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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 138

Dk and Disha come back from thier trip

It was nice to leave for a couple of days!

Disha is feeling better!

So is Dk!

Next day:

Disha gets up and back to the daily routines

Dk gets up for work

He starts acting lovey dovey

Disha: Dk stand still will you?

Dk: Do i have to go to work?

Disha: yes you didnt go for 3 days!

Dk: And?

Disha: Dk!!

DK kisses her!!

Disha: Come on go!!

Dk leaves for work!

DK gets into his car

Some weird lady looks at him

She has a paper in her hand that has thier address on it

She gets into a rickshaw and follows Dk

Dk arrives at work

After 30 mins...

Lady comes into Kanaka

Sec tells Dk that some lady is here to see you

Dk is thinking lady??

Dk tells her to send her in

The lady comes in

Dk: yes???

Lady just stands there

By the way its an old lady!

Dk: Hello?? how may i help you?

She just looks at him

DK: Will you say something????

Lady: Hhhhhhhhiiiiiii

Dk thinks she is really strange

Dk: who are you?

Lady: I found ur address.... and i wanted to come and see you

Dk: me?? Do i know you?

Lady: No

Dk: then?

Lady: Um..i wanted to ask you about someone...

Dk; Who??

Lady is shaking and everything!

Lady: You see..

She hesistates!

Dk is like get into the point already

Lady: my husband died a long time ago about 18 years ago!

Dk: 18 years ago?

Lady: you may know him...

Dk: who?

Lady: Dev!!!!

Dk is shocked!!

****** note: DIsha's dad***********

Dk: WHat????

Lady: Yes.. you see...


She tells him the story of how she left him after they had their daughter and what not

She found someone else

But after that her life became hell the guy wasnt good at all

But she stayed away from dev and "thier daughter" for about 23-24 years

She tried to go back to him but it was too late cuz he already died!

Dk: Ur are his wife!?

Lady: yes!!!

Dk: What is ur name??

Right before she is about to say her name

The Sec tells Dk that Vijendra is there

Dk: send him in

Sec: Yes sir

Vijendra is walking to Dk's cabin

Dk: So where were we? Oh yes whats ur name?

Lady is about to say it

V: DK?

Dk: Hi dad!!!

V: Oh sorry!! are you busy?

Lady has her back turned

DK: Oh dont worry about it

Lady turns around

Vijendra sees her

V is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is looking at V

As if whats wrong with him

V: Savitri????????

She is shocked!!!

And so is V!!!

Dk is in the middle like someone tell me whats going on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


The end!!


Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
brilliant just brilliant as usual
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 139

Dk: what is happening? you two know each other?

V: Yes very well!!

Dk: I just found out that she was Dev ( i dont kno what he called him) wife!

V: She is!! and do you kno who else she is related to?

Dk: who?

Savitri: No..

Dk looks at her

V: what i can hide anything from DK..... She is... this woman is Disha's real mom!!!!

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She doesnt know how to react!!!

Dk: What????????????

V: Yes!!! not only did she leave her husband but she left her own daughter as well!!!

Dk: ur disha's mom?? (meaning birth mom)

S: yes!!

Looks down

V: WHy are you here????? Disha is happy!! dont come and ruin everything for her!!

S: I just want to see my daughter once!! Please let me see her

She never saw Disha... growing up! only when she was really small..so she doesnt know what she looks like

V calls Suhas and tells him to go to Saigal house

Suhas is wondering whats going on

She goes there

Dk Vijendra and S go

Suhas comes

Disha: Aai?? how are you?

Aai: I am fine!!! ur father told me to come here!!

Disha: why?

Aai: I dont know!

Suhas comes and sits down

Vijendra comes

Disha: baba!!!

She sees Dk

Disha: Dk wat are you doing here?? Is everything okay?

Dk just looks at her

Disha: whats going on?

V moves

Savitri is standing there

Disha dont know who she is

Suhas looks at her

She has the feeling that she has seen this woman before

She looks closely

A bell rings in her head

SUhas; YOU???????????????

Disha looks at Suhas

Suhas: What are you doing here???

Disha: aai you know her

Suhas: Very well!!!!!

S: Suhas..

Suhas: Dont Suhas me!!!

