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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
recap:.....sujal and kashish are enjoying there happy moments together when his phone rings....
kashish:...lo.....ab yeh kon hai
sujal:...(puts her down, god mein utahay tha na!)....khud to log romance karte nahi....jo kar rahe hon unhe bhi disturb karte hain......and he picks up the phone...
sujal:...hello?
voice:....hellooo....(a lady)
sujal:...kon?
voice:..pehchana nahi?
sujal:....umm...(looks at kashish )....jee nahi....ap apne naam bataye gi
kashish:...(whispers)...giiii? (and gives a cute smile to him...sujal wraps his hand around her shoulder)
voice;....mein ne kabhie socha nahi tha keh tum meri awaa itni jaldhi bhool jaoge.....suuujal!
sujal:..(at hearing this sujal felt a bit strange....usse awaaz kuch suni suni lag rahi thi)...dekhiye aap apna naam bata rahi hain ya mein rakh don
voice:.........(after a while...she laughed).......i am back......mr sujal garewal!
tin tin tin tin (phone dosconnected)....
sujal phone ko thodi der tak dekhta hai trying to remember whose voice it was ......
sujal..kon ho sakti hai?
kashish:..(in a fun loving mood)....tumhara ateet!
sujal:....(forgetting about the phone grabs kashish from her waist)....mera ateet bhi tum ho...aaj bhi aur ane wala kal bhi........samjhi...(hits her on her head lightly.......hug time!!!!!)
........the next day....
sujal goes to office...after reaching there he calls kashish....
kashish:...(who was sitting with mehak picked up her mobile).....haan sujal
sujal:....kaisi ho
kashish:..jaisi thodi der pehle thi....kyun
sujal:...bus yunhi.....
kashish:...koi kaam tha...
sujal:...kyun tumhe phone karne keh liye kaam hona zaroori hai
kashish:..ooo...bura laga
sujal:...tumhara kuch bhi muje bura nahi lagta kashish......
kashish:....(shies)...acha bolo na...phone kyun kiya
sujal:...woh....mein ne socha keh aaj shaam ko hum dono.....coffee pene
kashish:...aaj shaam....nahi nahi....it wont be possible....aaj muje mehak keh saath jana hai.....sorry sujal
sujal:..(gets dissaponted however tries to maintain a happy tone)...koi baat nahi...phir kabhie chalein ge......take care
kashish:..byee (she disconnects)
mehak:..di....ap ne mana kyun kiya.....humne kahan jana hai?
kashish:..hum ne nahi...mein ne!
mehak:..apne?..kahan?..(she gets curious).....
kashish:..... aaj meri zindagi ka bahut special din hai.....
mehak;...aaj apki birthday nahi..sujal bhaiya ki birthday nahi....apki wedding anniversary nahi..........to phir kya hai
kashish:...mehak...aj keh din.....mein ne aur sujal ne ek doosre se apne pyar ka izhaar kiya tha...(oops sorry guys...i think i have missed kashish's birthday ....chalo next year peh chali gayi..........lol)
mehak:....wow....to aaj ka din to apko sujal bhaiya keh saath hona chahiye.....
kashish:...stupid....mein usse surprize dena chahti hon.......
mehak:...o......thats great di.......kya plan hai
kashish:..(gets up from the sofa)....secret hai.......(she smiles and goes to her room)
here sujal and office:.....
sujal:...aj ka din woh kaise bhool gayi?.......kashish aisa kaise kar sakti hai??(wierd things start to come into his mind)....nahi....shayad busy hogi....warna muje aise............zaroor koi khaas baat hogi....mein bhi na......(he shakes his head and gets back to work).................
breakkk
kashsih walks down the stairs...
everyone is sitting in the lounge
veena:....are kashish....is waqt kahan ja rahi ho?
before kashish could answer vasu boli
vasu:..uff veena.....kya zaroorat thi rokne ki.....apni marzi se ja rahi thi....jao jao kashish......par koshish karna waapis mat ao.....
laliT:...vasundhara!!
vasu:....ab apni baat kehne ka haq bhi nahi hai muje?......(she gets up and leaves from there....
kashish:..(to make the atmosphere pleasant says)....mama...mein ek kam se ja rahi hon....shaam ko sujal keh saath hi waapis aongi....
veena:...theek hai....jao...(she gives a smile)
kashish kahan gayi hai?.....well..........yeh to gift shop lag rahi hai......kashish enterz in the shop and goes on looking for a speciaa gift for a special person.....
par woh akeli nahi thi....there was someone keeping a close eye on her................
