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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 118

Dk is looking at Diya

She is scared

Payal: Dont be scared i am here!

Dk: Chup!!!!!!!!!! You have talked enough now its my turn

Payal gives him a mean look

Dk: So what did you tell Payal about me

DIya is quiet

DK: Bolo!!! what did you say?

Payal is defending her!!

Dk: I said dont but in

Diya is scared

Dk: You didnt tell Payal what you did?

Payal is confused!

Diya is quiet

Dk: Payal.. you think you are so smart!!!!! dont you?

Payal is shocked!

Dk: You think you know everything that happened!!

Payal: yes! you cheated on her w/ ur wife!

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: I cheated on her w/ my wife??? Heh!!!

Payal is mad

Dk: You want to know the real truth

Diya is like no!!

Dk tells her the whole story

Everyone from the time she came to the end

Payal doesnt believe it

Dk: You dont believe me! Diya is this true?

She is quiet

Dk: Say it! is this true?

Payal: tell him he's lying!!

Dk is walking towards her and she is walking back

He has a mean look

Payal is waiting for Diya to speak

Then Diya gives up and confesses

Payal is shocked!!

Diya breaks down and tells her what Dk said is the truth

Dk: You see?? You ruined my rep! You insulted my wife!! it was you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: You better get ur facts straight before messing w/ people's lives!! remember that

He points at Payal and he leaves

Payal cant believe it and is sad!!!

Payal gets mad at Diya

She feels bad about everything

Dk comes home

Tell Disha everything

Next day

Payal leaves to go out

The press is there

They are asking about Dk

She doesnt answer

They force her and everything

Payal says that DK isnt the man she thought he was

She starts saying nice things about him and everything

People are confused and dont what to believe

Payal says that becuz of a misunderstanding she ruined such a popluar guy!!

SHe feels bad

Now everyone is slowly coming back and no one hates Dk

He is back to normal

Diya leaves town

Payal doesnt go w/ her

Disha is happy!!

Couple of weeks later

Dk's cousin brother comes into town

He stays w/ them for 2 weeks

He has a wife and 2 kids

Everyone is welcomed

Everyone else starts to get to know them

Cousin's name is Vishal

Wife's name is Tulsi

2 kids.. well heh!

This couple after Dk and Disha.. love each other to death!!!

They are the hottest couple on the block

After Disha and Dk of course!

Everyone knows that!

Couple of days into that

Guys are talking

Vishal goes to work w/ the guys

Tulsi stays home

The kids are playing

Tulsi feels a little relaxed

Disha, Sia, Preity and Tulsi are talking

Tulsi is praising all the kids except for hers

Then she starts going into a story

The story is that after her two kids were born thats when everything changed

Her kids are the worst kids you have ever seen

They are only 9 and 6

But are the biggest trouble makers on the block

They kick scream shout and even curse at their parents

Becuz of that Tulsi and Vishal's relationship has been on the down side

No one knows this but now she is telling them

They are shocked!

Its so bad that they were about to get a divorce

Now these two people who are crazy for each other are arguing everyday cuz of these kids

She is fed up and doesnt know what to do!!

She starts crying

Everyone consoles her

She only has 2

But Disha has 4 and they are the sweetest kids!!

Tulsi doesnt know what to do... she tries everythng but nothing works!!




The End

Preview for tomorrow

Dk finds out the story

He is shocked

He takes it into his own hands becuz he doesnt like the way the kids are.. he gets mad at them and tells them off!!!


Will they change? Can DK do something about it? Or will the kids be so out of control that it'll be no use??


Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
wooow gr8 part..plx continue soon!

YummY 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow, plz cont soon........cnt w8 to read the nxt part, that obviously wil b awesome 2 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
awsome part guli 👏
thanx
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Posted: 20 years ago
great part guli 👏 plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
guli that was good 👏

when i read Vishal, i started to laugh 😆 😆 thats my younger brother's name his only 14 years old.
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 119

Vishal hangs out w/ Dk Ved and Suraj

They talk and stuff

Dk asks hows life been

V: Its been great!! But lately our lives been a living hell!

Dk: Why?

V: Becuz of the kids!

Ved; What they do?

V: Its what they dont do!!

V tells them the story about everything

They are shocked

He tells them how their kids are so nice and well behaved

His are rotten

They are so bad... that even you cant imagine

They dont listen to anyone

V tells Dk that he's scared to even stay at their house becuz they might turn the whole place upside down

V tells them they both him and tulsi have yelled and gotten mad but nothing happens

They laugh at the fact and thinks its all a joke

The guys feel sorry

At home

Tulsi is having a hard time w/ the boys

No one can do anything

Everyone is helpless

The guys come home

V and T look at each other

V was relieved that for about 2-3 hours it was peace

Now its hell

DK looks at the kids

They are being rude and swearing and what not

Dk: Hey........

He screams so loud that it literally shakes

The boys look

Dk: I WILL NOT TOLERATE THIS LANGUAGE IN MY HOUSE!!!

The boys are looking at him

Dk: Vishal and Tulsi.. i want you guys to go out for the day! take the day off becuz these two will be my challenge

V: What?

Dk: Infact everyone go.. Disha take the kids.. Ved you too!! Everyone go to the park

Dk wants to settle these rugrats!