Disha is confused

Suhas: Why are you here?? and after 20 something years!!! you already abadonded ur husband and child what more do you want???

S: Please dont say that

Suhas: what am i saying is the truth!!! why did you bring her here?

Disha: But who is she?

Suhas folds her arms

Dk: Disha..... this woman......

Suhas: No Dk.. you will not saying anything!!!

Disha: Aai??

DK; Aai.. the truth has to come out sometime

Dk: Disha.... she is your mother!!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Wat????

DK: She was married to Dev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S looks down

Suhas is mad

Suhas: You didnt care about ur family then why have you come back??

Disha is dumbstruck!!

She cant believe this!!!

She is standing like a statue!!

Dk: Disha??

Dk comes closer to her

Everyone is also present just to let you know!!

Suhas keeps yelling at her

Savitri comes closer to Disha

Disha moves back

S is shocked

S: I know i dont deserve this...

Disha: where were you all of these years???

S has no answer

Disha: You have no answer do you!!! Why did you leave us?? and you left us then why did you come back??? was i not to good for you???

S nods her head no

Disha is sad

She starts crying

Suhas is still angry!

S: I didnt mean to....

Disha: (yells) I dont want to listen to anything!! all my life i wanted to know who my parents were but when i found out who my dad was he died... and according to me.. my mom is only my Aai and no one else!! she has been there for me all my life! and now you come

S is sad

Disha keeps yelling then all of a sudden faints on the floor

They are shocked

Dk picks her up and takes her to the room

Suhas: This is becuz of you!

S is sad

Dk takes care of her

He tells everyone to just let her rest

Sum comes there

Dk tells her that he will stay with her and tells everyone to leave

She is lying on the bed

Dk goes and changes his clothes

He is watching her

Dk takes some water and splashes on her a little bit

After a while she opens her eyes

Disha holds his hand

Disha: Dk??

Dk:: Sshh. you are fine! dont take too much stress!! come on sit up!

She sits up

Disha just wants Dk to sit with her for a little while

He agrees she hugs him!!

Dk just tells her to calm down and relax!!!

Dk is with her

In the living room

Everyone is there

S is outside

She regrets for everything she has done

She cant change the past

She has to live with the present

And who knows that the future holds for her




The end!!!

Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
those parts were awesome
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Part 140

Disha finally went to sleep

Dk gets up and goes in the front

He tells her she is okay

Dk: where is ...??

Suhas; She is outside

Dk goes by her

SUhas: Dont go by her!!

Dk: Aai... how long will you be mad at her?

Suhas: After what she did??

Dk: Everyone makes mistake!!!! you knew our situation!!! between me and Disha

Suhas: That was different!!!!

Dk goes by Savitri

S is leaving

Dk: where are you going?

They hear Dk saying that so they see whats going on

S: I caused to much trouble! so its better if i just leave! my daughter is in good hands!!! and thats all i care about!! i guess it was my mistake that i came here

S starts walking again

Dk: So thats it? ur walking out again!!! What is wrong with you? You leave you come back then you decide to leave again!!

S starts crying

S: I have no choice!!!!!!!

Dk: You have plenty!! you just arent looking

S: Look i know Disha isnt going to accept me!! so whats the point?

Dk: Well you have a relationship with her no matter what!! and becuz of her you are related to me!!!

S looks at him

Dk: Yes you are mother in law whether i want to accept it or not!

Everyone is shocked!!

Suhas: See its ur good fortunate to have him as ur son in law!

S is grateful!

Dk decides that She will stay with them! and make Disha understand

S refuses

Dk insists

Suhas and V leave

Sum and DHruv (senior) dont mind becuz all of Dk's decision they support

S is happy!

Dk shows her the room

Dk: You will stay in here!

S: Why are you doing this?

Dk: becuz of Disha!!

S: yes but Disha will be upset

Dk: You dont worry about that!!

Dk goes into his room and goes to sleep

Disha wakes up

Dk opens his eyes

Dk: How are you feeling?

Disha: better!

Dk: I have to tell you something!

Disha: what?

Dk: About ur mother

Disha: i dont want to listen

Dk: Disha.. ur gonna have to!!

Disha: Why?

Dk: becuz she is staying with us?

Disha: What???

