The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CH 13

Poor Arjun!

Full of nerve wracking guilt. The report of the events have almost killed him.

The way he cried and Rathore's consolation- heart breaking!

Nice father-son moment between Arjun and his dad.

Arjun in revenge mode- scary!!!

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CH 14

The Sik-Riya moments were so painful to read.

Drugging her, making her cause herself pain- the man is a psycho!!!

And touching her...attempting to molest her- he should get his due!

It will naturally happen when our supercop comes to know about it😃

And now that Sky is dead, part of the revenge is done.

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

CHAPTER 15

The love confession, just awesome!

You do depict their private moments very well.

Riya is so insecure in her love, it is only natural.

And Sikander is so SICK!!!

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

CHAPTER 16

Was Riya's request to Arjun bold or what?😊

Me still blushing!!!

The scene from A's childhood was again cute, the moment he realizes he wants to be a police officerwa:) And his mother's death:( Very nice touch.

Really liked the observation about how Arjun thinks they are characters in a crime thriller, very meta:)

Lovely bonding between Arjun, his dad, Rathore and the team as well.

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CHAPTER 17

Highpoints:

The hospital scenes and Arjun knowing about Riya's condition in detail- the molestation, her memory loss...

Very poignant, the reactions of all the characters...all of them love Riya so much, esp Arjun!!!

And so sweet...they want to meet each other from their respective hospital beds!!!

It is so sad that R has had a relapse after all this, she still remembers the old unfeeling Arjun,

Seems that their relationship is back to square one🤢

Good chapter😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CHAPTER 18

So both characters are trying to come to terms with one another, trying to discover what they mean to each other.

I just love the way you showed the gradual progress of their relationship

Love, pain, insecurity, anguish...all that was portrayed so beautifully!!!

Waiting to see how Arjun and Riya recover from their scars, both emotional and physical

Thanks for making me a part of this journey. Hope you liked the comments!

Thanks,

Amrutha.

P.S. Will comment directly on IF thread itself, so please do check after every chapter:)

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

Hey all…

here is 19th part!

this part was very close to my heart, I myself read it twice just to confirm the right emotions were portrayed by my writings..

Please read and reply what you all felt, I would be waiting eagerly for this one. Do not forget to reply, please this is my favorite part!

CHAPTER NINETEEN

And one announcement, I am not doing any PMs for this part. So do not get hyper if you don't receive one for this part.

MUSKAAN

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

Hey all…

here is 19th part!

this part was very close to my heart, I myself read it twice just to confirm the right emotions were portrayed by my writings..

Please read and reply what you all felt, I would be waiting eagerly for this one. Do not forget to reply, please this is my favorite part!

CHAPTER NINETEEN

And one announcement, I am not doing any PMs for this part. So do not get hyper if you don't receive one for this part.

MUSKAAN

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

it was lovely Muskaan, and i could relate to all the feelings you wanted to express in this :)

Be it Sameer's confusion about what to write? or the whole team trying to protect Arjun and Riya, or even Rathore finally doing something unethical just to protect his friend :)

and now back to Ariya, poor Riya hopefully she'll be able to deal with her dreams again :(

She has suffered a lot, and is still suffering, so i can understand why Rathore wishes that she never remembers anything, it will be harder for her, yet knowing Sik is dead, and Arjun loves her might also heal all her wounds with time :(

And poor Arjun, he has suffered already so much, seeing Roshni killed in front of him, hurting Riya everyday, having Riya kidnapped, and finally Riya hysterical about Sik, the murder and all, yet he still has the courage to believe that he'll succeed in making Riya his again, and make her happy :)

Let's hope he succeed and both are happy :)

Like they say our past never really leaves our present nor future, same thing happening with Arjun and Riya for the time being :)

Please continue soon Muskaan :)

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago