The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21! - Page 83

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb mast mindblowing update
hwww so sweet hw arjun concoel riya
poor riya us idiot sik ka death ka bd bhi use nightmare araha ha but nt to worry arjun ha to kya problem hai
arjun is so caring
OMG riya pregnent with sik's child ...
poor riya felling vry bd fr her
hw cud she thk f killing herself agar use kuch ho gaya to bechara arjun agar use kuch ho gaye to arjun ka kya hoga
thank god arjun hd fitted cameras in house
hwww finally riya was safe
wow precape seems interesting
cnt soon aur itni jaldi update ka liya vry vry thanx
ad thanx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 20
It was such a wonderful update.
Arjun took Riya to Mumbai.
He Loves her so much now but she's scared of him.
Arjun-Riya going to the market.And Arjun scolding her in an attempt to scare her was so well written.
Riya is so kind hearted..helping the street children & being so happy seeing them smile.Even Arjun was happy seeing her happy.
Then Riya cooked for him & he was hurt seeing her all alone.
Riya is so innocent.Her helping Arjun to dress up the wound was so cute..
And the kiss..aww<3
*blushing*
Loved the chapter..<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
woah...
awesome updates..
simply amazing...
loved it..
I jus can't tell u da feeling after reading update is jus...
da way u wrote each emotions...
riya's feelings nd her nightmate haunting her..
she is pregnant bt poor her she thinks its of sik...
nd den arjun note was sweet nd thank God arjun got to know from doc... nd his crazy madness for riya.. u potray dat emotion so well..
finally rathore came on time nd song was gud..
precap is nice..
cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Amazing Mindblowing update

Riya again saw sikander in her dreams

loved the way arjun consoled her

He is so caring

Love their morning kiss 😳

riya pregnant
she thinks that its sikander child

she tried to shot herself with arjun 's gun
arjun saw this through the camera and called rathore

thank god rathore save her

ohh...arjun slaped her
arjun outburst on riya was very well written and amazing

arjun told her that if she tried to hurt herself then he will kill himself ...loved this part

precap is interesting

waiting for next part

update soon



Edited by Aabish_02 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was a awesome update!!!!
👏
I loved it!!!!
It was full of suspense, thrill, romance!!
and most of all emotionS!! I mean once I started reading it
couldn't take my eyes off man!! 😃 It's Addictive!
Oh no! Sik is haunting in her dreasm as well now!! Great!! 😡
I hate that character!!! but I like the sik in this story he is hot!! 😛😆
Poor Riya!! She was miserable! 😕
But Arjun was the best today!! From being a caring loving husband to
an angry one!! Goooddd!! This man will be the end of me some day😆
But I loved the way he was there for her whenever Riya needed him!!
That's sooo sweeettt of hime!!! 😳 The last part sacred me the most
I mean...I was happy that Riya was pregnant 😃 but then she decided to kill
her self 😭 I was crying!!! LIke literally crying!! 😭
Sach mein agar Rathore ek milli second bhi late ho jata toh pata nahi
kya hoja ta!! Rathore saved that day!! 👍🏼 lOVE HIME FOR THAT!!!
And then comes the real storm!! Arjun!!! But then the outburst was kinda expected!
Afterall He loves Riya and his baby!!!! 😳❤️
FANTABULOUS UPDATE!!!!!!! 👏👏
🤗 and I missed you btw! 😆
The precap sounds...interesting...and romantic...and hot!!!
☺️
Update soon!!! and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey muski
really sorry yar..
remove me frm ur pm or buddy list..
i was unable to read n comment like dis
unable to read..
i m Mobile user.
so unable to zoom
d text..
again sorry .
n thanks dear for d pm
.

i really wanna read n comment
bt unable ..
sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
ohhh finally u updated
thanks alot
as usual its mind blowing
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome 👏 mindblowing 👏 superb 👏 ...
dont know what else to say...

for me this was the bestest part of TFB... sab kuch tha suspense ,thrill, romance 😊

even though i knew arjun will save her i was just glued to my seat...

rathod , you saved her ... saviour of the day... agar woh ek second late ho jatha toh ... can't think of it...

arjun's care and his threat at the end... he was there with her whenever she needs him... so sweet ... he got the happy news and the next second he was damn scared of losing her... thanks to the dr for informing him at the right time...

sik 😡 mar gaya phir bhi chein se jeene nahi dega... 😡 haunting her in dreams... riya was miserable... poor riya...

precap mein punishment ... 😳

update soon and thanks for the PM
Edited by nakshatra92 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi muskaan dear

it's been really long time, i was waiting your update

sorry for the late comments its just that I'm getting married in dec so i was little busy... hope u understand

so lets talk about the updates

chapter 22

it was awesome and romantic update ☺️ 👍🏼

loved the wat u showed the start with gifts

their POV's were beautifully written

love the way u have described arjun's feelings simply fabulous 👏

wow arjun's confession is sooo sweet

wow arjun remembered riya's dance with his shirt!!!!

wen riya heard the song she thought she was dreaming 😆 she is so innocent

loved their date mind blowing

the place was indeed awesome...

arjun tell her the truth and she is acting like she is fine... loved the way arjun handle her...

riya still can't get over wat happnd poor her


OMG precap is scaring


chapter 23

wow double update in 2 days you are awesome muskaan.

i don't knw hw u manage this but i really appreciate ur work.

she didn't get rid of that sik in her dreams. poor girl she has to go through all this

arjun is so sweet the way he handle her i just loved it

i was on cloud nine wen doc told her that she is pregnent but riya is thinking that the baby is not arjun's... and arjun will hate her for this

i just loved it the way arjun reacted wen doc said that riya is pregnent his happiness have no bound

OMG wat is she going to do wats in her mind arjun is dying every sec seeing her doing like that

Thank god for sending sameer just in time or even if he get late for 1 sec she must have killed herself and loved the way sameer hugged her he is so worried for her.

AND arjun's entry full on filmy style i cud imagine it the way u described it. IT WAS MARVELOUS

And that slap ooouuucchh it hurts
it was too harsh

riya is happy for a sec wen arjun said it was his child bt it faded wen it hit her head wat she was going to do with their baby.

finally arjun manage to get it in her mind that its his baby..


PRECAP seems interesting

Riya seducing arjun ☺️

eagerly waiting for it

update soon

thanks for the PM



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Posted: 11 years ago
an out standing update from daring queen
loved every bit of it
riya ki dar arjun ki gussa u potrayed it very beautifully
eagerly waiting for the next

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