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Posted: 19 years ago

#811

that was awesome gulli...lots of catching up to do...missed a whole week...but it was awesome 👏

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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 19 years ago

#812

Part 145

DK is shocked seeing that guy on the floor

His name is Rajeev

Dk: What is going on here?

Rajeev: I will tell you sir! this girl invited me to
her cabin.. and when i asked her what did she want she
tried to seduce me!

DK is shocked!

Rani: NO!! thats a lie!!! Jiju i didnt do anything
like that!

Rajeev: dont lie!!! and after wards she came closer so
when you came in she had already pushed me onto on the
floor

Rani is shocked! and she is crying

Rani: No!! Jiju he framed me!!! he was the one that
put the money into my drawer so i would get into
trouble!

Both Rajeev and Rani are trying to tell thier story

Dk is so lost he doesnt know who to believe!!

Then Rajeev does most of the talking

At the end...

Dk ends up believing him

Rani is shocked!

She closes her eyes!

Rajeev is happy!!!

He is smiling!

DK is telling Rani that he didnt expect this from her!

She tries talking but Dk says that hhe didnt expect
this from her!

She is sad!

Rani leaves

Rajeev is happy

Dk goes into his cabin

Rani comes home

Asks back for the paycheck

S asks why

Rani says that the boss accidentally gave it to her by
accident!!!!

Makes up a lie

S believes her

Rani comes back to Kanaka

She throws the check into his face

Rani: Here!! i dont want ur money!!!!!!! I will find a
job somewhere else where people stick to the truth!! I
dont want ur help nor ur money!!! i regret coming
here! i thought being my bro in law you would stand by
me!! but i was wrong!!!!

She leaves from there

When she is walking Rajeev comes in her way

She gives him a mean look

He is smiling

Rajeev: You got my insulted the other day! now its my
turn!

Rani cant take it anymore and slaps him!!

And she walks off

Rajeev is saying that she will pay for this!

She goes home and into her room

S asks her what has happened

Rani says she wants to be alone!

S asks why

rani makes up a story about how today her friend
passed away on this day blah blah blah

S leaves her alone!

Rani is crying!

Disha comes over with Vijay and Viral

S is happy on seeing her grandkids!!

She plays with them

Her arm is getting better but not that much!

Disha is asking if anyone else is home

S says that Rani is at home but she is sad!

Disha asks why?

S tells her what Rani had told her

Disha goes there

She knocks on the door and opens it

Rani sees Disha

Rani: Didi you?

Disha: Disha tries to console her saying that what
ever happened it was the past!!!! (talking about the
dead person)

Rani knows that

Rani: No i forget it!!!!!

She cries even more!!

Rani: I hate this world and the people that live in
it!

Disha hugs her

Rajeev is thinking about getting back at Rani for the
slap

Disha leaves and goes back home

Afterwards Rani gets a call

He pretends to be Dk (no 1 can be him theres only one
of him)

ANd tells Rani to meet him and some place

Rani refuses

But Rajeev (Dk) sweet talks and she agrees!

Dk arrives home

He isnt too happy!

Disha asks him whats wrong?

Dk doesnt want to talk about it!

Disha: It seems like everyone is sad today!

Dk: everyone?

Disha: Yeah i went to go see Ma... and Rani was crying
in the room

Dk: DId she say why?

Disha: Her friend past away today on this date!!!

Dk: (himself) that means she lied to you!!!

Disha: I tried to cheer her up but she was crying and
saying that how she hates this world and the people
that live in it!!

Dk needs to do something about it

He leaves and goes to thier house

Meanwhile Rani is supposedly meeting Dk... at this
place

This place is all haunted and what not

SHe gets freaked out

Dk arrvies there and S is surprised seeing him

S: YOU here?

Dk: Where is Rani???

S: SHe went to go and see you

Dk: ME??

S: Yeah you had called telling her to meet you
somewhere

Dk is like what the heck

Dk: Did she say where?

