The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#721

sweet update ...

arjun's compliments and riya's reaction...

blush blush she was blushing through out the part ...

arjun and lovey dovey 😆

rathod's comment poor coconut...

fb where riya opened the parcel was scarry... arjun and his anger... nw he was sad that riya didnt open the gift...

precap sounds interesting...

update soon

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#722

hi muskaan🤗... awesome update loved it...😉😉😉 awe😉 morning scene was just amazing...arjun riya baahon ke darmiyaan😉😃 n then riya's shyness aha😉 loved it she is naive😃 innocent...n pure loved when arjun made riya sit and 😉 also made ate her her foood...so sweet of arjun😉😉... n the dinner 's plans...😉 riya 's face was glowing with extreme happiness😃...her innocence can make anyone fall for her😃... and then arjun's gift 😃 haye kitani umeed se diya tha ...but their old memories...hope they will fade away soon😃... and their kiss😉...riya's shyness ...happiness make everything more beautufull 😉... now arjun ko sab kuch sikhana hoga riya ko😉 starting se😉... and the revealatins😲...hope everything will be better😃...loved ariya❤️... and update soon muski🤗

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Unres...
Wow..awexome update as usual...
Love all Ariya scenes.
Aww..Riya is really sooo innocent n sweet..n Arjun soo lost in her...
Love the angry yet concern Riya...and Arjun so loved the way she scolded him.
they had breakfast together...wow...
His one compliment makes her sooo happpy..
Rabthore mentally laughed at Arjun..the love stuck puppy..lolz..All lovey dovey...
Precap...oopz that something scary...
But interesting...
Update soon dear..
Love ur both works...
Take care...

Edited by Pisces_Gurl - 12 years ago

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

finally i have read it...but on the computer nt the phone
awesome update
ariya moments were lovelly
loved the way she got angry at him
awww they had breakfast together
the kissing scene was hot
the precap sounds scary
thanks 4 pm
waiting for more
continue soon

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Super Res
P.C se parhke fir comnt karungi

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

OH Em gee Musky...u know wat ...i saw d chapter d day u posted

but i didnt read it as i wanted to read d parts slowly n aaram se

n i took a right decision

Dat was brilliant

i read it n i m just smiling like anything

beautiful

Loved every thing about the chapter

Arjun n ria ...trying to discover a new side of there relationship

the caring n angry ria

an equally loving arjun

Loved it

i loved all d lovey dovey romantic stuffs

he selected a dress for her

n she being Ria, didnt even opened it

n d breakfast session

dt was lovely

pls pls pls continue very soon musky

i m in love with the story even more

Purva

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Muski beta fb me bta dena unable to read it
mera arni wala pending h tumhari taraf se aur dua par cment bi

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

Incredible, Fantastic n Enchanting update dr.

Awww Arjun was completely lost in her.

Each moment that he spend with her in the present made him remind their miserable past. Poor guy...!!!!!

Wow she couldn't sleep properly caz she was worried about his wound. Loved her concern for him.

OMG she got angry with him n her sarcastic comments were fab...!!!!!! Unbelievable!!!!!!!

Loved Arjun's POV about her.

Ariya moments were so sweet n romantic...!!!!!!!

Loved their cute argument. Finally thy started behaving like a couple.

OMG she again got afraid of Arjun but Arjun pacified her instantly.

Awww poor gal…. so confused caz of Arjun's changed behaviour.

Yeyyy he is going to take her for dinner. Really looking forward to Ariya's first date.

FB was scary. Hate him for the way he behaved with her in the past.

I m happy that nw he is mending all his past mistakes.

Awww he wore her fav colour shirt.

The line,"She was my cure…….. killing her" was really touchy...!!!!!!

That breakfast scene was hilarious. She is so nave...!!!!!!!

Wht the!!!!!! She pulled chair for him.

Arjun bcme so naughty but loved this side of him.

Awww She bcme so happy by his compliments. She is such a cute girl...!!!!!

Arjun send a dress for her. That's so sweet!!!!!!

Loved Rathod's POV about Arjun.

Loved Arjun's eagerness to saw Riya in that dress but she wore another dress.

Wow she didn't touch the parcel caz of her past experience.

Awww Riya's happiness knw no bounds whn he said that this is for her.

Precap looks interesting...!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

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panchi01

@panchi01

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Hi Muskaan

I m a new member in india forum and recently I came across ur ff and I m just stunned at ur writing ability. u r an amazing writer and I couldn't stop myself from commenting. I read ten parts and I loved it . but frankly speaking I hate arjun for torturing riya so much still love ur story. but I cant read the second thread of ur story and I am eager on reading it. plese do allow me to read ur story further.

hope u accept my request. I don't know how to post my comment but I m trying it . I hope I have posted my comments in the right place