idhar sujal ka maan nahi lag raha tha...he kept on thinking about kashish.....so he packed his files and decided to leave for home......
sujal in the car stops at the signal while kashish is in the gift shop ....both get lost in their thoughts....song time
........hmmm hmmm hmmmm....hoo oohoooooo
thoda sa pyaar huwa hai
thoda hai baqi.....
hmmmmm. hmmmmm. hmmmm.
thoda sa pyaar huwa hai
thoda hai baqi
thoda sa pyaar huwaa hai
thoda hai baqi
hum to dil de hi chuke.....hoooooooooooo
(flashbacks of when they first expressed their love)
hum to dil de hi chuke...bus teri haan hai baqiii
.......
beeeeppppppp....yup thats the horn.....sujal ko horn parta hai and he gets back to his sense and drives......
a voice:...madam.....excuse me madam
kashish:..uh...han...sorry.....jee!
salesman:...ap ko kuch pasand aya?
kashish:..jee.....yeh....yeh jacket....(it was a black one)...
salesman:.....(packs it up).....wedding anniversay hai apki?...(bara free ho raha hai...lol)
kashish:....(smiles)......humare pyaar ki anniversay hai......(the salesman smiles as kashish leaves)......
ab scene kuch aisa hai keh sujal road peh hai....almost outside the gift shop where kashish is.....he is again at a signal aur kashish shop se khushi khushi bahir arahi hai....when she bumps into someone......yes the same person who was keeping an eye on her.....
kashish:..ouch...(falls but he grabs her).....
kashish:...aap.....
voice:....jee....tooshar!!!!........ajeeb itafaq hai....aaj doosri bar mile to phir takra gaye......(yeah right loser!)......
kashish feels awkward in his arms and tries to stand up but but but but but.................tooooo late.....isse pehle keh kashish apne kaboo mein a sakti...........pati dev ki nazar par chuki thi is manzar pe..............yes sujal....who was sitting in the car looked around as the signal was red saw kashish....his kashish...in someone else's arms......aur woh bhi koi aur nahi.....tooshar ki bahon mein...................................(time for a loud shocking music)...........DHANNNN DHANNAAAA....actaully DHARAK DHARAK! (right juhi!!!)

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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
recap:...its sujal and kashish pyaar ki aniversary...lol.....sounds dumb.....anyways....both are happy. kashish is out to give him a surprise but sujal is unaware of it........but infact something bad happens.....sujal kashish ko tooshar keh saath mall keh bahir dekh leta hai that too in not a very approritae condition!!!!!
........tooshar:...aap theek to hain na?(trying to get closer but kashish backs off)
kashish:..jee...i am fine...thank you...(she showed him a cold reponse par yeh chipku insaan.......he kept on questioning her....shayad time pass kar raha tha.....sudenly he shifted his gaze from kashish to someone standing behind her...
tooshar:..o...mr garewal....aap
kashish turns around to see sujal standing behind her...shez surprised....
kashish:..sujal!!!! tum!!!
sujal gave her a stare....not a very happy one...
kashish: (to herself)....sujal....yahan....sara plan kharab kar diya...mein to office mein jake surprise dene wali thi......arrgghhh.....she felt dissapointed)
sujal:..(thinking to himself):...kashish...yahan.....usne to kaha tha keh woh mehak keh saath ja rahi hai....magar mehak to nazar nahi arahi........he feels sad.keh kashish ne aaj keh din usse jhooth bola....but he doesnt express his anger at all!
tushar:..(distrubs their thoughts)...lagta hai aap bhi yahan kuch lene ayen hain?
sujal:....jee........apne sahi samjha
tushar:...really!...kuch special....
sujal:..verryy!....
tushar:...aisa kya hai?
sujal:....aap sawaal bhut puchte hain......
tushar:...hmm...mein janta honn...adaat hai
sujal:...meri bhi adaat hai.......fazool sawaalon keh jawaab dena mein pasand nahi karta....
tushar feel humiliated....ha serves him right!.....
kashish looks at sujal ..she feels something is wrong
sujal:..kashish.....chalein......
kashish nods and walks with him to the car......
tushar: (to himself)....adaat dalni par jayegi.........mr...garewall!!
ab dono sujal aur kashish gari mein hote hain....par dono mein se koi bhi kuch nahi bolta.....ajeeb pareshani mein hote hain....aaj ka din dono ko yaad tha....dono hi celebrate karna chahte the...par na jane kyun aaj ek jaeeb sa tanav tha unke beech.....shayad tooshar ki wajah se........
kashish:..(thinks to herself)...sujal kuch bol kyun nahi raha.....usse yaad bhi hai ya.....nahi zaroor yaad hoga...warna mujhe phone nahi karta.....par phir itna khamosh kyun hai???? (woh jhuki hui nazron se kabhie sujal ko dekhti to kabhie khirki se bahir)
sujal:.....mere saath nahi jana tha to mana kar sakti thi....jhooth kyun bola???....yeh kashish ko kya ho gaya hai.....(he too looked at her and then concentrated on the road....par kaise concentrate karta.....woh to kashish ki is berukhi ki soch mein ghum tha.....ek dum se tooshar aur kashish ka apas mein takrana usse yaad ata hai............and achanak........................

