Well I caught up with two updates!!!
First thing first...man u are a dhamkee queen,and that to in simple way and i loved that!!!
haha nice!!
well U made ariya look beautiful,for that bravo!!
i seriously love this romantic Arjun...caring a part which is hard to imagine but your writing make it easier...
the way he was being a sweet gentlemen...man are they any left hehe!!
and the way he fulfilled her dance wish wow kya bolun uske bare mein!!!
and the part where he disclosed the truth,well Riya had the right to be shocked now,doesnt she..
Sudden a bomb dropped on you and when ppl ask are you hurt is absurd thing!!
her fears the way u have described is damn good..totally loved it!!!
but Arjun didnt leave her,not even for a single sec...always was there as her rock!!!!
true person and lover!!!even husband!!
well the news of her being pregnant woahhh yippeEE!!!
but looks like Riya is thinking along different lines all together!!!
but again she was not in her right mind,wasnt she!!!
Arjun happiness was short lved..poor soul..god knows how many deaths he died seeing his love trying to kill herself!!!
again marvelous job in describing Arjun fears dis time and Riya worries...
Just love it!!!!
Sameer thank god for him..just in time!!1
Dreading thinking wht would have happen if he had missed...!!!!!
well lets not go in that path...good for all us!!!
then Arjun entry..!!!
the slap..ouch...!!!
his words wow!!!!
when something couldnt be explained in softer word harsh words do the job!!
now Riya knows it was their symbol of love that she was planning to Kill!!!
My bottom line is that Lovely Updates..enjyed reading the roller coaster of emotions...
Romance,love,fear,happiness care concern,anger..!!
Well u r a fab writer and thanks for the stry!!!
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