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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#951

hey guli you are better than the serial!!! 😉

I am just bring some facts out to give you ideas to make it look like a real life situation. 😃

Also my questions will come it your mind when you run out of ideas> 😛

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stonex

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Posted: 19 years ago

#952

brilliant part
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Pachu.P

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Posted: 19 years ago

#953

that was good gulli, continue soon 👏

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

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Posted: 19 years ago

#954

Originally posted by: guli444
Honey.... you sound like.. that i am actually writing a real serial and u are asking me this???....

See the more you ask me... i will think about and most likely 95% i will write it!!!!!!!!! 😆

Ziddi is making me think to much!!! 😕

good....sochna body ke liye aacha hain, socho socho😆

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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 19 years ago

#955

Dhruv and Khushi: 24
Dev:20
Neha:17
Vijay and Viral:12
Divya:23
Rohan:21
Raj 17(quints)
Seema 17
Rahul 17
Radha 17
Akash 17
Megha: 23
Nisha and Amar's son: Nilesh (17)
Anjali and Rohan: Rahul (15)
Reema and Amit: (1 boy: 7 years old)
Rani and Vikram (1 girl Anita (6 years old)

Part 142

**When i said no one knows who she is.. i meant the
kids and not the adults... after they found out she
was Megha** In case no one knew

Dhruv doesnt say anything and smiles at her

Megha smiles back

They welcome her in and asks her how is she?

She says she is fine

She has become an Eye Doctor

Everyone is proud of her

She talks about it

And she thanx Dk for everything!!!

And she gives back his money!!

Dk: What are you doing?

Megha: Giving you everything back

Dk: Why??? You are like my daughter i cant except it!!

Megha; But..

Dk: NO buts and thats final!!!

Megha is like okay!!

Neha comes out from the room

She has her face covered in a mask type thing and its
all green

Dk: What the hell is on your face?

Neha: Its a mask!

Dk: Mask... take it off!!

Neha: I have to leave it on for 1 hour

Dk: Is it halloween today or something?

Neha: Dad!!!!!

Dk: What? It looks like the green godzilla threw up on
your face!!!!

Neha: Very funnY!!! Its so i dont get zits on my
face!!!

Dk is like omg!! What has this generation done?

Lol!!

Dk: You look like ur mother when she wakse up in the
morning!

Disha: What did you say??

Dk: Nothing!!!!

Everyone laughs!!

Neha: Dad.. u dont know anything about looks do you?

Dk: Excuse me!!!

Neha: Daddy.. face it.. ur old!!!

Megha is giggling!

Megha: He's not old!!! My dad is young!!!!!

Dk: See i like her!!

Neha: OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: What?

Neha: I left an important bag in the car

She tells her the servant to get it!!

He brings it in

Its a big suitcase

Dk: Cant you take care of ur clothes properly

Neha: Clothes?? Who said its clothes?

Dk: Then?

Neha: This is just my make up!!

Dk: What???????? You need all this make up!!

Neha: Yes!!!!

Dk: You women need help!!!

Neha goes back!!

Dhruv keeps looking at Megha

She looks at him

They dont say anything!

Lots of questions need to be answered!!

The End!

Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago