The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21! - Page 81

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

hiii

i have to admit that i havent watched th eshow regularly, i have just wathed some scenes of arjun and riya, but after she dead i have stoped watching...

and now randomly i have found your amazing work,

i have to say in the beginning i really hate arjun but later we get to know why he did what he did,
and riya she is just a sweatheart, the idea with the cameras was just awesome and the bond between riya and rathore just fabulous..dont forget amit😊
ufff i would love to write more but right now im just too exited to read more, but i have seen that you have for your 2 thread in a blog..need your help pleaseee say how can i read the parts

pleaseee

thanks allottt dear... i am touched ...
hey give me your email..i will send a req soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Di u sent me a Pm n i know!
You do expect a comnt!!

But Im sory!
um unable to read because of this buggy thingy!

if posible plz email me,



N ya!!

MY NAME IS SUMAYA!
I AM NOT A SILENT READER😃


hey sumaya..

i will mail you the part soon too...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys!!

I KNOW YOU WONT BELIEVE IT!!

I AM UPDATING!! Lol!

Well here is the part but don't forget to read the last note too!

Okay!

Okay so! This was the part..well that song sequence was not needed but I thought that song suited the scene and it was very much apt for the emotions they felt.. and I swear it has taken a lot of my efforts to write it down! So I want long replies.. or else..

You know I post part in pictures and I will have no problem posting these pictures in PMs.. To ONLY those people, who comment sincerely..

And by sincerely I mean, long replies.. I know I was out for so much time but still, I need long replies! MERI MARZII!! Okay!

I will PM next part to only those people who will post a long comment.

So..long replies..or else no update for you.

Isse zyada saaf shabdo me mai nahi keh sakti, to SAMJHE YA SAMJHAUN!

MUSKAAN

P.S.

these are the people who commented whole heartily..my love and thanks to them..😳😳


naughtykittyyy

anu91

IshitaRocks015

Leki

_TaNi_

Aks13

iluvrainaarti

Aabish_02

star_fan1

hangok

angelicdeepti

nakshatra92

_Nikita_

life93

Sumu4JayD

Krishnaluv94

rashikhandelwal

vanya9

devilindisguise

-Beth-

Faruheer

beenish248

ameeranalikhan



a very very very thanks to these people who replied and made my day.. thanks guys!!👏


others please unres karo apna comment and let me know...😉


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anu91 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res/unres
me first just dancing..
Muskaan!!!!!!!!u really updated after two days 😲.😲.😲...I am beyond shock...
I was in office i received mail notification that u have received PM for TFB i just rubbed my eyes to conform myself whether i am seeing right or wrong lol😆.😆.😆.😆
Thanks for quick update dr...
Update was a treat!!!!!!! fantastic one no words... riya's nightmares it hurts her like anything poor girl!!!!!!!
Arjun consoling ria was beyond words...
Wt a good morning kiss Mrs rawte is enjoying the kiss in sleeping also and she is definitely a kumbhkaran!!!!!!
She is doubting on herself with sik!!!! i really feel pity for her...
note from Arjun with cake was cute thing!!!!!!!
Thank god doctor called Arjun and informed him...
Ria dilemma and Arjun caring madness u written so good and well dr... thanks to Sam he came at right time... she deserved that slap even though she taught she was wrong...once she would have informed to Arjun if they have talked means it won't come to this length...finally they sort out the things superb superb superb!!!!!!!!
Precap☺️.☺️ !!!!!!waiting for ur next update impatiently plz don take so much time Cont soon will be waiting...
Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for not commenting long comment i have recently got a job i work 5 days and my inbox have lot of updates that is not read cant able to write a long reply i will try so please dont do that sorry agr bura lge toh
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Posted: 11 years ago
UNress ...
Do not thank me for comment dude you deserves that comment ..😃
I belive if we read some ones work we should appreciate his or her ( Mean it ) .. 😳
Coming to update ..
Marvelous update man Hats off i don't how u guyz manage so much but i really loved this chapter yarr .. Take A Bow ..
so she didnot get rid of that sikkander in her dreams he is hunting her till date man i am feeling very sad for riya .. 😭
aw arjun is sweet the way he handle her i lover it..
riya thought the child father is sikkander firt i was shocked than i remmember reading that dr confrim she is not raped ( as i did not read all chapters yet i have to read haye i cant wait i am little busy so will take time in reading all chapys ) then the scene when dr called him and its confrom its arjun baby i was
doing happy dance 😆 .. Thank God she is safe man i loved arjuns reaction .. Now riya has to seduce him .. Eagerly waiting .. Update soon .. Thank u for thiss lovly chapter .. Loved it .. Great work 👏
Edited by beenish248 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

That's shocking, scary yet a mind blowing one dr...!!!

