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Posted: 20 years ago

hey

nice going👏

keep it up😉

u r definitely very creative and am sure ur stories reflect the person inside of u 😊

love KP

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great story! keep up the good work 👏
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Part 49

Dk and Disha take the baby to the hospital and see if its okay.. to adopt and it is okay... they are going to fill out all the paperwork for the baby

Dk fills out the forms while Disha is holding the baby Disha is really happy!!

Dk: Disha... What do you want to name her?

Disha thinks and thinks...

Disha: How about Neha?

Dk: Thats a nice name.. Okay we will name her Neha..

Doctor comes in

Doc: Before you guys take her.. i want to do a checkup on her and make sure she is okay.....

Dk: Yeah no problem

Doc: (She asks all ?'s about the baby and where was she etc..)

Doctor takes Neha in and Disha is like jumping up and down

Dk: Disha calm down.. every since we got here you have been jumpy!

Disha: I am so happy!!!

Doctor comes back in

Doctor: She is okay nothing is wrong with her you can take her home... but please be a little careful w/ her... She was only a couple of hours when you guys found her.... just keep the same routine you guys have been doing and everything will be okay!!

Disha; Thanx Doctor!!

They both leave and go home

Rohan's house:

Reena and Tina's friend come over Anjali comes in their room and they introduce each other..... Anjali leaves..

Friends name is Trisha!

Trisha: What happened to you guys?? I go for 2 weeks and you guys are acting all differently..

Reena: What are you talking about?

Trisha: Before if anyone came in you guys were all rude and now its all nice

Tina: Yeah... Its becuz of Bhabhi... She showed us

They talk for a little while... and they go shopping

They buy a lot of things and come back home.... They show each other what they got etc... and are looking @ themselves in the mirror...

Trisha: Here i brought this for you guys

Reena: Oh wow!! What for?? (looks at the price tag) Wow!!! This cost a lot of money!

Trisha: I didnt pay for it!

Tina: what are you talking about?

Trisha: Yea... i just took it

Reena: YOu stole it?😕

Trisha: Well its not really stealing...

Reena: Are you out of your mind????

Trisha: No Dont worry about it!! Just do me a favor keep these things here

Reena: Wait a min.. we didnt see you buy these?

Trisha: Who bought them??

Reena and Tina are shocked..... In the store they had already bought their stuff but b4 leaving they saw a cute shirt so Trisha quickly put that in their bag

Tina: Look i am not keeping this stolen stuff in my room!!!! You take it

Trisha: Look just a for a little while! please!!

They get convinced....

Trisha just keeps doing this and both Reena and Tina are fed up with it.... But when they confront her She blackmails them that if they dont keep it for a little while... she will call the police and them that they stole it...

Reena and Tina are in a rut and they dont know what to do!


Saigal house:

Disha is in her room playing with Neha.. she is so attached to her... Dk comes and stands near her

Disha: Isnt she the cutest thing you've ever seen?

Dk: Not cute as you!!! 😳😳😳

Disha: Dk....??

Dk: (Laughs)

They both play with her for a little while...


Rohan's house:

Anjali comes in and sees all of their stuff

A: Wow!! You guys did all of this shopping! Where did you get the money from?

Reena and Tina dont know what to say

She looks at everything and finds it nice...

Reena: Bhabhi.. um...

A: Yes..

Tina: What Reena is trying to say is...

Maya walks in....

Maya: What are you guys doing?

R and T are like 😕😕😕 now what

A: I am just looking at what they bought?

M: You guys did so much shopping.. Who gave you the money? I didnt and neither did your dad

Reena: We saved it.. then we finally took it out and then we bought this stuff

M doesnt seem convinced....

M: Yeah but this stuff is so expensive...

Maya just leaves and Anjali also leaves Trisha comes there and she has more bags in her hand.... and like R and T cant take it anymore..... Anjali is walking back and is listening to their convo

Reena: Look we cant keep this stuff in here no more.. do you know how bad it was just a min ago!

Trisha: Look its only a matter of a few days

Reena: No.. (yells😡) You take all of it its now ours!!! You stole it!! you keep it!

Trisha: Whos going to believe you... I admitted i took it but it will you guys be that will be in trouble...

T: Look just take these things out of here

Trisha: Fine have it your way.... you watch tomorrow you guys are busted...

She takes all things and opens the door and sees Anjali standing and she is shocked

Trisha: Anjali Bhabhi.. i was just leaving!!

Anjali: Where do you think you are going?

T: uh.. home.. w/ my things i was just showing them what i had bought!

A: Bought??? or stole??

R and T are like relieved cuz someone's on their side...

A: Look you get out of this house right now.... and i will be calling your mother and telling her about this and it will be you that will be caught not them!!!!!!!!


Trisha just runs

Reena: Thanks so much bhabhi....

A: why didnt you tell me b4?

Reena: We were scared...

A: You know i will be always there for you guys when you are in trouble!!!

They both smile and they hug Anjali


Saigal house:

Neha is sleeping in a crib by Dk and Disha's bed and she starts crying Disha gets up and puts her in the middle of the two of them...

Neha falls asleep... Dev is feeling scared and goes into thier room again w/ his blankie and his teddy bear but finds out its occupied😭 and is sad... He doesnt know what to do.... He comes out.... Sia is getting a glass of water and sees Dev walking in the hallways..

Sia: Dev What are you doing?? Are you scared?

Dev nods his head yes and she knows that he cant sleep between Dk and Disha because Neha's there

Sia: Come on.... i'll take you w/ me!

Dev sleeps in the middle of Ved and Sia and Ved turns...

Ved: WHat happened to him/

Sia: HE was scared but Neha's in there so i brought him here....

Ved: (Smiles)

Dev falls asleep

Next Morning:

Disha gets up and gets ready she puts a pillow on one side of Neha and the other side Dk is there....

Dk turns and sees Neha there and makes her hold his finger which she does and he has flashbacks of when Khushi was like that!

Dk slowly gets up Neha starts crying Dk picks her up and she stops... Khushi comes in and sees that Dk is holding Neha and is getting all irritated... and leaves

Khushi: (herself) Ever since she came here Daddy doesnt even come by me anymore 😭

Dk puts back Neha down and he puts pillows all around her so she is safe and goes and takes a shower.... Disha comes in and sees that and lets Neha sleep.... Khushi comes in and is just staring at her... 20 mins later Dk comes back down and is fixing himself in front of the mirror😳😳😳

Khushi comes and hugs Dk...

K: (Loud) Daddy!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Shhh.. dont talk so loud Neha is sleeping

K gets irritated.. she goes by the bed and looks at Neha.. she goes on top of the bed

Dk: K, what are you doing? get down.. she is sleeping

K: I just want to see her

Dk: Later when she is awake...

Later Khushi tries waking up her up by jumping on the bed and Dk gets really furious

Dk: K?? What are you doing?? I told you once no right.. get off the bed😡

K: Okay i wont jump i promise!!

Khushi laters tries shaking her and tapping her and she does it for a while and Dk notices....

Dk: (Yells) KHUSHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?? LEAVE HER ALONE.. GET OUT... GO OUT OF THIS ROOM NOW!!!!!!!!!!!

K: but daddy.. i was just

Dk: Leave her alone i told you once and now i am not going to tell you again!!!!

Khushi is sad! 😭

She gets off slowly and is thinking to herself

K: Daddy never yelled @ me like this before.. this is the 1st time.. and its all because of you!!!!! Gives a mean look.. (Shes only 5 and shes giving attitude)

Before leaving Khushi sees a glass Vase on the table and she picks it up and she throws it on the floor and it makes a loud noise, Neha jumps and starts crying loudly... Disha rushes in and picks her up and Dk smacks her one.... (khushi)

Dk: what is your problem?? Today i am giving you your 1st punishment.. go to your room now!

Disha: Dk.. you smacked her?? why??

Dk: DO you know what she did?? (tells her everything)

Disha: What did i say about controlling your anger?

Dk: Disha if you were here to see it you would've done the same thing!!!! 😡😡😡


Khushi is in her room crying and crying

K: I thought daddy loved me!!! (thinking no 1 is there)

Disha: He does!!

K turns around..

K: Mommy.... (Hugs her)😭

Disha: Why did you do all of those things in there?

K: Because daddy wasnt paying attention to me!!

Disha: YOu should've thought about that your sister was in there sleeping and until daddy got ready and came out.. then you could've done what ever you wanted to!

K: Yeah but...

Disha: I think you should go and say sorry to daddy!!

K: Me?

Disha: Yes!! Not right now though later.. when's he not that angry!

K: okay!!

Disha: (wipes her tears) Now no more crying and give me a big smile!!!!😃😃😃

K gives her a smile and hugs Disha......

Disha goes back to talk to Dk

Dk: I know you went to go to Khushi.. i will go but not now

Disha: I know i know i told her to see you later

Dk: Disha.. you cant spoil our kids too much!!

Disha: I am not spoiling them!!

Dk: YOu have to be a little tough sometimes...

Disha: But control your anger!!!

Dk: Arre baba.. i know i know!!!

Dk is putting on his tie but Disha grabs it and puts it on him... Dk is just staring @ her and Disha is smiling but is not looking at him and then she looks up

Disha: What are you looking @?

Dk: You!

Disha: Why?

Dk: Because i love you!!!

Disha: 😳 I love you too!


Dk leaves for work and Khushi sees him leaving 😭

Dk and Ved return home

Dk goes into Khushi's room and Khushi is coloring in her coloring book.. Dk stares at her for a while and then Khushi finally notices him and she is a little nervous...

Dk notices that and gives a smile😃 and Khushi smiles and runs and gives him a big and tight hug!!

K: I am sorry daddy!!!! I was bad today!

Dk: I am too i should'nt have done what i did... but you have to understand that when i say no to something you have to listen..

K: I know!!!

Dk gives her a little talk and everything is okay!!! They hug and flashbacks of when K was small and in the hospital... etc......

NIGHT NIGHT!!!!!!!!!! THE END!!!!! TO BE CONT TOMORROW!!!!! HOPE YOU ENJOYED AND KEEP THE COMMENTS COMING AND IDEAS COMING.. AS OF NOW.. IF YOU GUYS HAVE ANY FEEL FREE TO SEND A PRIVATE MESSAGE AND I WILL SEE THEM TOMORROW!! OKAY!! BYE!!!!!


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Posted: 20 years ago
thanks alot again it was great again
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Posted: 20 years ago
GOOD KEEP IT UP AND WRITE THE NEXT PART SOOOOOOOON👏 👏
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Gr8 Story plz continue!! Don't quit!!!!!! Nice name!!!!!😉
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wow getting interesting plz do write more yeh dill mange more
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Part 50

2 months later: Sia is almost 3 weeks away from her delivery She doesnt have any complications what so ever!!!

Dk and Disha's bedroom

Disha: (hugs Dk from behind)

Dk: What happened?

Disha: Nothing.. cant i give my husband a hug!!

Dk: Disha.. i havent gotten this hug for a while.. so something is up! tell me

Disha: Nothing!!!

Dk: Disha...!!! 😳😳😳

Disha: Okay.. come on lets go to the mall w/ Sia and Ved!

Dk: I knew it!!! I knew there would be something fishy somewhere!!!

Disha: Please Dk!!

Dk: You know i hate going shopping!! You guys take forever... just pick something nice for me and thats it!!

Disha: Please Dk!! Ved is going!

Dk: (Whining) I dont want to go!!

Oh man i would pay big bucks to see him Whine!!!😆

Disha: Come on!!

Dk: Dont make me go!!

Disha: Fine.. if you dont w/ us today i wont talk to you!!

Dk: You know thats never going to happen!!

Disha: Yes it will!!

Dk: Disha... You will take your time and look @ things!!

Disha: So??

Dk: Please...

Disha: Dk... i am warning you if you dont come then i wont talk to you!!

Dk: We will see about that!!!

It's been 1 hour since Disha hasnt spoken Dk is getting irritated and cant take it anymore

Dk: Okay you win!! This silence is killing me!!!

Disha smiles!!

Disha: I knew it would work!!!

Dk: Man.. 1 whole hour seemed like forever!!

Disha: Okay now get ready we will be leaving soon

All four of them go to the mall, Disha and Sia get hooked on everything they see

Dk: Now Disha you see why i dont like coming!!

Disha: Dk!! 😡😡

Dk: Okay okay i wont say anything

They split up Ved and Dk go one way and Sia and Disha go another

All four of them are having a good time.....

Sia and Disha take the elevator to get to the upper floor and all of a sudden the elevator gets stuck....

Disha: Dont panic it always happens...

