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Part 45

Reena and Tina sneak out of the house and Anjali sees them

A: Where you too going this late?

Reena: Why do you care? You made are lives hell as it is by coming here to this house!

Tina: Yeah what else do you want from us?

A: I dont want anything from you guys.. i worry about you guys!

Reena: Worry??? Yeah right!! tell that to someone you really mean it too!

Anjali really does care for them.. she has nothing against them but they dont believe it.... They are talking smack to her and A is sad!😭😭😭

They both go Clubbin and start dancing and go crazy!!!! Two guys see them and they start to dance with them!! After they realize it is really late.. two R and T decide to leave the place... They walk towards the door and the two guys start following them having something else in mind! They notice and they start walking faster and faster and the guys are keeping up.... and they they start running and the guys are running after them they both are so scared and are crying....... They keep running and they stop in front of a car they both look and it is none other than Anjali... She gets out of the car

Anjali: Who are you two? (the guys)

Guy #1: We are their friends

R and T have confused looks on their face

A: Really?? if you guys are their freinds how come they were running?

Guy #2: We were just messing around anyways.. who are you to but in the middle?

A: Who am i? Do you really want to know who i am?

Guy 1: Yes we do!

A: I Am their sister-in-law!!! So you better watch it buddy okay!! And i see you guys near them again... i wont spare you!!

R and T are happy and are crying! and a little shocked that she stood up for them

A: Come on and get into the car!

Anjali was driving and nobody was talking it was silent!!

A: Why do you guys do these things? Do you know how much your parents worry about you guys? They need your support @ a time like this.. and in a couple of years you guys will be getting married

They both just listen and are sad!😭

They all arrive home Rohan is waiting for them and A is shocked

Rohan: ANjali where did you go?

A: I went with them today.. i told them lets go do something fun!!

They are shocked bcuz she really didnt tell them what happened!!

Rohan: Really?

A: YEs.. now you go to sleep and dont worry about us you have to go to office tomorrow!!

Rohan: OKay okay!!!!

Rohan goes upstairs R and T just stand there thinking now what?

A: Okay you guys go upstairs.. and go to sleep its late!

Tina: Why did you stand up for us?

A: why wouldnt have i?

Reema: Yeah but what we did to you?

A: And???

Tina: But we didnt deserve it!

A: Hey i am the bahu of the this family and it is my responsibility to look after everyone that lives in this house!!! And you two are part of this house.. and you are my responsibility.. and who knew what those guys were up to!!

Reema: (cries) I am really sorry Bhabhi....

A is shocked cuz she called her bhabhi!

T: Me too!!!!

A: Its okay you guys go to ur rooms!

They both hug her and it gets all emotional!!😃



Saigal house:

Dk decides to play a little game w/ Disha and makes a phony address book and put all these girls name and fake numbers to think what Disha might do!!! He fills most of it and puts in the drawer Dk laughs😆

Disha: Dk.. what are you doing?

Dk: Oh nothing....

Disha: Nothing you were doing something......

Dk: um... no... i was just here

Disha: Really? then why do you have ur hand on the drawer?

Dk: No special reason

Disha: Let me see

Dk: Oh no Disha dont waste ur time

Disha: Okay now i am curious... let go

Dk; Disha..

Disha: Let go..

He lets go and gets up she looks in the drawer and finds the book

Disha: What's this?

Dk: Oh nothing give it to me

Disha: What is it?

Dk: Nothing... really

Disha opens it and is shocked

Disha: Who are all these women?

Dk: No one special?

Disha: Then why do you have their numbers?

Dk: Okay.. i will tell you.. i knew that i wouldnt be able to keep this from you... These are all my ex-girlfriends!!!!😆

Disha: WHAT????????????😡

Dk: Um.. yes Disha...

Disha: How could u not tell me?

Dk: What's there to talk about?

Disha: I see... then why didnt you get rid of it?

Dk: I forgot i had it!

Disha: DK......?😡😡😡

Dk: Why you getting all mad?

Disha: Because..... you didnt tell me and how many did you have?

Dk: Only about 34!

Disha: 34????????????????😡

Dk: Why too much?

Disha: You think this is a joke??????

Dk: No....(shakes his head and tries to be funny)

Disha: Dk. you are making me mad!

Dk: But i didnt do anything!!! Anyways forget about it lets go to dinner today?

Disha: No i dont want to go!!!

Dk: If not you then who else will i go with?

Disha: Why dont you call ur ex?

Dk: Okay.. if you insist!😆

Disha: What?

Dk: You would'nt mind would you?

Disha: Me??? Um.. of course not... why should i?

Dk: Fine then i will call them up!!!!

Disha: FIne see if i care!!!

Dk is laughing when disha doesnt see him!!!!

Dk dials Ved's number

Ved: Yes Brother?

Dk: Kavita?? How are you its me Dk?

Ved: Kavita who's Kavita? Brother its me Ved!

Dk: Yes i know Kavita...

