The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21! - Page 82

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Posted: 12 years ago
res
main apna res kal unres karoongi two parts ka i read that and its awesome but kal unres karoongi

unres

finally after a long time you update this and its simply wow... i am admiring the update.

i think I am mad

so ch-22

as usual it was, awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous and mindblowing update dear.

And yaa also its very romantic update.

in start loved the way of there gifts.

loved there dresses. Both are admiring each other.

loved both pov. it was beautifully written.

So arjun remembered that riya is dancing with his shirt.

loved the song.

hayee ariya dance

but riya thinks she is dreaming.

loved his confession.

so arjun told all the truth to riya.

loved the way he handle riya.

continue soon.

precap looks scary.

thanx foer pm.


chapter- 23

wowo 2 days and back to back update.

me jumping..

and as usual it was, awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous and mindblowing update dear.

so she again saw sik dream love the way arjun conferted her.

aww... ariya kiss was hot.

me blushing.

wow riya is pregnent but what the she thinks that this child is sik.

she thinks that arjun hate her..

i just loved it the way arjun reacted wen doc said that riya is pregnent his happiness have no bound

what the riya is going to shoot herself.😲

and arjun was dying seeing her like this.

thank god rathore came in right time.

aww arjun was angry on riya.

precap looks blushy blushy

continue soon.

and thanx for pm.


Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was just like a thriller episode! I was sitting on the verge of my chair to read the next lines!
Even within the whole race, I got a glimpse of the bro-sis love between Rathore and Riya!
The slap was a bit harsh, but yes of course, necessary!
Loved the possesive side of Arjun too!

p.s. More than all that I loved the precap! 😉 Do update fast!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a nice turn in story...
Oh ho arjun naraz hogaya to saza b achi hogi... :p
Oh poor riya n arjun
Arjun was dying each sec to Sav riya
It was awesome...
Let's c Nw wat riya does... :)
Thanx for pm
Waiting for nxt :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
But I m unable to read ur some ch...
Plz pm me those...
I hv missed those ch...
Plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
why r u so damn good...i cant put long comments coz u make me speechless when i finish reading ur story...trust me pursue ur future in writing u r gonna be a great one...hats off muskaaan...the title of the story is fading butterfly..but u r a glowing butterfly in terms of writing...loads of love... n sorry couldnot comment for some time.was in hospital...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH god muskan di...
ap aise darawne precaps dena bandh kar dijiye please!!
meri saasein ruk gayi thi...😃
yah..ONLY U ARE TO BE BLAMED FOR THAT...!!
Because apne kuch parts blog pe move kar dia hai...!!
ANd because of that i could not follow the story properly!!! even i thought that it was sik's baby!!
and secondly...U HAVE NOT YET GRANTED ME ACCESS TO UR BLOG DI...even though i am not a silent reader😭 pllzzz add me again...!!! whenever i try to access those parts there is a page saying REQUEST ACCESS..YOU DO NOT HAVE SUFFICIENT PERMISSION TO VIEW THE PAGE...MY ID IS chocoishi15@gmail.com...please let me know if i need to do something else after you add me again..how do i proceed after u have sent me the invite??!! and where do i get to view the invite?? please tell me...i am really naive when it comes to wordpress...i don't understand a single thing there!!!
OK..end of my complaining session!!!...coming to the update!!
thank god precap me jo tha was only a dream!!!!(again your fault...because i seriously thought that it is sik's baby🤢🤢)
oh god!! what was she about to do!!!?? gun?? kill ?!!*meh fainting**
Thank god arjun still has those big boss eyes on her !!!
loved the way arjun rushed..almost like a maniac!!
*sigh*..rathod ne bacha lia!!😃*i feel contented*...
poor dr sarita... she must be thinking that the couple is mad!!! both were reacting as if A mountain has fallen on their heads😆😆
Ria ka to samajh bhi ata hai...but Arjun ka "not expected"..was not expected by me!! khud yad nai rehta kya!!!😆😆
thank god ria is fine!!😕i was really so much worried!!
Beautiful update!!!! awsome!!! please...maine upar jo bhi bak bak kia...please!!..add me!! again!!!..i still cant access those parts didi...please!!
Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
good update
sikander chapter finish
thank god rawte came on time
hurdle time over happy time ahead
arjun riya and baby
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Posted: 12 years ago
sory muskaan...couldnt comment on ur last update...nd even this one...i m only able to read upto the part where riya gets to knw dat she is pregnant...

plz do something muskaan...i eagerly waited for this TFB update...nd now whn its here...i m not able to read it...

as i told u...i m a mobile user...nd the pictures are not loading properly in th mobile even after multiple reloading attempts...

why dnt u update in ur blog...its easy to read it there...

plz find a solution to this problem...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nd pplz dnt mind for me not have commented on chptr 22 nd 23...

coz pura padha hi nahi to cmmnt kaise karu...

plz
plz
plz
plz
plz
plz
plz
plz
plz
plz
do something muskaan...

i love this story very much and u knw dat...

pls do something...

love
Aisha
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg yayy...!!!
finally you updated...1! and two back to back updates wow...!!!
they were superbly awesome fantastic...!!
i have no words to describe...!!!
arjun's surprise for riya was awesome..!!! she was so happy...!!! both were complimenting each other perfectly...!!! love how he did all that to make her feel special.. but he knew that the most priceless thing is riya..!!! his life./...!!
and the way made her blush... haaye mar dala
the song was perfect...!! and there sweet moments in that song... very romantic..!!
just when everything was going right... it again took a turn..!!
he told her most of the truth... and poor girl was so shocked...!!! love how arjun was trying to make her understand that nothing happened and he loves her more than anything in the world..!!! and would not let anyone hurt her...!!!
and riya she is still having that bloody sik's🤢 nightmare..!!! love how he was there to comfort her whenever she needed...!!!!
finally both in one room...!!!
that morning part was very sweet naughty naughty arjun having his morning kiss..!! and riya she obvious to everything is enjoying her sleep..!! but she sure know how to respond😉 aww she was so happy that time...!!!
hmm janab doesn't want to disturb her so left her a note and a cake...!!!
woahhh...!!!riya pregnant?😲 wow..!! but she thought this is sik's baby..!!! poor girl was so shocked and scared of whats she gonna tell arjun...!!
her battle with her mind and heart was beautifully written and described...1!!
she just can't see arjun again hating her or just can't see him hurt...!!!
thank god arjun decided to see that camera and saw what she was upto..!! and told sam to reach their home asap..!!
again apt song for the situation... arjun's fear was again awesomly described..!!! he was happy that he is going to be a father yet at the same time worried for riya and their baby...!!!
he was so worried for her and their baby...!!!
those scenes with the song were so beautifully written.. could actually see them happening in front of my eyes...!!!
thank god sameer came on time and stopped her from hurting herself...!!!
arjun was so relived to see her safe yet angry to know that she took this step and didn't trust him enough to tell him about her dilemma..!! and that slap😲 well it was kind of expected from him seeing how much angry he was../!!!
riya has to do a lot to manaofy him..!!! woahh she is gonna seduce him cool..!!!
somehow i wanted this update to go on and on and on...!!!😆
can't wait to see what this riya do to seduce him...!!!
feeling so happy for ariya.. both going to be parents yayy and a royal baby's gonna arrive...!!!
precap is very interesting...!!!
ariya ka sr and but arjun is still angry...!!!
continue soon...!!!
waiting eagerly for the next part...!!!

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