V and T are scared

Dk tells them not to worry

Everyone leaves

Its quiet

The boys are out of control

They swear and do everything

Dk hasnt said anything

He is just watching and listening

The boys think that Dk isnt tough one bit

They can get away w/ anything

Dk isnt that dumb

Dk: BOTH OF YOU STOP IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HE gives that mean look

Boys stop

They laugh in his face

Dk tells them to sit on the couch

Dk: Neither of you will move from here........... and if i hear one more swear i will smack you!!

He means it too

He will not tolerate that kind of language in his house

The boys are looking

They laugh

They see Dk's serious face and stop

Afterwards they get up and run around

Dk grabs both of them

He makes them sit

One boy swears at him

And they are less than 10

Dk gets pissed and smacks one

The boy is shocked!!!!!!!!

DK: What did i say about swearing? You didnt believe me??

He is mad

Dk: Both of you against the wall if i see any of you move then........

Both of them are standing in one corner

Dk is watching

They dont realize that Dk is indeed tough

Dk: Stand still...........no moving!

Boy who got smacked hasnt said one word

The other one was scared to say it now

They both ask for their parents

Dk: No parents.. its you and me! you have ruined thier peace what more do you want!

Boys want their mom

Dk: Why do you hit ur mom??

Boy: Becuz she is bad

Dk: why?

B: I dont know

Dk: Thats not excuse to hit her!!!

He yells

Dk is making thier lives hell

They dont realize how much they miss their parents

Dk has everything under control

Everyone is enjoying the park

Disha wishes that Dk was with her

V and T are wondering if Dk is safe! lol

The time out is over

The boys are hungry

They ask for what they want

Dk says no

Boys are like what?? No one ever said no to us!

Becuz what ever they asked for T gave it

Dk gives them what he feels like giving them

Boys dont eat it

Dk; Thats all your gonna get!!! If you dont want it fine! Your mom always gave you what you wanted..... but she's not here is she?

Boys forces themselves to eat

After T and V arent there boys lives arent the same

Dk really nailed them

Dk controlled them

After a couple of hours

Everyone comes home

V and T are like oh no hell again!

Dk comes out

V: well how was it?

Dk: I taught them!

V: meaning?

Dk: I didnt let them control me

T: where are they?

The boys come out

They arent screaming or anything

They are shocked!!

Dk: yes i did smack them for swearing

He wont forget that

They havent once shouted once T and V had come

They are scared to see what Dk might do

Dk goes into his room and lies on the bed

Disha comes

Disha: Dk??

Dk: Hmm.

D: tell me how was it?

Dk: They are really bad but i had to be tough........

Disha puts her head on him

They both are tired

They naturally fall asleep

Next day

Dk has to take Disha to the doctor for a check up

V and T are like Dk wont be home so the boys will start again

The boys come out

They just play w/ themselves

No tantrum no nothing

At the doctors

DIsha is fine

Nothing to worry

Dk is like phew!!

She is doing good

Dk and Disha leave

Disha comes home

Dk goes straight to work

Disha just rests for a little bit

The boys are screaming again

T and V see whats going on

They are shouting cuz the other one took his toy

V gets mad

It takes away the toy

Both of them cry

But then they quiet down

V gives back the toy

He cant believe Dk did that in one day!

He is grateful to him!!

Dk comes home later that day

Boys freeze when they see him

Dk doesnt do anything

He goes to see Disha

Disha is ironing clothes

Dk comes from behind her and kisses her

Disha gets lost when Dk is around

After 2 weeks

T and V leave w/ the boys

The boys are now well behaved

They will never forget Dk

If they do anything bad just say Dk and they get scared!!

4 months later:

Disha goes to the doctor

Doctor sees how Disha is doing!

Doctor notices something is wrong somewhere in her stomach

Doc doesnt say anything

Doc asks to speak to Dk privately

Disha sits outside

Dk: Yes doc any problem?

Doc: Yes and no!

Dk: Why whats wrong?? Is Disha?? Babies?

Doc: You see i saw her reports........ and

Dk: And?

Doc: Disha is having twins!!!!!!!!

Dk is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk; Again????????

Doc: Yes but this time its serious!

Dk: meaning?????????

Doc shows him the babies... (you know that picture whats inside the stomach.. i dont kno the name)

Doc: You see two heads

Dk is looking and is amazed!!

Dk: But what is the problem???

Doc: With the latest tech.... Disha is having twins... but there is one problem with the twins...

Dk: What??

DK gets scared.....

Doc: They are conjoined!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: WHAT?????????????????????????

He is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and speechless!!


The end!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


Preview:

Dk doesnt tell Disha

If she reacts then it might affect the babies

Dk is just worried he doesnt want to lose neither one!

Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow guli that was really boot camp style. 😆
while reading dk was exactly like my dad.
my dad did the same thing to my brother Vishal and my cousin Shelvin when they were 7 years old beleive me this techique works. 😆 😆, but they never cursed. that god. but now my cousin when ever he sees my dad he tries to ditch him. its so funny. sudar gaya
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Posted: 20 years ago
Okay i am not at home.... but i see 99 pages!!!! how come b4 i only saw 81?????
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: guli444

Okay i am not at home.... but i see 99 pages!!!! how come b4 i only saw 81?????

ya i know dude..im also confused😕

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