break agayi.............lol
.....keh achanak....sujal ne breaks lagayi......eeeennnhhcccccccccchhhkkkk! (lol...doesnt sound like breaks to me!!!)
kashish:..(bumps into the dashboard and breaks a few bangles she is wearing but manages to hide them)....sujal.....yeh kya?
sujal:..yehi to mein puchna chahta hon....yeh sab kya hai?
kashish:....kya?....muje samjah nahi arahi?...tum kya keh rahe ho?
sujal:....mere bina kuch kahe tum sab samjh jati ho kashish to aaj kyun muje lafzon ki zaroorat par rahi hai....
kashish feels sad and gets tears in her eyes.....
kashish:..(to herself)...aaj ka din hi mila tha jhagarne keh liye......
sujal:....(before he could continue sees the tears rolling down kashish's eyes.....usse bura lagta hai...jis chehre peh woh sirf muskurahat dekhna chahta tha aaj ussi chehre peh yeh ansoo,......he bangs his fist on the sterring lightly and then turns towards kashish.....but this time apologetically!)
sujal:...(touches her face and wipes her tears)..tum janti ho in ankhon mein mein kabhie ansoo nahi dekh sakta.........yeh muje apne pyaar ki kamzori ka ehsaas dilate hain kashish.....aur humara pyaar kamzor nahi.......(he says passionately)
kashish:......maintains her silence.....and this makes sujal more curious....he tries to hold onto her.....first her face and then he grabs her hands and brings them closer to himself....................thats when kashish speaks...
kashish:...ahhh!...(she makes a hurted face)
sujal:..kya huwa?.
kashish:..woh......(apni sleeve peeche khichti aur sujal ko chori tutne ki waja se jo chut lagi hai woh dekha ti hai....)
sujal:....yeh to....khoon beh raha hai....kashish.....(he gets worried...apni jeb se ek rumal nikalta hai and ties it up...........aur phir aram se haath apni taraf late huwe kisses it........while kissing it he looks up at kashish.....jo sujal ko bheegi nazron se dekh rahi thi....
sujal:....i .....am sorry!
kashish:..(puts her finger on his lips and shakes her head)...... aaj ke din yeh nahi suna chahti thi mein.....
sujal:....looks at her surprized......: tum yaad hai?
kashish:......meri zindagi ka sab se haseen lamha mein kaise bhool sakti hon......
sujal smiles at her......
kashish:..mein ne ek surprize plan kiya tha.....par tumne sara kharab kar diya...
sujal:..surprize,....kaisa surprize?
kashish:...baata ti hoon............pehle woh...(she points)...ussi bridge peh.......
sujal:....wahan?....par wahan kya hai?
kashish:...chalo to sahi sujal.......
sujal drives to the bridge....
woh dono gari se utar te hain......and kashish holds sujal's hand....
kashish:...yaad hai na ....jab mein ne apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha....tab yehi jaga humare pyaar ki gawah banni thi
sujal:....woh sare pyaar bhare pal....issi jaga par samate hain
kashish:...humara beecharna......jhagrana......pyaar mein rutna aur phir manna....yehi jaga uski sakshi hai...(i dont know yeh sakshi kya hota hai..par bahut bar suna hai...lol)
sujal:...mere pyaar ki gherayi aur us gherayi mein daba huwa dard.....sab se yeh waqif hai..........
they are walking on the road hands in hands.......thinking about the past......sara pyaar....pyaar mein daba dard....dard mein chupi nafrat......nafrat mein bhi chahat ka ehsaas...........sab kuch......
kashish:..humein pyar mein saath kum aur dooriyan zaida mili hain sujal........ek vada karoge mujse............
sujal:......har kasam.....har vada tumse shuru hokar tumhe peh khatam hota hai.....mang keh dekho...........
kashish:...........muje kabhi.....muje kabhie chor keh to nahi jaoge na.....(she gets all senti and cluchtes onto sujal;s coat.............
sujal:......ab to sirf maut him humein judaa kar sakti hai ............
