The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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playagame

@playagame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

hey muskaan hw r u??
m really sorry for late rplying...actually i m off to the forum for about a month, dat's y i m not able to comment on any of ur work but i promise i'll comment all of them asap..just read last chapter of this ff...
wow just a beautiful n lovely chapter..
riya is worrying about his wound even in sleep..
n finally she realizes arjun in towel only..
oh god blush blush..
n she is angry on him n he likes it too dat she show her right on him..
soo sweet..
arjun ask her for dinner..
lovely,even he made her eat with him..
he also gifted her dress..
oh ho romantic arjun..not bad not bad..
but she don't even open it..
both the flashbacks is heartbroken.. i hope arjun make it well soon..
precap is scaring..
finally he told her truth..
wating eagerly for the next update..
plz continue soon..
late comment krne ke liye bada wala srry..

Edited by playagame - 12 years ago

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ashmi

@ashmifebaa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

waiting for your next update dear...

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umamah70

@umamah70

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

hi muskan...

jaldi update karo na...

its over a month but no update...😭

update...

UPDATE SOON...

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parvathycv

@parvathycv

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

I couldn't read the previous chapters..😭But this one was awesome.😊
First of all,I love the way both care for each other,,especially the morning moments and breakfast time.Riya scolding arjun and her fear and all were nicely written..👏
Flashback part was correctly mixed with the present situation and so happy to see the loving and naughty side of arjun.😳
I love the way u portray riya in your story..she is damn so innocent.👏
The gift part and the romantic moments followed by that was simply superb...
precap seems very interestig..😉
waiting for the next uptade...pls continue soon...

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

didi ye zyakti kyu?

i cant read anything😭

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

hollaaa dhamki queen missing ur dhamkiss...ppiilliizzz...ek dhamki de hi donaa n sath mein updt vii...

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Barunsanaya10

@Barunsanaya10

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

Is dere any prob di..
Y r u nt updatin..
It's been soo long...
Plz give us update :)

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Faruheer

@Faruheer

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#758

Hey I loved ur stories...
I m a new reader of ur stories
Awesome concept yar
It was new way to c the characters
Loved both arjun the dark one n the soft one
Awesome
Bt I m unable to read some parts
Plz accept my request
For this story I made my id on word press
Just for ur story
Plz allow me to read the parts..
Plz plz plz
Add me in buddy list
I joined this forum for Ariya stories
I loved ur this work I wud like to read ur other works too
Plz pm me ur other works on Ariya
I m new here
Zyada kuch to pata nh
Bt if u r gona help then it will work
Plz plz waiting for ur positive response
Plz accept it

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#759

I know guys you all would be wondering its my habit to run away from IF like this.. Although I was not completely inactive.. I was watching every move on this forum! but I am really sorry.. I just couldn't bring myself to update these ffs..i was really really occupied by some or the other things..but let me give you assurance!

I am now going to continue my ffs..all of them!

Hehe

This is the next part of TFB and the SLH will be updated too..so please bear me..

And I am really sorry to keep you all waiting for these months!

Hope you will forgive me and comment on this part...

Please..

Waiting eagerly...

MUSKAAN.

P.S. Riya is NOT DYING! As usual.. Arjun will save her.. [just in case you throw tomatoes and chappals at me!]

P.P.S. My inbox has 300+ msgs.. I am sorry but I am still unable to read them.. so if you want to say anything, (that is not private) plz say it on this thread..