U r a damn good writer...!!!

OMG that b*****d still haunted her in her dreams...!!!! That nightmare shaken her to the core...!!! She was hell disturbed n panicky...!!!! Phew...somehow Arjun managed to calmed her down...!!

Wow she really sleep like a kumbhkaran...Arjun kissed her but she didn't had a clue about that although she responded him back..awww can't resist her hot husband even in deep sleep...!!!

Wht the...!!! The happiest news in the world for her bcme dreadful as she thought that the child is of Sikander...!!

Riya's illusion about Arjun not accepting the baby was a hell scary...!!!

The note that Arjun left for her was sweet...!!!!

Riya MVs were so painfull...!!! OMG she was thinking all wrong at that time...!! Aww poor baby...Arjun wanted to soothe her pain but she was lost in her own world n avoided him as she was so shattered...!!!!

The whole segment where Riya tried to kill herself was hell frightening...!!! Can't describe in words that how I feel whn I read that portion...!!! U had written it exceptionally well...!!!

Arjun's plight was inexpressible at that moment...!!!!!

The way u describe Arjun n Riya's emotional turmoil through that song was damn beautiful...!!!!!

Phew...Rathod reached there in time n saved her frm doing a grave mistake...!!!

Loved how Arjun poured out his heart in front of her n cleared all her misunderstandings...but he was deeply hurt coz of her this act...!!!

Precap looks exciting...😉

Thanx 4 pm dr...

Continue soon...

P.S: Plzzz post all the updates of Ariya ss never say never...

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
its nice i can understand the arjun's plight of loosing his family after all noone wants to live alone 10 on 10 filled with emotions and thnk god rathore comes on tym and the song was gud nyc selection i hope this is gud for u as i m working cant write much sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well I caught up with two updates!!!
First thing first...man u are a dhamkee queen,and that to in simple way and i loved that!!!
haha nice!!
well U made ariya look beautiful,for that bravo!!
i seriously love this romantic Arjun...caring a part which is hard to imagine but your writing make it easier...
the way he was being a sweet gentlemen...man are they any left hehe!!
and the way he fulfilled her dance wish wow kya bolun uske bare mein!!!
and the part where he disclosed the truth,well Riya had the right to be shocked now,doesnt she..
Sudden a bomb dropped on you and when ppl ask are you hurt is absurd thing!!
her fears the way u have described is damn good..totally loved it!!!
but Arjun didnt leave her,not even for a single sec...always was there as her rock!!!!
true person and lover!!!even husband!!
well the news of her being pregnant woahhh yippeEE!!!
but looks like Riya is thinking along different lines all together!!!
but again she was not in her right mind,wasnt she!!!
Arjun happiness was short lved..poor soul..god knows how many deaths he died seeing his love trying to kill herself!!!
again marvelous job in describing Arjun fears dis time and Riya worries...
Just love it!!!!
Sameer thank god for him..just in time!!1
Dreading thinking wht would have happen if he had missed...!!!!!
well lets not go in that path...good for all us!!!
then Arjun entry..!!!
the slap..ouch...!!!
his words wow!!!!
when something couldnt be explained in softer word harsh words do the job!!
now Riya knows it was their symbol of love that she was planning to Kill!!!
My bottom line is that Lovely Updates..enjyed reading the roller coaster of emotions...
Romance,love,fear,happiness care concern,anger..!!
Well u r a fab writer and thanks for the stry!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow thnku for update dat tooo very soon ;)
Loved d way wrote each n every expression ..,
But m scared for Riya...
She iZ gettin into depression...
D way she iZ hallucinating n dreamin dose bad days f life ...
She's just destroying herself
N nw dat she iZ pregant wid Arjun's child n din remember dere lovemaking m just scared hpe so she don harm her or dere baby ...
Hpe arjun find it at time and put sme sense into her n take her to sme Differnt place give her lot f love to build new memories so dat she could d old n bad ones...
Lukin forward for nxt chap dat too soon ..
Thnx for pm :)

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