kashish raise her hand and touches his lips..........
bus....i am tired...yaar pata nahi log drame kaise banate hain.......itne lambe lambe.........mera bus chale to teen char episode mein puri kahani khatam kardo.n.............par nahi........mein ne balaji telefilms keh saath competition karna hai..............dekhna yeh farahji telefilms usse agaye jayegi!!....lol...bolo lol!
coming up.....kya waqai is bar judaai maut keh roop mein ayegi............kyunke sujal aur kashish do naam hain...pyaar ka ehsaas hain.....do dil hain............par har famous love story kahin na kahin adhuri reh jati hai.............kya is bar bhi yehi hoga?....ya kahin na kahin to hoga........duuutyyyyyyyyyyyy!
love
farah!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
recap:.....the slight misunderstanding vanished jab sujal aur kashish apni purani pyaar ki rahoon par chal pare the..........usi sarak par ussi jaga.......par yeh maut ka zikaar kyun aya......?????
sujal: (moves her hand from his lips):....jab itni mushkilon keh bawajood hum ek huwe hain.....to ab aur koi judaai humein juda nahi kar sakti......(he raises his eyebrows to give a convinsing look....but somehow kashish wasnt really convinced.....ek ajeeb sa daaar beht gaya tha uske dil mein.......so to lighten the mood sujal continued
........sujal:....par kashish.....tum ne kaha the koi surprise hai?
kashish:.(suddenly realizes).....haan...chalo.....
sujal:...kahan?.....(gets anxious)...
kashish:...woooohhh.....us dhabe keh peeche.....(whatever...therez a place....uske peeche yaar!..ahem ahem!!lol)
they both reach there.......and to sujal's surprize the place is set in the most romantic atmosphere that he didnt even imagined.......a table for two...with candles not yet lit.....cutlery....roses etc etc......
sujal:....kashish....yeh sab? (he is overjoyed)
kashish:....tumhara surprize.....(ab yeh mat puchna keh yeh sab kashish ne kab aur kaise kiya.......khaam kha khud bhi pareshan hoge aur muje bhi karoge.........hehehehhehe.....bus subah hi set kar keh gayi thi!!..ok...lol)
they both get close to the table...the near by dhaba gets them their food...yummmy yum!....sehri mein kar chuki hon to better not main the dishes now!!!!)
.......aur wahan pari match box se kashish lits the candles...as she bends down.....peeche se sujal uske gale mein kuch dalta hai....
kashish: (surprized)...yeh kya hai? (she touhes it and looks at it....its a pendant!!!!)
sujal:...tumhare liye......(with love flowing in his eyes)
kashish:....tumhe yaad tha?
sujal:..kaise na hota.....isse kholo!
kashish opens it and find thier photograph in it....ek side peh sujal aur dosri side peh woh khud......
kashish:....thank you....(hugs him).....i love you sujal......
sujal:....kehne ki zaroorat nahi.....nazron ka ishara hi kafi hai!!!! (they hug tightly....when suddenly kashish ko kuch yaad ata hai..........and she lets go off him aur gari ki taraf jati hai.............are yaar ab sujal ne gift diya to kashish ko bhi to dena hai......bus thodi der aur jhel lo......)
meanwhile sujal is standing there alone......with some light flashes.......he thinks its the thunder!!!...hmmmmmm........(and yes its past sunset now)
kashish gets back with the present she bought for sujal....
sujal:...aur yeh mere liye?
kashish:...haan......kholu to sahi!
sujal:....ok..(he opens it and finds a coat....coat tha ya jacket...aah same thing......the one he always wanted......aawww)......
kashish:...pasand aya? (waiting for an answer...par sujal aise hi thodi na chore ga usse)
sujal.....haan....acha hai...par coats to mere paas hain na.....kuch aur nahi tha wahan....
kashish:..(gets upset)...muje laga..........
sujal:...kya laga?
kashish:...keh shayad tumhe yeh acha lage....isliye
sujal:.....ab zaroori to nahi keh jo tumhe acha lage woh muje bhi acha lage.......
kashish:.....(almost gets tears)...woh.....
sujal:...ab yeh woh choro....ao khana kha lein....
kashish:....nahi....mera mood nahi hai.....ghar chalte hain.......(she turns around while sujal smiles slightly....and grabs her hand before she goes any further..........pulls her around in her arms.......aur uski waqt dhamaka hota hai.......aur barish ki pehli bundein unke chehre peh girti hain............)
kashish looks into sujal's eyes......
sujal:....hmmm....naraz ho gayi...