Dk: yes becuz i told her to!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!



the end!
Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good job guli
thanks for the update 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job guli....gr8 parts....so theres a new character...(sorry havent read it in 2days) 😭 😭 ...but im lovin it as usual 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
so sorry i couldnt post yesterday!!! i had to go to a bday party for my cousin!!! and she lived 1 1/2 hour from me!! so 2day i will update all fan fics (5) so please be patient!!!!!!! thanx!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 141

Disha is shocked!

Disha: What????

Dk: yes!! i told her to stay here!

Disha: why? are you crazy? i dont want her staying here

Dk: Disha she is ur mother!

Disha: No if she is my mother than she would have been there through all my tough times!! if she was my mother than she wouldve taken care of me woke in the middle of the night becuz of me and everything that a mother should do!! but no she wasnt there!! so she is not my mother

Dk: DIsha??

Disha: No!!! i dont want her!!!

Dk: Well she will stay here and thats final!

Dk leaves the room

DIsha is sad!

Savitri is in her room

She has her arm covered

Ever since she got there it has been covered but no one never notice

She takes her sari off and when her arm is shown... its in bad shape

Dk passes her room and sees her arm

He is shocked!!! and horrified!

S is crying looking at her arm

Dk knocks on the door

She quickly covers her arm

S: yes?

Dk sits next to her

Dk: why did you cover ur arm?

S is shocked

S: Huh?

Dk takes it off

S looks down

Dk: What is this???

S doesnt say anything

Dk: Please tell me

S starts her story

S: My husband did this to me!

Dk is shocked

She left Dev for a wrong guy

This guy was no good

He treated her badly

She regreted going to him

When she try to escape she couldnt becuz he stopped her

The kids (disha's step sis and bro) are scared of him to

They are in thier 20s

Both of them

Neither of them are married

So one day it became so bad

That he took some hot oil and burned the crap out of her on her arm

Dk is shocked to hear this!!

He cant believe it

So she ran away

S tells Dk not to tell anything to no one

Including Disha

Its gonna be hard but it he will try

Dk goes back into his room

Disha is sleeping

Dk goes to sleep

He thinks about S

Next Morning

Disha wakes up

Doesnt find Dk

He has already left for work

Disha gets ready and comes out

S is still in her room

She doesnt come out

Disha isnt too bothered

Sum calls her

S comes out

Disha and S stare each other

Disha doesnt look at her

S is sad

Her arm is covered

No one notices

S tries to come closer to Disha

But Disha goes away

S is sad

She goes back to her room

She tries calling her kids

But Her husband keeps picking up the phone

Getting scared she keeps hanging up

Dk comes home from work

Disha and Dk arent talking to each other

Dk tries talking to her

But Disha isnt listening

Dk gets mad

He tries telling her but Disha refuses to listen to anything

Disha gets mad

Cuz Dk keeps going by her

She doesnt like that at all

Dk keeps telling her that thats his mom in law and her mother

But no use

The more they talk about it the more they argue

S's husband

Is looking for S

He is wondering where she could be and wants her back

The kids try to leave but everytime they make a run for it he catches them

S is worried for her kids

She wants them to leave from there

But they cant

Couple of days later

Her husband finds the whereabouts on S

He goes to Saigal house

Everyone is at home

He comes there

S is shocked!!!!!!!!

Everyone is looking at him to see who he is

Dk looks at S

and can sense that might be her husband

Guy acts all nice

saying to come back

She says no

Disha tells her to go

S looks at her

Disha is forcing her to go

S says no

Then He comes there and grabs S by the arm

She screams

But then DK stops him

Tells her to let go

Guy doesnt

Dk yells at him saying to let go

He lets go

Dk slaps him

Guy yells at him

Guy: who is she to you?? huh??? Arre she is my wife

Dk: She is my mother in law

Guy is shocked

So is Disha

Dk: and i am not going to let her go to a guy like u

Guy: U cant do anything

Dk: you watch what i can do

Guy is about to grab S's burnt arm

But Dk stops her and kicks him out

Guy yells that he will be back

S goes in her room

Disha is wondering whats going on

Dk tells her everything

DIsha is shocked



The end

Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow guli thanks for a long stroy it was really touching, hope that guy goes to jail for what he did. 😡

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