Mayur SS...Yaadein, part 10 updated on page 28 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part ' 2

"Hmm..." said mayank and went to washroom to freshup.

Mayank opened his wardrobe to take his business attire. He looked the other half filled only with her dressess mostly with sarees. He touched and felt her aroma. Still i feel u jaan. His eyes filled with tears. Her heart broken face with tears flashed infront of his eyes causing his tears fall down from his cheeks.

The only whisper that came out of his mouth " Please nupur come back, i am living like a dead body without u. Forgive me once. Come back Angel"

Mayank walked to the breakfast table at around 8 am. Shilpa, samrat, gunjan along with their cute little 4 years daughter Priya already seated and enjoying the cute antics of Priya. At once silence surrounded the dining hall when mayank seated.

"Ramu mayank ko break fast lagado " said shilpa

While having toast, mayank watched only gunjan's face. After that dreadful day, gunjan never tried to talk or faced eye to eye with mayank. He only saw anger on her face since 5 years. This is their daily routine. No one questioned him and talked heart fully from that day. Once only her laughter was filled in this mansion but now dreadly silence. "You are the reason for this pain and with your own hands u spoiled ur beautiful life" mayank thought

" i am done" mayank said getting up "Bye", and disappeared, followed by samrat. Next Gunjan to her clinic.

Mayank entered "Sharma Group of Industries". He took the responsibilities of the sharma group from 5 years. Now, He is the most epitome of strength for the company. He succeeded as a best business man but is he good son and husband? He thought to himself and smiled sarcastically causing his eyes moist.

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A miles far away from mumbai, a woman stood alone, without smile infront of her room window staring outside. Her eyes went on the table where a magazine placed. She took that book in hands and opened. Within a minute, she closed the magazine and her eyes too for a spilt of second. She again opened the magazine only to see his photo. Tears started rolling down from her eyes.

Her mind filled with her past life. Flashes of her past life came infront of her eyes only to raise her pain more. She raised her eyes towards the sky like complaining to god

Why me? What have i done to get this punishment for life time. I dont know who r my parents are. When i opened my eyes, i was in an orphangage and bought up without love and caring. I was on cloud 9 when i tasted their love. But in few months, u again... I always wanted a simple life just filled with loved ones but u again cheated me god gave this pain, forever to be vanished.

Suddenly she came out of her thoughts when heard the door opened. She quickly wiped her tears and turned around only to see her reason to live.

Mommm...a small boy ran into her arms.

Nupur looked at her 4 years old little arjun...her life and only reason for smile and life.

What happened beta? She asked while kissing his little cheek. Arjun is very active and badmash. He always have a habit of new things.

Mom... i stood first in rhyming competition , said arjun with his cute smile.

Vow my arjun is best said nupur and hugged him.

Mamma i want two chocolate ice creams as u promised me, said arjun excitedly

Ok baba granted and lifted arjun in her arms

Ok now ended second part. Hope u like this update

I know u didnt like part 1. Dont worry my dear mayurians, u will get ur mayur soon.

This SS is a mixer of pain and love. All types of comments both negetive and positive are welcomed. Thanx guys for ur support and love

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Please guys have some patience for 2 to 3 parts.
i promise u will going to enjoy this SS
Thanx for your support and love
hope u will enjoy this part
i know u people have many questions now after part 2
i will clear soon
Enjoy reading
@maria, Thanx for the advice dear.
I want to introduce my self now. i am now studying 12th. Board exams on head. Mayur is my most favorite couple. I want to spend some time on my favorite couple to fresh my minds.
Love mayur always

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
beautiful part

loved nupur and arjun's scene
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Very interesting part

well written
continue soon🤗
P.S..u r welcome dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
loved this update but a bit confusing
mayank was standing infront of Arti's photo as if he mssed her a lot. and in 2nd part he was craing for nupur and wish for her come back... whats happening???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Feeling bad for both mayank and Nupur.
fabulous part

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
why Mayur r living separately????
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Sara92.

loved this update but a bit confusing
mayank was standing infront of Arti's photo as if he mssed her a lot. and in 2nd part he was craing for nupur and wish for her come back... whats happening???


i second u

even i m also confused!!!

anyway i really loved this suspense
awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Faria.


i second u

even i m also confused!!!

anyway i really loved this suspense
awesome


dont worry guys ur confussion will be cleared soon
thanx faria for liking this update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one dear... thanks for pm...

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