The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Superb update... 1st part ws bit emotional with Riya hvng nightmares abt Sikki nd all but why cnt she hv drmz of moments spnd with Arjun... anyways the way Arjun pacified Riya nd controlled the situation ws great he is really strong... ah ha Riya kissed Arjun lo aftr loosing her memory she bcme more bold i see... Riya jealous of nurse and acted she is not well nautanki.. Amit i love him... poor Arun no one is allowing him to spnd some tme alone with Riya...bechara...lol precap well evn i thnk its better to reveal truth to Riya nw ... continue soon

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#562

awesome part... lvd it 👏

first part was emotional ... riya having nightmares and her fear... arjun's concern... her kiss ,she forgot arjun had his eyes open even in sleep ...

second part was jst opposite... riya jealous and her fainting... wonderfull acting... everyone got tensed and riya surprised to see evryone's care especially arjun's... amit's entry to add much to arjun's angry...

he wanted to spent sme tyme wid riya bt poor arjun it seems like he has to wait...

precap sounds good...

update soon...

Edited by nakshatra92 - 12 years ago

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

hey muskan...how r u dear

ok first i want to say sorry in advance that till diwali i will not able to comment on ur any update because i am going back...i will come back in oct or nov

but please dear dont erase my name from your pm and blog list

i really want to read ur each and every story...

this is my humble request

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about todays update

lol it really make me scare as well as laugh

first the sikandar part...god why is he here after the death...it like her curse ariya...

i hope this will not affect my ariya relationship

riya really got scare by those nightmare...but finally today she got a peaceful sleep in arjuns arms...

lol that kiss scene is so bold and hot one ...riya will do such kind of things,,,,,,,,,hmm quite impossible...but its really happening...i m really happy for her...and even for arjun also

finally he got her in his arms , so close, and even she kissing him...

next day that flower scen is so cute and funny...poor arjun no one is giving him and his wife some private time...

lol that bandage scen ...riya actually feel jealous by nurse and made this drama...wow intelligent girl...arjun is only her...no one have any right on him even looking at him...its like the lioness inside her is now awake...

lovely lovely update dear...

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Wow! Bechara Arjun.. Haha. He isn't getting alone time with Riya. I know i'm probably the only person that thinks this, but the way Rathore and Arjun are either all together or on completely opposite sides is really great. Rathore really cares for Riya, and it's great to see that! Thanks for the update!

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

amazing muskaan
very cute update..!!!
loved ria's jealousy...she pretended to faint...OMG
how dare that nurse droolofy on arjun
rathore Shree n chotu r so nice...
taking so gud care of arjun n ria
amit is bk...ria happy n arjun...he has a kabab mein haddi now
update soon

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Sabia Khan

@BDCTG

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

My sweetu 'Dhamki Queen'...!!

But, where's your Dhamki today darling?

Achcha, leav it. Coming to the faaab update---

'SOMETIMES IT IS NOT THE WOUND THAT HURTS,
BUT THE SCARS LEFT BY THEM'

what a thought Aapi! What a line! Amazing...You've left me wordless!

Rhose words are so true! We can forget the pain caused by the hurts...but the scars...that compells us to remember the pain much more.

Aaww...Riya baby is so NAVE! How could she think that Arjun was really in a sooo deep slumber that he couldn't even feel what she was doing!!

Hmm...jealous! Riya...u drama queen! Haa...haa...haa...!!

And Amit...the 'monstar' (according to Arjun...obviously!)

he is so stubborn! And Riya...enjoying all the attentions of everyone!

Precap sounds scary...what if Riya is not really in a sleep...and she heard everything Rathod said to Arjun????

Nooo...!

Continu soon Aapi! Otherwise this tention will eat me!! (now I'm behaving like a drama queen!)

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

What an update sis.
Just loved each and every part of this.
The way arjun consoled riya. And the way he reacted when he got to know that the docs stoped her to go to him when she needed him the most.
Poor she , even the thoughts never left her after her loss of memory.
Loved the way she rans to him and hugged him. Riya use her mind well. Aakhir acp ki biwi hai.
And aftr that the way arjun consoled her, by his words. She seems surprised by seeing his side. Hmm.
Poor he want to say that he is in love with her, but he couldn't . This will more hurt him.aah.
Then our unbelievable riya..
She was thinking that he would allow her to kiss him.. Even in that condition she was thinking about kiss.
Not thinking, but also she kissed him during his sleep. Poor she, she never know arjun wasn't asleep. And poor he, she left him abruptly.
Now arjun was thinking abt the pain and the scars on her body. And underlined words are really amazing sis.

Hmm she got a surprise after seeing the flowrs, and the eagerness of arjun to be alone with his wife..poor he..
Arre ab toh usse chod do apni biwi ke saath. Then the nurse.
She is jealous that the nurse will dress his wounds. He he.
Grr the nurse was checking his BP but she cause rise of BP in riya's body..lol
and she acted as if she is weak. Now she is doing well drama. And the family, shree. Chotu. Sam and mr raute cares for her a lot.
Specially sam. Just love sam for this.
So finall she told that she doesn't like the nurses..he he. And for what injection!!!
And then amit. Hmm he seems very important for riya.
Then arjun's irritation fr chotu..hehe.
Monster amit. He is a daring boy.
Kisi ne alela nahi choda usko apni biwi ke saath.
Poor arjun.

Then precap sounds scary. Arjun is right, but she was in the condition to handle this trauma. And she nearly ra*ed !! How.. That bloo*y sik..grr.
I hope she will be fine, and everything will be perfect in their life. Ab i can't see them that much apart. And not forgetting, the line.. Which girl would resist when acp arjun himself, will fall for any girl. This is so true. Just loved the entire part.
Muha sis.
Thank you for such awesome update .

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umamah70

@umamah70

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

wow...

awesome...👏

loved it to bits...

poor arjun...

Riya is having dreams about sik.. omg...😲

loved when riya kissed sleeping arjun...so cute...😳

riya jealous...loved when she said He is my husband! Look away you, - you nurse!!...🤣

riya acted to get faint...lol...

koi in dono ko akelea hi nahin chorta...bechara arjun...😆

loved the way arjun reacted on arrival of amit...😆

nice precap...

update soon...

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anu008

@anu008

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#569

Wow ...What an update... U really habe the skill to bring up the correct emotions in the characters...👍🏼 .I.ve read your first ten chapters

in one go ..and put up a comment which must have been my longest comment in my IF history. If you''v missed it I'll jst giv u an intro of me .I'm a huge fan of indian serials even though i'm not an Indian.and i lobe toread my favorite couples fan fictions as well.And let me say that you have done a great job of writing this ff. If I find hard to gather the words to write this one small comment,i can imagine how much hard work,your time and imagination must have gone to each wonderful update you manage to turn up one after the other.

I really do want to read the parts which are in your blog as well.

Keep up the gud work buddy...