S: Yeah here is the address

Dk goes there

Dk is wondering he didnt call her

Rani is calling out Dk's name

(Jiju)

But nothing

She gets scared

She is still calling him

Then all of a sudden she sees a person coming

She looks

She doesnt see the face only the shadow

Then he comes out

Its Rajeev

Rani is scared

Rani: You what are you doing here?

Rajeev laughs saying that i called you here

Rani is scared!

He is walking closer to her

She is walking away

Its dark

Dk arrives at the place

But doesnt see anyone

He is calling out her name

But no one heres anything

Rajeev grabs Rani

Rani is scared

She screams for help

But she knows that one is going to come and save her

Rajeev pulls her to the ground..

SHe is on the floor

She is trying to get away from him but he is coming
closer and closer

He holds her hand tight

Dk is looking and comes in more..

He is looking around

Rajeev is telling her that you deserve this!!!!

Rani is screaming no and is trying to kick but nothing
is working

Rajeev comes down by her neck and he is about to kiss
her but she kicks him off

ANd she gets up and runs

Rajeev is pissed and he runs after her

RAni is running as fast as she could

Dk is still looking out

Rani is running with Rajeev following her

Rani is headed towards Dk neither realize

She is crying and running

Rajeev is screaming come here come here

Dk hears something

He turns around

He sees Rani running

Rani doesnt see Dk

Rani is runnning is about to past Dk...

Dk grabs her and she hugs him w/o realizing who this
person is!

Rajeev stops

Dk looks at him

His eyes pop out and has a mean face

Rajeev is staring at him

Rani lets go

Her face is down

She slowly looks up

And sees it is Dk..

Rani is shocked!

Rani: Jiju???

She cries

She hugs him

Dk is giving a mean look to Rajeev

Rajeev is scared!

DK lets go of Rani

He walks towards Rajeev

Rajeev is trying to talk to Dk

Dk slaps him

Dk: What were you doing with her?

R: Nothing... (stutters)

Dk slaps him again

Dk: what were you doing with her????

Rajeev doesnt answer

Dk slaps him again

He keeps slapping him until Rajeev tells Dk what his intentions were

Dk starts beating him up

Rani is crying and is watching

Dk tells Rajeev to leave now.... before he regrets what he is going to do!!!

Rajeev runs like a kid

Dk turns and sees Rani

She is a little shaken up

But is okay

Dk comes to her

He hugs her

(I will not have anyone fall in love with Dk.. nor have Dk fall in love with anyone)

Dk says sorry to her!!

He takes her home..

S is worried where can Rani be?

Rani comes home

She wipes her tears

S tells her if everything is okay

Rani tells her now everything is okay!!!

Dk goes home

The End!!

Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago

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stonex

@stonex

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Posted: 19 years ago

#813

that was wonderful
.................
👏 👏 👏

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Sarah

@SRKfever

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Posted: 19 years ago

#814

awsome parts guli
👏 👏 👏
thank you !

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Jas

@Jaslove

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Posted: 19 years ago

#815

Guli that was so nice cont. soon 👏

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#816

Part 147

Dk is driving home

He is thinking and is feeling bad about what he did

He comes home

Disha is there waiting for him in the room

Dk comes in

Disha: Dk where were you?? i was worried

Dk isnt in the mood

Disha: Dk whats wrong? is everything okay

Dk: No DIsha nothing is okay!!

Disha: Why what happened???

Dk: I will tell you becuz i have never kept anything from yoU!!! but there is something you dont know

Disha is shocked

DIsha: WHat?

Dk: But u have to promise me that it only stays between you and me... and no one should know about it

Disha; Please tell me!!!

DK starts telling her the story

Disha is shocked!!!

She cant believe it

Disha tells him why didnt he tell her and why doesnt she give her money

Dk tells her that Rani doesnt want it

Disha is telling Dk why didnt he tell her

Dk says that he promised Rani that he wouldnt say anything

DIsha doesnt get mad

And thanx god that She is okay

Dk is happy that she isnt mad

He hugs her

Next day

Its Karva Chauth!

Disha is fasting

Dk is like do you have to do this

Disha says yes!!