kashish:..nahi..bahut khush hon.....itne pyaar se tumhare liye kharida aur tum kehte ho keh meri pasand tumhari nahi.............
sujal:....sahi to kaha....kaise ho sakti hai.......ab tumhari pasand to mein hoon.........par meri pasand.......to tum ho na....(lol.....very lame...heheheheh)
kashish sharma si jati hai............
sujal:...par muej yeh caot bahhhuuut pasand hai...(bringing her more closer...barish aur zor se shuru ho jati hai.......
sujal has the coat in his hand he puts it over kashish.......kashish wahan se chalne ko kehti hai par sujal holds her hand........and says...
sujal:....ahn ahn.......
kashish usse questioning nazron se dekhti hai....
sujal:..(bends down and takes her hand).....dance?
kashish:...laughs and gives him her hand!!!!
music camera lights.......song time......
is bar...wada raha pyaar se pyaar ka
ab hum na honge juda....
the copule dance goes on when kashish puts the caot on sujal and her herself....aur is bar lights off....hehehehehe....nahi yaar tension mat lo...zaida kuch nahi huwa hoga......its the raod yaar!.........
break time....finally!!!
back.....
sujal picks up kashish in his arms and walks to the car......he opens the door while kashish is hugging him tightly....par isse pehle woh kashish ko seat peh bithata........he sees an evelope on the seat......................
sujal:.....ek aur gift?...(he asks kashish.........kahin yeh birthday gift to nahi hai.....lol)
kashish moves her face from his shoulder and turns around to see what sujal is talking about!
kashish:..pata nahi....abhi thodi der pehle to nahi tha.....
sujal puts her down and pics the envelope.......
kashish:...abhi nahi....ghar ja ke khol lena...
sujal:....(puts it in his pocket.)...jo hukumm
they reach home......sab log idhar udhar hote hain........
vasu (comes down from the stairs)....agaye tum log.....
sujal:..(to avoid her says)...jee....chalein kashish....
vasu feels offended......and gives them a stare!
well who cares...sujal and kashish walk away.......
in their room.......kashish goes to change and gets back.......
kashish:...sujal kapre badal lo.....thand lag jayegi.....
sujal:.....(keeps on looking at her while she dries her hair...comes closer and touches her hair.....).....
kashish:..kya?
sujal:.....nahi lage gi
kashish:...sujal.....(she stands up while sujal pushes her against the cupboard and brings his face closer to hers....par isse pehle woh kuch kar pata...kashish pushes him back on the bed.......sujal pulls her with him.....aur dono bed peh ake girte hain............aur phir......nahi kuch nahi hota...lol..........infact sujal ki pocket mein jo envelope tha woh pressure se bahir ajata hai and a few photographs in it start showing.....
sujal aur kashish enevlope ki taraf dekhte hain......
sujal picks up the photographs and sees kashish...he smiles and pulls out the whole pic.................and to his surprize........woh tasveer kashish aur sujal ki hoti hai.....the time when they were dancing thodi der pehle.........barish mein...........sujal and kashish get even more shocked to see red cross marks on sujal's face..................................
dhamakaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!....episode ends.....
yeh tasveerein kisne kheechi....kon hai jo sujal ko marna chahta hai.....swayam?...tuushar?....ya koi aur?????????????/janne keh liye next part parhna na bhuliye....................


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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
farah dear u started kth dutii in a separate thread..yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee........me soo happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......... šŸ‘ and as for yor story..i just love it yaar.. as i have always told u tumhari is story mein mujhe actual sujal garewal {Rajeev} dikhtha hain..... šŸ˜‰
plz continue soon............. 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
haila
thats gr888888888888888
especially reading those romantic moments 😳
muwahhhhhhhhhhhh
gr88888 going

cont soon

lol
ana
rajeev1 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
kashish:..yeh.......yeh..(she gets hypertensive...lol)
sujal..kashish...calm down...(sujal khud bhi yeh dekh keh bahut pareshan hota hai par woh kashish ko zaida pareshan nahi karna chahta tha...
kashish:..calm down!!!...yeh behuda harkat....kiski ho sakti hai....kon hoga sujal jo tumhe.....(she holds his shirt)
sujal:...kashish...(puts his hand on hers)....aisa kuch nahi hai...shayad kisi ne mazaq kiya hoga...
kashish:..MAZAQ.!!!!! yeh tume mazzq lagta hai sujal???
sujal:..(unable to answer)....kashish.....
kashish:...bus....humein police mein complain karni chahiye....yeh koi mamuli baat nahi....
sujal:...uff....yeh tum biwiyan bhi na...khud to tension leti ho aur humein bhi deti ho...(he says to lighen the mood....)
kashish:..sujal...mein serious hoon
sujal:...kya?...yeh baat tumne mujse do saal tak chupayi...tum to kehti thi keh tum kashish ho!!! (lol)
kashish:...SUUUJAL!....tumhe mazaq suj raha hai...aur yahan meri jaan nikal rahi hai....
sujal:....kashish.....(hugs her).....fikar mat karo....yeh kisi ne yunhi tang karne keh liye kiya hoga.....dont worry....kuch nahi hoga...
kashish:..(gets tears)....kuch nahi hoga na...???
sujal:..(kisses her on her head)....nahi!!!!
jaise taise karke raat guzar hi jati hai.....par koi hai jo sari raat jagta raha......badle ki aag mein khud bhi jalta raha aur sujal ka naamo nishaan mitane ka bandobus karta raha..................yeh kon tha......well its not clear.....bus side view hi dekh raha hai woh bhi burled.....ahhhhh................
break timeeeee...........
next day............
akshat arrives at garewal house....
veena:...are akshat ao na...
cg gets a light (woh bhi bulb wali)...on his face but akshat doesnt even bother to look at him......
akshat:..kaisi hain aunty?....
veena:...mein theek hon.....tum yahan aye bahut acha laga...
akshat (smiles)...aunty...sujal hai?
veena:..haan woh....(but before she could complete..interruption interruption......
rishi:.....haan.....big b yehin hain.....par tum yahan kyun aye ho.....yeh bata do isse pehle keh tumhe mein yahan se dhake mar ke nikalon...
veena:..rishi.....yeh kaise baat kar rahe ho?
rishi:..jaise in dono bhaiyon se karni chahiye.....(closes his fists)
akshat:..(tries to maintain a cool atmosphere)...mein yahan sujal se ek zaroori project keh bare mein....
rishi:....yeh baat office mein bhi hosakti hai...so you better leave...........now...(he moves towards akshat)
akshat:...aunty...sujal?
veena:....woh upar apne kamre mein hai.......
akshat:..thank you...(he ingnores rishi and walks par rishi jaan chorne wala thodi na tha.....rishi puts his hand on akshat;s chest and give him a deep deep stare.....
akshat:...raasta choro....
veena:..rishi...janne de usse.....
cg is quite....ab bechara kya bole...usi ki karni hai sari...lol
rishi:..mein ne kaha na....yahan se dafa ho jao.....
akshat: (tries to maintain his cool)....rishi....plz...
rishi:....akshat...out!...(short and strong..)...rishi pushes akshat.....and akshat comes back with a BANG>.....nah not that strong...just a light push.......rishi falls down....gets up again....(in the meantime veena is shouting at the top of her voice.....ghar keh sab log takreeban bahir ajate hain....sujal and kashish too...............
rishi cloess his fists and is about to smack akshat on his face jab uska haath koi pakar leta hai.....and doesnt let the punch touch akshat at all...........
ok its sunday night....so better sleep....take care....
and yes yeh kaun ho ga......keep guessing.....i 'll be back babby!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ok..herez kth2 ….farahji telefilms dedicate it to ALL the viwers worldwide!
Recap:…akshat garewal house ata hai....to meet sujal...par sujal ki jaga rishi milta hai and they get in a tu tu mein mein.....rishi tries to hit him but someone grabs his hand..........

rishi:...TUM!!
sawyam:...aya to kisi aur kaam se tha par aaj lagta hai tumhara hi kaam tamaam karna parega....
rishi:...himaat kasie hui tumhari is ghar mein ne aneki...
swayam:....tumhari shakal dekhne ka koi shauk nahi hai muje....
rishi:....kyun.....jalan hoti hai dekh keh...(lol....)
swayam:...jalan.....ha..(leaves rishi's hand)...jalo ge to ab tum sab.....meri lagayi hui is aag mein......(he turns round and round.....and then points his finger at sujal whoz tie was half done and was standing on the stairs with kashish..............
swayam:..hey you.....sujal garewal....wahan kya akar keh khare ho....yahan ao...tumhare liye ek toofa laya hon.....(he waves a document in the air)
akshat:..bhai!...yeh sab?
swayam:...relax akshat......yeh to bus shuruwat hai....
while swayam was talking to akshat...sujal steps down.....
kashish sujal ka haath pakarti hai....
kashish:..sujal...khud peh kaboo rakhna.....woh yahan sirf larne aya hai....
sujal doesnt say a word.....but silently with gaze fixed on swayam...steps down slowly and heads towards swayam.....
