The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21! - Page 85

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Posted: 11 years ago
bravo dude loved it .. chapter 15 was superb man i loved amit so much man he is such a sweet heart .. i loved the way he blackmail arjun i was laughing like hell .. finally ariya are one .. coming dhamakedar chapy 16 .. i must say arjun's plan was fab man hat off to ur mind i loved whole chapy dude ..shree is quite sharp arjun didnot doubt fake sikander but shree did .. finally arjun caught sikander and beat him i was jumping with joy .. that sikander is so cruel man i want kick that sick bas***d he was torturing her bloody arrgh finally that sick is dead yayyy ... loved it .. !
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyyy
i can read it now

will read it and try to comment,

by the way you have more ff???this will be interesting to read😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapy 17 .. what should i say damnit u r awesome writer yarr .. the king threaten docter hmm its seem dr will b dead in nervousness but thank God he safe ( lol) .. finaly both are out of danger i was so scared yarr ... arjun want to meet riya aww that was heart touching moment .. so riya has lost her memory she only remm their wedding few weeks .. riya is scared of arjun it was so heart breaking for him man i was really feeling bad for him .. i am damn sleepy damit will read remaing parts soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapy 18 ... aww gosh man that sikander is not leaving her alone in not her dreams damnit .. i loved the way u have portrayd their feelings for eachother .. she was kissing him n she tought he is in deep sleep i was blushing while reading that part .. thay all give her flowers that was touching moment .. she was feeling jealous lol .. loved it man
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Muskaan...Very Happy to see you back...
read two in a go...gosh dear trust me i am working and currently having 50 unread pms...which i must read and comment... god knows when i'll finish reading all...

coming to the update... good to see that even after so many days you managed the theme and excitement of the story... excellent..job indeed...

and riya and her sleep...arjun's best time to relish his treat😳😆

Riya and arjun's emotions are justified...both were thinking abt each other...but all well that ends well...i loved the dance scene in the previous part and it was awesomely written...

i am looking forward to see how she make up with arjun... well the question is will the just kiss and make up or??????😉

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update...
very emotional...
felt sad for riya...
so happy that everything became fine.
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
have read part 11

what a part the scene where arjun held her waist and she asks him to say that he loves her was just amazing,
and the way she accted stubborn only great...

loved the scene where she says to him in the flashback if she is a bad girl, dont know why but i really felt sad for her,😔

she is still in hospital and the precap makes me more excited, im going to read part 12 😊

owww your story is killing me , the way you wrote about arjuns rage is amazing and than his weak side😔


at last Riya is safe, thank god,
but why is she behaving so???

i just hope that this sik or whoever he is didnt touched her

next part😊

ohh my god, will you kill me ..
what a beginning for the part, im speechless for the son-mother scene😭
you want to make me just cry more, loved the son-dad scene and top of this where he said he found four sons..amazing👏👏👏
he set him free i cant belive this, just hope that his plan success...

part 14
oww the bond between this team kills me...

poor priya what she had to go through ...
sik will come,😲

part15
oww the late fond son-father bond is awesome...
after reading, it makes me realize how much i missed amit,
great to see him back and with arjun it s just hilarious...
what a plan from arjun, 👍🏼
for the rest i cant say anything☺️

ohhh nooo i have to stop here😔
just where it's most exciting
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 16
the evil is there...
i have to admit that he is really inteligent..

what she kissed him🤢..
ohh nooo not again hospital😔


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oww i love arjuns dad..
its great to see rathore breaking rules😊
ohnooo riyaa lost her memory😲 but he can use it for good or?? i mean he can show her his love...
please arjun do something that she doesnt fear from you

precap: i like this inteligent priya😊

oyyy amit is back 😃
and riya jaleous was awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
One of the most beautiful chapters written by you! 👏
Every emotion of Ariya was portrayed very well!
"the happiness of seeing someone you love, is like an oasis in the hot-dry dessert." This line was so incredibly beautiful!! ❤️
This line portrayed Riyas feelings sooo well!
Loved the way Riya hugged Arjun like there was no tomorrow and the way Arjun was consoling Riya was just magical!
Their love for each other is so pure!
Arjun being naughty in the morning while Riya was sleeping was really cute
Awww yay Riya is pregnant...can't believe she thinks its that disgusting guy Sik's baby
Poor Riya has suffered soo much because of him
Can't believe she was about to kill her self because of that sick guy
Thank God Arjun saw her called Rathore...perfect timing of Rathore that he reached at the right time and saved Riya
Loved the way he was hugging her and the way she just straight up told him that she was pregnant
The way Arjun kept telling her that he loves her and shes all he's and that he'd kill himself if she hurt herself ever again was too cute and showed his caring side very well
The emotions Arjun was going through at that time was just magnificent!
Thank God the misunderstanding was cleared
Pre cap looks really interesting...can't wait to see how Riya is going to manofy Arjun
Thank you so much for the PMs
Continue soon!! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow
Loved it
Sorry for commenting late ...I was a bit busy...
Omg...Arjun told Riya every thing...
Aww...love the way Arjun soothed Riya...
Riya was scared in her dream...
Omggg...Riya PREGNANT...
SH*T riya thinks it siks baby ...damn ...
Riya was about to shoot herself...I almost got a heart attack...
Thank god rathore reached on time...
Arjun would have killed himself if something happened to Riya...
Finally riya and baby are OK...THANK GOD...
Nice precap...
UPDATE SOON...

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