The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Couldn' read it from mobile..
Will read it later..

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

first of alll

thank you

to dedicate this one to meee...

i m overwhelmed...i feel honoured...i feel blessed...

to even hav been mentioned in ur masterpiece...

A BIIIG THANK YOU MUSKAAN...

now abt th update

aww poor riya...she is nw even fearing Arjun's lovey dovey acts...bt its obvious after th past happenings betn her nd Arjun...

bt th update ws really heart warming vid a new arjun all together...

th bit of harsh flashbacks added a pinch of spice to it...

nd th sweet innocent scenes of ARIYA in bedroom in towel...nd thn on th breakfast table were awsm...

pls continue soon muskaan

eagerly wwaiting for th dinner date of Ariya...nd thn some lovey dovey romantic scenesss...nd also for th dance

continue soon

love

Aisha

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umamah70

@umamah70

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

wow..

awesome...

👏.👏.👏.👏

loved it to bits...

loved the way arjun protectively held riya while sleeping..

riya took care of his wounds at night..sweet...

hehe..riya didnt notice that he was JUST in towel...😆

riya scolded him for being careless..aww...

riya is still scared of him..

loved arjuns love towards riya...

riya is so cute and innocent...

arjun is taking her on date...wow..

arjun send her a drees..cute..😳

omg ...she thought he is going to scold her for taking the parcel...

loved the fbs..

loved the way arjun compliments and she starts blushing..☺️

nice precap...👍🏼

update soon...

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panchi01

@panchi01

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

Hi Muskaan ,

I just read ch21 and I liked it a lot . I really felt bad for riya's state in the flashback.

and I felt that arjun deserves this. His journey of getting back his fading butterfly should not be that easy.You write so well that I could imagine those things happening for real. The guilt in arjun's voice was so evident when he saw the parcel untouched and he remembered the past event regarding the parcel opened by riya and his reaction on it .But I couldn't read any other parts so the link/ continuity of the story for me broke. Can you just tell me how could I be able to access those parts of the story I really wanna read them .

But ch21 is amazing .

THANKS for the update😊

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

I am loving this loving Arjun! He is just so adorable.It's sad that the past still affects Riya so strongly; hopefully, Arjun will make new and happy memories. Can't wait to read more! What will Riya's reaction be?

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qsc12345678

@qsc12345678

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Kya update thi yaar.

Sorry thoda late hogaya update karne me. Kyunki exams chal rahe the. Finally they are getting close to each other. Aww he was sad that riya didnt open the gift and hope that riya ko gift acha lage. Hayye they are going to dinner together. Hope they have a nice dinner together. Kya precap tha yaar.

Ab jaldi se update de de tu.

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

oh god at at last i read it complete it was awsome the pain arjun's nature then melting and the sikander awwwiee he is one of my favo villain means i m telling about vidyut jamwal the case the evil nature rathore sir's anger the prince and the love everything is awsome

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

Hai muskan

Sab sai phlay Thanx buddy 4 mailing the story love u ❤️

Ik kamini chorni ki vajay sai 😡 Hmay update Mai problem aye kamini meray hath lag tujhay Mai chodoge nahi tere vajay sai Mai late ho gae update padhnay Mai

Upper say mera Lappy I hate it it don't work my star don't with me😭😭 Mail did not before

By god if mujhay mili Mai uska khoon ker donge copy cat 😡

Nw come on update

Awww morning segment awesome,wonderful,amazing superb

Ariya 's kiss😳

*blushing*

Awww dil garden garden ho Gaya muskan

Awww Riya ko gussa bhi atta hai

Small smile on my face whn I read Arjun' MV

Past really hurt

Together breakfast awww tht grt

1st time compliment Mai mar java

Awww Riya jumping compliment sun

Dhink chika dhink chika

Musu Mai tere pankha ban gae 😳

Thanx 4 mailing and pm me

Hugs to u and love u 🤗

Claps 4 u 👏

Update soon

Sorry 4 being late

Edited by Mishti_k5 - 12 years ago

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roses.09

@roses.09

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

I had a smile on my face when u wrote how arjun thinks riya is irresistible.

When he decided to back to work rather than sit at home, he had spoken and acted like a true police man. This shows his loyalty towards his work and public.

Aww riya is too sweet. She was well aware of arjun's movements at night and kept a check on herself as well so as to avoid hurting arjun. Really, riya is one of a kind! And Like you said, she can't hurt him even if she wants to.

Arjun: "She knew how to get angry?" Arjun laughed at his thought – well I laughed at his thought too J

The kiss was hot! made me blush along with riya. 😳

Supereb line = " She was my cure and I was her disease, she was giving me life but I was killing her." There is no better way to describe the current arjun-riya state 👏

Omg Riya is extremely innocent. Poor Arjun 😆 he was soo frustrated. But kya kare, he has to make up for all the past troubles riya had to go through. LOL @ riya pulling chair for arjun!

I am soo glad riya is finally getting her share of happiness.

I am sorry to hear that your amazing story got stolen by someone. But I believe that your fans would recognize your work and give you your well deserved credit for it.

Thanks for the pm, plz pm me for the nxt part as well. 😊

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#740

heyy as it is am here too commnt at last agnn br me plzz

ooo soo sweettt whole night he tuggng her

n she bcm protctv towards his wound bt at end she deftd☺️

well why nt...hw cn a grl prevent hotty's tug😉 on bed(tooo shmless mee😆)

bt her anger and arjun ' s thaught 😆😆 she realyy knows hw 2 get angry

bt how cn she notcd datt he s only in a towel...whn she bandgd him😲

touchng (upss bandgng)him widout notcng him😆

(br body🤬 andr shmless line frm me i know bt kyaa karoon😉😆)

naughty arjun ..his words 2 hr on joingn hr 2 his bath😳

he himslf flt shockd at his own words😆

oohhnoo agn dos old memors ..haunt dem..and der present too

" She was my cure and I was her disease, she was giving me life but I was killing her." so truee bt soonn da whole scenario wl b chngd by der love 4 eachodr 4 sure

and watng 4 dat moment

he wr her fav clr shirt yapp true lovy dvyyy😳

riya too innocnt she thought fruits are nt good & dsnt evn know da meangn of man pullng chair for a girl😳...she pull 1 4 him too😆

poor arjun😆

bt he wana tst da fruit whl she hv dem in her☺️☺️ he wl dfntly gt da bettr tst😉☺️

his simple word dat evrythng look gd on her hv such a big effct on her😳

bt da thought in his mind "nothng at all😲☺️😆"

hv a thought wht will happn if arjun sd dis 2 his innocnt princess😆

he s sooo eagr 4 7 pm😳

rathor is wright poor coconut(da yuummiiiest coconut evrr too😉)

bt agnnn dos memory haunt der present

poor arjun..riya dnt opn dat prcl...all his happy ness dd😭