now swayam and sujal were face to face....eyes in eyes...
sujal:....baako
swayam:..uf...itna garoor to chand ko bhi nahi hai
sujal:..kaise hota....chand phe daag jo hai...hehehehehhe....just kidding......forget this....
sujal:...just silently stares at swayam....with narrowed eyes...
swayam:...(feels agitated).....aise ghurne se muje koi nuksaan nahi hone wala....isse...(he gives him the papers)...isse ghuro....
sujal: (takes the papers from swayam and goes through them.....but doesnt say anything again...
rishi:..big b...kya hai in papers mein?
sujal: (quiet)
rishi:..ap kuch bolte kyun nahi big b...kya hai in papers mein.....
veena:..sujal...bolna..kya hai.....
swayam:..are yeh kya bole ga....mein bata hon......in papers mein hai aap ki barbadi......is ghar ka sukh chain.....is ghar ki ekta...(not mai...lol) jo mein aap se cheen longa.....yun (he clicks his finger)...yun....minto mein......
zor dar dhamake hote hain....the camera focuses on everyones face....
swayam:...is chaat ko bikher donga..sarak peh le aonga...yeh wada hai....
(this time sujal talks...before swayam could finish)
sujal:....wada kar keh pura karna tumhare bus ki baat nahi hai.....sswayam........yeh chand kaghaz keh tukre agar humein sarak peh le ja sakte hain....to yeh mera....sujal garewal ka wada hai keh......(clicks his finger in front of swayam's face).....ek hafte keh andar andar....tumhe kaghaz khareedne ke layak bhi nahi shorunga...........
swayam:....ha ha ha ha.....pehle apna wajood sambhalo...kahin woh bhi muje tumhe kiraye peh na dena par jaye.....
rishi:..(gets hyper and pulls swayam's collar);...big b ke bare mein...
sujal:...stop it rishi...(pulls him back)....
rishi:...mein tumhe jaan se mardon ga....(swayam too confronts him....to udhar se akshat tries to pull back swayam...
akshat:..bhai....bus karo....chalo yahan se bhai...chalo....
rishi lets go of swayam and so does he....
swayam:..tumhe to mein dekh longa....(points at rishi)....
sujal:..agar khud ko dekhne keh kabil bache tab.....
swayam:...aye sujal.....mein.....
akshat:...BHAI.......(and finally manages to drag him out of the house..............
everyone at the garewal house is shcoked to see such behaviour.....
vasu:..dekha lalit.....yeh CG keh jungli bete...
lalit:..vasu....yeh tum kya keh rahi ho
vasu:..theek hi to hai...ek dosre ki janno keh peeche pare hain.....look at my kids....soo innocent.....bilkul
lalit:...meri tarah!
vasu:..whatever!
ok back to the main scene....
veena:..(sujal is standing in the same position)...sujal...yeh swayam dhamki kyun de kar gaya...kya hai in papers mein....bol na....bol...(shakes him)
sujal:....legal papers the......woh is ghar mein apna hissa chahta hai.........hissa chahta hai hissa chahta hai...hissa chahta hai....(his voice echos in everyone's ears and faces coloured se balck and white ho jate hain ek ek kar ke.....lol
ok...guys plz plz plz par lena.....serial ki story barhana bara mushkil kaam hota hai......so plz...do comment....will be back soon with the next part....love you all...............ac....khush!...bad man is over
and zunaira...pkr...i will continue soon.....abhi ek story pe focus karti ho....but i promise i will continue that one too!
love
farah!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
recap:...swayam garewal house ake sujal ko court ka notice de ke jata hai...that he also wants his hissa in the property.....sujal tells everyone about this and eveyone gets shocked....extremely shocked.....
veena:....yeh.....yeh woh kaise kar sakta hai....
sujal listens to her words and then stares at CG with "its-all-beacuse-of-you" look........
vasu:....yeh sab CG ki wajah se huwa hai...
veena:...vasu!!!
veena:...ha tum bahut bholi ho veena.....apne is mahan pati dev ki bhool maf kar sakti ho.....par uski saza....hum sab ko bhugatni paregi........shiii! (she shakes her head!!)
rishi kicks the sofa and goes inside in anger......vasu too walks away with lalit following her..........sanjana, mehak, varun and aman...bhi apne apne kaam mein nikal lete hain....very quietly and sadly....sab ko is baat ka bahut shock tha......
now theres sujal, kashish, veena and cg in the hall......