Dk leaves for work

Disha tells him to come home early

Dk says he will try

He leaves for work

The preparations are on

Everyone is dressed up all nicely

They are happy

Dk isnt home yet

He is stuck in a meeting

Disha is calling Dk

But he cant pick up

She is getting mad

And at the same time she is getting worried!!

Dk is getting impatient and is trying to leave but cant

He knows that Disha is waiting and she is fasting!

Disha vows that she wont eat anything til Dk comes

Dk realizes that as well!!!

The meeting is done

Dk is driving fast

He is coming home

Everyone else is standing in a line

Disha is by herself

She is sad

Dk arrives

He goes upstairs and changes

Everyone's fast is broken

Not Disha

SHe looks at the moon

Then Dk arrives

She is mad

He says sorry!

She performs the rituals

She drinks water

Bows to Dk

Dk dont like that so stops her half way

DK apologizes to Disha

They all go inside

Everyone is laughing and what not

Dk is trying to cheer Disha up

It works for a little while

Dk's phone rings

He goes and answers it

Ved is looking at the food and is starved!

Disha is telling him to wait

Ved: What??

Disha: We will all have dinner together!

Ved: Man... i had lunch!! but yet i am hungry!! Brother didnt eat anything and he isnt complaining!

Disha: what? Dk didnt eat anything!

Ved: No.. um.. thats not what i meant

Disha: Ved?

Ved: Okay he told me not to tell you but he kept one for you!!!! SO he didnt eat anything!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!

The end!!!

Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

Alumni

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Posted: 19 years ago

#817

👏 👏 👏
how nice of dk to keep a fast for disha it shows much he loves her 😳
wonderful n brillant work
please continue fast 😉

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Sarah

@SRKfever

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Posted: 19 years ago

#818

soooo sweet 😳
awsomejob guli
👏

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sweets

@sweets

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Posted: 19 years ago

#819

aww...tht was sooo cute..continue soon pls.

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 19 years ago

#820

Part 148

Disha is shocked that Dk kept one for her too

SHe is sad cuz she was being rude to Dk

Dk didnt feel bad about it

Everyone gets ready to eat

Dk comes out

Disha goes in the room w/o Dk seeing her

They all are ready to eat

Dk is looking for Disha

He asks them where she is?

They say she is in the room

Ved tells him that Disha has found out

Ved tells him that he told her

Didnt meant to but he did

Dk doesnt mind

Disha is in her room feeling all bad

Dk comes in the room with a plate of food

He keeps on the table and sits next to her

Dk: Disha?? Come on you have to eat

Disha: I am not hungry!!

Dk: Not hungry?? u are lying!! you are hungry now come and eat!!

Disha: You eat!

Dk: No i wont eat til you eat!!

Disha looks at him

Disha: How can i eat?? I was so rude to you... and..

Dk: Disha?? Dont talk about these things now.... come on!

Disha: You go eat.. i will eat later

Dk: No you will eat now

Dk brings the plate

He brings it over to Disha

He is about to feed her

But she tries to feed him

Disha makes him eat 1st!!!

He does!

She is happy!

They both share from the same plate in their room

Couple of days later

Everything is okay!

Disha goes to Savitri's house

Disha talks about how they should get Amit (her step bro) married

S likes the idea

But they need to find a nice girl for him

They dont know that he has someone

She is a nice gal

She has money!

But the only reason why she has money is becuz her dad works for Dk

Amit doesnt know that

Her dad doesnt know that he's Dk's bro in law

The gals dad is all up in his face and talking about how he needs a decent job and blah blah blah

Amit knows its true but he doesnt say anything

Even Rani has a better job than him

But he doesnt know Rani works for Dk

Amit and his Gf... see a lot of each other

She doesnt care about anything but him

Even if they got married.. she wouldnt mind staying with them!

She can adjust

But her parents dont approve of them

Kanaka

Dk is working with Ved and SUraj

Rani is there... helping them out

Rani steps out for a 15 min break

She stand outside Kanaka

Amit is walking by and he sees her

He is shocked!

Thinking what is she doing there

Rani goes back in

Amit follows her

He is inside Kanaka

He spots Rani

He calls out her name

She turns around and sees him

She is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The end!!

Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago

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