroma is filled in this air which is helping me to breadth, otherwise i would have died long ago", he thought.

He didnt noticed when seconds turned into minutes and minutes into hours. Darkness surrounded. The only source of light is the street light in the garden. Suddenly he felt someone beside him on the bench. He slowly turned to see the souce

"Dia..." a whisper came from his lips with shock.

Dia is the one who is very close to nupur. She is like a little sister to nupur. She is 12 years old girl studying 10th standard. Mayank always saw hatred in dia's eyes from 5 years. She never talked to him. Even though he took the responsibility of this orphanage and fulfilled each and everything. All children in this orphanage treated him like saviour. But, she always avoided him.

" I know where nupur di is", slowly said dia like a whisper


Ok now ended Third part. Thanx guys for ur support and love till now. Hope u love this part. Please guys hit the like buttone

All types of comments both negetive and positive are welcomed.

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Edited by yaadien.kiran - 12 years ago

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