CG:...sujal...kya hum is bare mein kuch....
sujal:..(before letting him complete his sentence sujal bola)....hum nahi.....mein....sirf mein......is ghar ko swayam ke chungal se churaunga mein......par yeh mat samajayi ga keh mein yeh sab apke liye kar raha hon.....hargiz nahi............agar mein koi kadam barhaonga to sirf mama ke liye......aur unlogon keh liye jin ka is mein koi kasoor nahi........mein nahi chahta keh aap mere kisi bhi mamle mein dhakhal dein.....(he had a strict tone)
veena:..sujal!...tum jante ho apne papa se...
sujal: mama plz......yeh mere kuch nahi lagte.....
(sujal turns around and goes to his room while veena gets another shock at hearing sujal's words).....
veena gets tears in her eyes and sits down on the sofa.....
cg puts his hand on her shoulder...
kashish:..mama...mama plz royi mat....ap sujal ko janti hain...uska ghusa bus kuch hi pal ka hota hai....sab theek ho jayega....mein baat karti hon na usse
veena:...kya theek hoga ab......muje to sab kuch bura hi hota dikhayi de raha hai....is ghar se jaise khushiyan ruth gayi hain........(she cries and kashish wipes her tears)....
kashish:..aisa kuch nahi mama.....yeh to upar wala humara imthehan le raha hai......aap plz fikar mat keejiye....mein abhi sujal se baat karungi....(kashsih too leaves from there)....
sujal and kashish's bedroom!!!
kashish: (enters and sees sujal sitting on the sofa with papers infront of him)
kashish:..office nahi jana?
sujal stays quiet
kashish comes and sits by him....and holds his hand....
kashish:..ghusa karne se kya hoga sujal...tum khud ko aur pareshan kar loge......swayam agar is ghar mein aabhi jaye to kya........
sujal..(looks up at her when she says this)....woh is ghar mein kabhie nahi ayega......kabhi bhi nahi....
kashish tightes her grip.....
sujal:...muje pareshani is baat ki nahi keh woh is ghar se taluk jurna chahta hai........shayad kahin na kahin yeh uska haq hai....aur sujal garewal itna kamzor nahi keh khud ki khushi keh liye kisi ka haq cheen le....
kashish:..to phir kyun itna ghusa..????
sujal:...to aur kya karun kashish....kya karun??....yeh jante huwe bhi keh swayam apne is jayaz haq ki badolat....mama aur ......p....papa.....keh itne puarane saath ko najayz karar dede ga.......(ek dhamaka )....kya mein janta nahi keh woh apne saath to garewal naam jur wade ga magar.......magar humse yeh naam...yeh adhikar.....sab kuch cheen le ga........kya yeh ruswayi mama seh payeingi........ek aisi bhool ki saza unhe mil rahi hai jo unhone ki bhi nahi......jiske bare mein woh janti tak nahi hai...........kya yeh sab janne keh baad bhi mein chup chap bheta rahon...........bolo kashish...bolo....(he narrows his eyes and shows the pain .....jo sirf kashish dekh sakti thi....woh dard jo sujal keh dil se ansoo ban ke bhe raha tha.......
kashish:...(touches his face gently with her hands)...sujal......(sujal holds her hand and they embrace)
kashish:.....tum chahe jo bhi kadam lo....muje hamesha pane saath paoge......
sujal:....meri sab se bari takat to tum hi ho kashish......
ufff.....what a drame baz family.....lol
here swayam and akshat come to the shergill house...
akshat:..yeh apne sahi nahi kiya bhai....unse unka haq cheena....
swayam:..unka haq??....what are you talking about kiddo....woh sab kuch umara hai..kanoni tor peh.....itne saalon se us ghar mein ek najayz rishta pal raha tha......par ab aisa kuch nahi hoga......mom ko unka haq mein dilwa keh rahon ga....aur undono bhaiyon ko to.....
akshat:..apse aur umeed bhi kya ki ja sakti hai.....(he's disgusted)
swayam:..kyun muje kabhie kabhie lagta hai keh tum unki zabaan bolte ho
akshat:...sahi lagta hai bhai....kyun agar mein so bar bhi paida huwa tabhie apki tarah nahi ban sakta...(and leaves abruptly)
swayam:....(to himself).....hmm...youre right akshat.....kyunke swayam shergill ka koi muqabala nahi kar sakta............
a voice:....GALAT!!!!
ok.....yeh to mein abhi hi likhdi...ok i'll cont. at night!..take care and really sorry agar boring hoto....i know i can understand......

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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
all thanx to your surya.....sari story bhejne keh liye šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
šŸ‘ thank god u started teh story again...nowi now the whole story šŸ˜† gr888888

cont sooon.. šŸ˜›

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