Sia: (Worried)

Disha starts pushing all these buttons and both of them are scared.....😕😕😕

Disha calls the emergency number and she cant get a hold of anyone.... She tries calling Dk but he has no signal!!!!

Disha tries calling Ved but he cant hear his phone ring!!

Ved: Okay brother lets go... we have been here forever!!!

Dk: Lets go see where they are....

Disha is yelling like crazy and she reaches a person and they tell her to calm down they are sending someone...

All of sudden the people start gathering around and cuz the elevator is not moving..... and everyone has found out that two women are stuck in there... Dk and Ved see whats going on

Ved: Hey whats the gathering??

Dk: Its probably a show or something

Ved: Hey bhai saab... what happened?

person: two women are stuck in a elevator!

Both of them are shocked....

Dk: DO they know who??

Person: No

Ved: It cant be...

Dk: No...

They both run in the front and Dk gets his phone and is trying to reach Disha but no use Ved calls her but Disha has finally lost signal and no one can reach other

Sia is all nervous.. and all of a sudden.... her water breaks.... she starts screaming and starts sitting down

Sia: Bhabhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Sia.. what happened???

Sia: I think my water broke...

Disha is shocked..

Disha: Sia calm down

She calls the emergency operator again and tells them that hurry and tell them to call their husbands.... and to announce and give their names out..

They announce in the mall that two women are stuck.. by the names of Sia and Disha and Ved and Dk are like totally jumping up and down

Sia: I dont want to have this baby w/o Ved... Please call him!

Disha: Sia calm down everything will be okay

Sia: (Screaming in pain and is holding her stomach)

Disha: Calm down and breathe Sia..

Ved tries calling Disha..

Disha: Hello!!

Signal is bad

Ved: Hello Dish...

Disha: Hello Ved if you can hear me.... Sia is going into labor

Ved: What????????????????????????????😭

Disha: Yes...

And they cut off

Ved: Sia's in labor

Dk is shocked...

Disha is handling the situation calmly but Sia is like i want Ved!!!!!

Sia: I want Ved in here with me!!! I wont have this baby if he's not here w/ me!!!!

Disha: Calm down.. Sia...

Sia: How can I?

Dk and Ved are like pacing back and fourth..

The techs are there and are trying to fix the elevator...

They are covering it on TV also so Sum, Dhruv are watching it .. with Yash and Naina.... and Anjali and her family are watching it and are all praying and are jumpy also!

Techs: Dont worry we are on it!!

Disha is relieved meanwhile Sia is like screaming her lungs out in pain......

There's a little box on top which is open where a person can come in and out..... and Sia is begging the techs to call her husband in here because shes is literally moments away from giving birth!!!

The announcers call Ved and he rushes.. he squeezes his way through and comes into the elevator and Sia is relieved...

Disha: I think we cant wait anymore.......

Ved: what?

Disha: Yes...

Ved: SO what do we do..

They had bought a baby blanket so they covered Sia with that and Sia holding Ved's hand really really really tight but Ved dont care and tells her to calm down

Disha: Sia.. please work with me.. Breathe....

Sia: I CANT TAKE THIS😡

Disha: Okay Sia.. Start pushing....


She pushes and screams pushes and screams and in the mall it is dead silent cuz they are trying to hear.. they can hear everything that is going on....Dk is down w/ everyone else cuz he cant go.... (They are all on the bottom floor.. the elevator is stuck half way!!)

Sia pushes some more and every hears a baby crying!!!!!! and Sia is relieved and so is Ved...... Everyone's smiling!! Dk is like thank god!!!


As soon as that happens the elevator is working again and they go to the bottom floor and when the door opens Sia is sitting on the ground.. with the baby in her hands.. Everyone is clapping for them...

Person: Boy or Girl

Disha: It was a healthy baby boy!!!

Everyone is happy!!!

The ambulance arrives with the strecher and they puts Sia on it.. Disha goes to Dk and hugs him tightly!!!!!

Everyone who was watching on TV are all relieved!!!!!!!😆

Everyone goes to the hospital Sia is in normal condition and everything is fine.. The baby is okay also!!!! The doctor discharges them the same night so everyone goes home!!!

Yash: So what are you going to name him?

Ved: We have thought of....Rohit....

Everyone likes the name!!


Sia is getting knocked out.. so she goes to sleep w/ the baby who has already fallen asleep!!



Couple of days later:

Rohit is crying and crying and Sia is like totally tired and she takes him out but he wont stop crying... Disha hears him crying so she gets up.. puts a pillow by Neha and Dk notices that shes gone and stays attached to Neha....

Disha comes out

Disha: Sia.. what happened to him?

Sia: I dont know Bhabhi.. he's crying so much!!

Disha notices that Sia is about to cry cuz she is tired and havent had sleep...

Sia: Disha go back to sleep i will take care of him

Disha: Here give him to me...

Sia: Bhabhi...

Disha: Here... Please

Disha takes him and starts walking with him and after 10 mins he calms down and Sia is relieved.....

Disha sits on the couch with him

Disha: You go in i will bring him in later... You need your rest..

Sia: You do to!!

Disha: You need it more than i do!! Go Sia.. look at your face... it seemed like you havent slept for months.. DOnt worry about us... you go and take rest

Next Morning:

Dk looks to see Disha but shes not there he looks at the time and its 6.. Disha doesnt wake up til 7.... he puts pillows all around Neha and comes out... and sees Disha sleeping with Rohit on the couch.. Sia gets up and sees the same thing

Sia: OH my god Bhabhi!!

Dk: what happened?

Sia: She told me she would bring him in 30 mins.. but i didnt know she stayed here all night.... Sia takes Rohit very carefully w/o waking him up.... Disha is in deep deep deep sleep so Dk picks her up and takes her into the room and puts her to sleep.... He goes back to sleep and dozes off again!!!! 😃

Sum and Dhruv are awake and notice how come no one is up yet!! She goes checks on Sia and Ved they are sleeping goes into Dk rooms they are sleeping

Sum: Everyone is still sleeping!

Dhruv: DIdnt you hear Rohit in the night time

Sum: Yes..

Dhruv: when i came out for a glass of water Disha was sleeping on the couch w/ Rohit and Sia really really needed her rest she hasnt gotten any sleep @ all..

Sum: Poor child!!!

Sum goes and gets the kids ready for skool and Dhruv and Yash take them and also they get their morning walk.... Sum goes back into Ved's room and takes Rohit cuz he awake and Takes Neha cuz shes away too.....

Sum and Naina give both of them a bath and they both feed them too.. Afterwards.... they play with them a little and both of them go back to sleep

It is 12:00 in the afternoon and they are still sleeping!!! Deep sleepers i tell ya!

Disha gets up and wonders how she got back here... and she looks at the time and is shocked.....


Disha: Dk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its 12 we overslept

Dk: HUh?? what??😕😕😕

DIsha: Where's Neha??

Disha gets up quickly and runs out... and she sees Neha and Rohit have always been taken care of and everything!!

Disha: Mummyji i am so sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i promise this wont happen again!!!!!

Sum: What wont???

Disha: waking up late

Sum: What's there to be worried about? me and naina took care of everything.. I wondered what happened so i went to both of your rooms and the kids were awake so i took them w/o disturbing you!! I got the kids ready and they left already for school

DIsha is relieved

Sum: I Know you stayed up here all night w/ Rohit... because of Sia

Disha: You should have seen her she couldnt take it anymore!!!! but please let her sleep!!

Sum: Dont worry!!!!!!!!

Disha goes back to her room and gets ready.. wakes up Dk.... and after 15 mins of nagging he finally wakes up...

Sia wakes up and notices its 12 and is shocked she doesnt see Rohit and she runs out...

Sum: Neha how are you feeling?

Sia: Rohit?

Sum: Dont you worry about him i have bathed him fed him and done everything!!!

Sia: Divya??

Sum: I got all the kids ready also and they are in skool Disha didnt get up either.. she just woke up about 30 mins ago also!!!

Sia takes a shower

Sia: Ved.. wake up its 12

Ved: Sia... really?? Oh my god!!!!!!!

Ved is like having a panic attack he gets up quickly and gets ready!!!!!

Disha and Sia are having lunch and Dk and Ved come out...

They both see Sum.. and Sum has a angry face😡

Dk and Ved are like... Oh man!!! Busted!!

Disha and Sia are laughing!!! but they dont notice

Dk: Ma... um..

Sum: Dont need to say anything!!!!!!!!! (yells)

Both of them are shocked


THE END.. I WILL CONT TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NIGHT NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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the story is fab plz cont soooooon👏👏

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Thanks again for the lovely story.

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