Thorns of destiny&love FF Muskaan's re-entry - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
very interesting continue soon please and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
initially reading the concept of this story, I thought you are copying the story of maaneet, but just then recalled it want your story only and plus read your note lolz
awesome concept
update soon
by the way, can send me the link of maaneet version ff?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Diff concept and very interesting ! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

wow another ff ...plz continue😃

thank u very much 4... pm😳
waiting 4 da update😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
congrats...
oh this one...
have read the Maaneet version...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Very interesting:-)
Will be eager to read this!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Dev and Arnav are brothers.They are like best buddies.Dev is silent.Arnav is a cheerful guy who loves having fun.

Their parents Srivastav and Karthi call them to the drawing room.
S:We called you both to tell you an important thing.You guys are still playing.You both had enough.We have decided to get both of you married.
They are shocked.
D:Marriage?
A:So soon?In a hurry?
S:Hurry?You guys have reached the right age to get married.
A:Mom...please...
Karthi smiles.
K:Don't worry.If you both see the girls we have chosen,you both will be in a hurry to get married.
Arnav asked in a sarcastic manner:Why?Are they that beautiful?
K:Yes.I want both of you to get married to beautiful girls.One's wife should not be more beautiful than the other one's wife.So we have chosen twin sisters.
D:Twin sisters?
K:Ya.Khushi and Muskaan.Muskaan matches Arnav as they both are bubbly.Khushi is sweet and quiet like Dev.
Karthi shows them the photograph of Khushi and Muskaan.Dev and Arnav are truly impressed by the sisters.Karthi and Srivastav smiled seeing their face expression.

Dev and Arnav go to see Muskaan and Khushi.Muskaan and Khushi come with tea and sweets.Dev and Arnav can't take their eyes off their respective partners.

They go to 2 different rooms to talk.
Dev and Khushi are so shy that they can't talk.
She looks at him.She becomes conscious seeing him looking at her.She smiles with tension.He also smiles with tension.

Suddenly he notices her bare ear.

D:Your ear?You did'nt put earring on thi ear?

She touches her ear:Oh..my earring is missing.

Dev notices childish sorrow.

D:Don't worry,you will get your earring back.

Suddenly he sees an earring lying on the floor.He takes it with a smile.She does'nt see it.Without thinking anything he puts the earring on her ear.For a moment she was numb.

Both of them come back to reality and become shy.Slowly a smile appeared on their faces.She runs to the front room.



Muskaan observes Arnav.

M:You always wear this kind of shirts?

A:Ya.Why?

M:I feel you need to improve your dress style.
Arnav is embarassed.
M:You find my shirt funny?
She chuckles.
Arnav is impressed by her smile.He forgets his embarrassment and lets himself drown in her smile.

M:I think we don't need anything else to talk.

A:But…

Arnav wanted to talk more.

Muskaan went to the front room.


Their father Anand:Khushi...did you like Dev?
Khushi looks at Dev with a smile.She is very shy.She nods her head.Dev is very happy.
A:Muskaan..?
M:I liked Arnav.
Arnav is happy.
A:Did you guys like my daughters.
They smile.Anand is happy.

Khushi and Muskaan are in the room.
M:Khushi..did yiu really like the guy?
Khushi blushes:Yes.
M:Whom did you like?Arnav or Dev?
G:Why are you asking such a stupid question?Dad chose Dev for me.So I did'nt even notice Arnav.
M:But i noticed both.Arnav is really crazy.But Dev is mature.You are lucky to have Dev.
G:Sometimes you are really crazy.That may be the reason why dad chose Arnav for you.

Muskaan was embarrassed:Khushiii…

Khushi giggled.



Dev is in the temple.Khushi stands near him unknowingly to pray.They don't see each other.

When Dev turns his face he sees Khushi.He is surprised to see her near him.He is happy about the pleasant surprise.
D:Hi Khushi.
Khushi is surprised to see him near her.
G:You?I did'nt know that you are here.
Dev smiles.
D:Do you come here regularly?
G:Yes.Goddess is my strength.
He smiles.
G:Ok, I am going now.
D:Ok.See you..we will be there on your birthday.We have been invited for your's and Muskaan's birthday party.
She smiles.

Dev and Arnav wear shervani and go for the birthday party.
They are shocked to see Khushi and Muskaan in the same kind of dress.
M:How will we recognise who Muskaan and Khushi are?
Khushi and Muskaan smile seeing their condition.
Arnav whispers to Dev's ears:I have an idea.You just say that their dressing is horrible.
D:What nonsense?How can i say that?They will be hurt.Not only that.Their dress is very beautiful.
M:Just tell.Otherwise we won't be able to identify our partner.
D:Ok.But why me?Why can't you say that?
M:You tell bro.
D:Ok.
Dev's lips shiver.
D:Eh...eh...actually..actually..this dress does'nt suit you both.
Their face becomes dull.
Dev regrets hurting them.
One among them gets angry:What?Our dress is not good?

Dev never expected this outburst.He is embarrassed.
D:I'm sorry.

Arnav laughed

A:Bro.That was just my trick to find out who Muskaan was..She is Muskaan.Only Muskaan can get angry hearing omeone passing horrible comments on her dress.She is very choosy about dressing.

Muskaan is embarassed.Khushi and Dev smile.
M:Arnav…you are too much.And you Dev..you supported you funny brother Arnav?
Dev and others just giggled.



Khushi and Muskaan cut the birthday cake and feed Anand with cake.
Arnav goes near Muskaan.
A:Even though you are talkative,spicy,short tempered and over smart you are interesting.
Muskaan does'nt care:O really?But I find you boring.
Arnav is embarassed.:Me boring?Never.

Dev tells Khushi:What I told is not true.Your dress is really beautiful.You look very pretty in this attire.
Khushi blushes.Arnav is watching them with a smile.Muskaan comes.
A:Muskaan..Dev and Khushi are a perfect pair.Right?
She simply smiles.


Both the couples pose for photographs.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Lovely update...hope Muskaan and Dev fall in love too so that it would be easy for Arshi also...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Wow amazing chapter...loved it...khushi and arnav they didn't notice eachother did they?...hmmm lets see what happens next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
why do i have a sinking feeling that muski likes dev and not arnie
and that in the end or when they get married arnie and khushi will end up together
wow khushi and quiet really how did that happen
hard to swallow but it night just happen
so muski is the talkative one
and she is short tempered too
i must say arnie knew muski real well
hmmm lets see how they shall end up with one another as they are supposed to
cant wait for more
swap toh hone hi waale hain
but will it be muski who does it or khushi i wonder
cheers for pm

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