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Posted: 19 years ago
very very nice
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Posted: 19 years ago
keep it up guli, sry i havnt posted my comment recently, ma comp wudnt let me read 4rm page 118, (dats hw long its been), and i ddnt wna skip ne bits in da story, SORRY 😭 ...

bt apart 4rm that ......it's absolutly, GREAT....keep it up 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
yes it is absolutley great !
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 149

Rani is shocked to see Amit

She is wondering what he is doing here?

He is too

Amit: Wat are you doing here?

Rani (hesistates): I was here to see Jiju!!!!

Amit: Oh okay!

Rani: what about you?

Amit: I saw you so i was wondering what you were doing here... well i will say hi to him to since i am here

Dk is in his cahin

Rani comes in

He sees Amit

Rani is a bit scared

Amit; Hello!

DK; Oh hi!!

They shake hands

Dk: What are yo doing here?

Amit: I saw Rani.. so i was wondering what she was doing here?

Dk: Oh.. uhh

Rani is saying no

Dk: That nice of her!!

They sit and chat for a while

Amit leaves

Tells Rani to come with him

But she says she has to do some other things... so she will see him at home

Amit is like okay

He leaves

Rani is like thank god!

She gets back to work

Amit goes home

Disha is there

She is happy to see him

He smiles back

Disha decides to have a talk to him about him getting married

So she asks him to come with her and go out

Amit agrees

They both go and sit in a restaurant

Disha: The reason why i brought you here was to ask you something!

A: What?

D: Ma and I were thinking about getting you married!!!!

Amit is shocked!!!!!!

D: Now what do you say about it?

He is quiet

D: Look if there is someone then we will talk to her parents about it.... no worries!!!!

A decides to tell her about his Gf (reema)

A: Well to be honest with you there is one girl in my life!!

D: Who??

A: Her name is Reema!

A tells DIsha about her

And even about her father who doesnt like him at all but Reema doesnt care about anything but him!

A wants to marry her but becuz of her dad hes scared to ask her

They both talk about the situation

D touches his hands and tells him not to worry

Reema's dad has gotten off of work from Kanaka

He is in the car

He is driving by and sees Amit with Disha

He gets all mad

He walks up to them

Reema's dad(RD): So this is what you do behind my daughter back

They are confused!

RD: I knew you werent good til the 1st day i saw you! being here in public with another woman!!

They are shocked!!

A: But... she

RD: I dont want to hear it you arent worthy for my daughter i dont know what she sees in you! but i know ur true colors

Disha: But..

RD: Hey you dont talk!!

Disha stays quiet

He insults them both and leaves off

They didnt even get a chance to talk and say they are" Bro and Sis"

Disha feels bad

They both leave from there

Disha drops Amit off

Amit is mad at her dad for insulting her!!! he can understand if it was him but her no way!!!!! he is mad!

DIsha heads home

She feels bad and starts crying that she was insulted like this today

She starts crying

No one has ever insulted her like that

And today was just gone to far

Dk arrives home

He tells everyone that they have guest coming over today

And guess who it is?

None other than Reema and her family!

Dk decided to invite them!

Dk goes in the room thinking Disha might be there!

But she isnt

Disha arrives home

She is lost in her world

She has tears coming down her cheeks

She goes straight in the room

Dk hears her coming

He comes out

Sees her sad

Dk: Disha??? what happened? Why are you crying??

Disha sees Dk

Dk comes closer

She hugs him

Dk: Disha what happened???

Disha just keeps crying!

Disha tells him what happened and how she was insulted and what not!

Rd is at home getting ready to come at Dk's house

He is yelling at Reema for liking a guy like that

Reema cant believe it

She thinks that he cant do that

She even tell her dad

Her dad says he saw it

She is shocked!

They get ready and head over there

Dk is angry!

Someone talked rudely to his wife

He will not tolerate that!

Dk tries to cheer her up

Disha isnt saying anything

Dk tells her they have guest coming

He wipes her tears

Reema's fam arrives

Dk hears them

Disha tells him that she will come just let her freshen up

Dk kisses her and leaves

He comes out

They all start chatting and what not

Reema isnt in the mood

Dk notices that Rd is mad

He asks them the problem

RD: My daughter likes this guy.. but i caught him with another woman!

Dk is like whoa!

Dk: Really??

RD: Yes!! i cant believe him!!! When i see him i wont spare him!!!

Everyone listens

Reema's mom: Where is ur wife??? I

Dk: She is coming!!

None of them have met Disha or seen her!!!!

Rd is still rambling!

Disha comes out

She is walking

She looks up and sees RD..

Her dad sees her

She is shocked!!!!!!!

He is to!!!!!

Disha: YOU???

Dk looks at her

RD: What are you doing here???

Dk: She is my wife!!!!!!!!!!!

He is shocked!!

RD: This is the woman who i saw with that guy!!!!!!!

Dk: What????

Disha starts crying again!

She closes her eyes

Dk: You were the one that insulted my wife????

RD: Well then she is two timing you to!!

Dk is angry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and yells at him!

Dk: 1st you get ur facts straight before saying anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHe is my wife you are talking about and 2nd of all... Amit is her brother!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Rd is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reema is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Disha goes to her room crying!!

Dk has an angry look!

Then all of a sudden Amit and Rani come over!!!!!!!!!

Amit comes in

He sees Reema's family!!

Reema sees Amit and is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Amit has an angry face!!

A: Where is Di????

Dk: In her room!!

He goes to her!!

Before going

A: Did u here with i said.. DI??? i hope you understand what that means???

Saying that to her dad

A: What you have done today was wrong!!!

Reema is trying to talk to him

A: And as for me and reema.... dont you worry.. i will never see her or meet her again!!!

reema is shocked!!!!

R: Amit..

A: I dont want to hear it!!!! Today ur dad went to far!!! Accusing me of cheating on you with Di!!!!!! From today our relationship is over!!!!!

He says that in front of everyone

She looks at her parents and she runs off from the house

Amit goes and meets Disha

Reema's dad doesnt know what to say



The end!!!!


Edited by guli444 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fabalous work 😉
plz continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Good part😉👏

continue soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
that was wonderful
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part guli!!
good job! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
guli yaar that was so good. 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
fantastic part guli
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thanx

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