Ved is like what the heck is wrong w/ him? (Oh man i am laughing so hard right now.. i know i am crazy.. but its funny😆)

Ved: Brother are you okay?

Dk: I am fine Kavita... what are you doing?

Ved: I think you need to go to the doctor brother!!

Dk: So anyways would you like to go for dinner 2nite?

Disha is looking all sad and is jealous!!

She grabs the phone from him

Disha: Hello Who ever you are... Bye... (She hangs up)

Ved is like something is wrong... somewhere

Dk calls Ved again

Ved: Brother whats going on?

Dk: Arre... Rupa? How are you?

Ved: Rupa?????

Dk: How are you? Its me Dk

Ved: Are you playing a trick on Dish

Dk: YEs you are right.. i am still the same person!!!

Ved: I see..... Brother you are so crazy

Dk: I know.. hey listen you want to go to dinner?

Ved: Sorry brother..

Dk: Oh its okay!! thanx! bye

Disha: See no one wants to go w/ you!

He tries calling about 8 women and on the 9th try

Dk: Hello Priyanka!

Ved: Brother... i have got a plan

Dk: Really wow

Ved: Okay... i will say yes to you... but i will put Sia on the line.. see if Dish knows its her and if not.. then you know

Dk: Okay then i see

Sia: Dk.. you are crazy

Dk: I Know

Sia: Is bhabhi getting jealous?

Dk: Very much.. listen you want to go to dinner for 2nite?

Sia: Sure i would love to

Dk: YOu love too thats great... we will go anywhere you like....

Disha hears this and is sad!!!!

Dk: Okay then tonight @ 8

Sia: OKay then.. hey i will bring Ved too so she'll think that we too are going out!

Dk: Thats perfect see you then!!!

Disha: I hope you have a good time!!!

Dk: I will.. She's inviting her best friend so it will be fun!!

Disha cries and leaves😭😭😭

Dk is laughing

Dk: (Himself): I am sorry Disha.. But to tell you the truth you were, you are, and always be the only person in my life!!!!!


Disha is thinking

Disha: Why did i get so jealous? I shouldnt be.. let him do what ever he wants!
(She starts daydreaming)

Sia comes

Sia: Hi bhabhi (all hyper) Bhabhi? (snaps her fingers)

Disha: Huh? Oh Hi sia!!

Sia: Hey listen would you mind taking care of Divya for me, me and Ved are going out for dinner? Unless you and Dk have something else in mind!!

Disha: Oh no.. hes going out... i will be happy to take care of her

Sia: Thanks Bhabhi!

Disha smiles when Sia leaves she frowns again!

Dk is getting ready and puts his best clothes on! Disha sees this and ignores him she sits on the bed and pretends to read a magazine

Dk comes over

Dk: Okay i am going.... Dont wait up for me!

Disha: Go and have fun!! 😡

Dk: I will 😆 You lost ur chance Disha!!!!!!!


Disha is sad Dk leaves Ved and Sia also leave...

Dk tells Ved and Sia about what was really goin on about the address book and stuff in the car... They both go in separate cars by the way cuz Disha was looking out from her room!!!!

Disha cant take it anymore and she decides to follow them

Disha: Mummyji.. i am really sorry but can you take of the kids.. i will be right back

Sum: No problem take ur time me and Dhruv are here you dont worry

Disha: Thanx!!

Disha takes the car and she's driving... and she is following Dk

Driver of Dk's car: Sir?

Dk: Yes?

D: Um.. i am not sure but is that Maam behind us?

Dk: (Looks in the mirror) Yes it is

D: How come ur not together?

Dk: Dont worry about it!! (Dk is laughing)😆

Dk: (Calls Ved) VEd??

Ved: YEs brother!!!

Dk: DIsha is following me?

Ved: What?

Dk: Yes...

Ved: OKay you know she's only going to be spying on you so just act like shes not there... We will sit... and the way we will sit.. Dish wont be able to see us

Dk: Perfect!

Ved and Sia arrive they are @ a booth they sit next to each other Dk comes along and sees them and Shakes Sia's hand.. Disha looks at this.. she sees a woman's hand but not the face and she is just looking and he is laughing

DK: She is watching!!!

Ved: She must be going crazy!!!

Dk: I Am sure she is!!!

Sia: But Dk.. this was mean... She's going to be mad when she finds out

Dk: No 1st, she will be relieved.... then she will be mad!

Disha is still watching... (Dk notices everything she does from the corner of his eye.. and i mean everything) Disha closes her eyes and starts crying and she decides to leave and is just walking very slowly!!

Dk: She left... Let me go and get her

Ved: Okay you do that

Dk: DIsha??????????????????????/

Disha: (Daydreaming) thinking of flashbacks of her good times w/ Dk

Dk: Disha??????

He is running behind her and finally grabs her...

Dk: Disha? Do you know how many times i called you

Disha: Look.. you enjoy your dinner i am leaving

Dk: Disha stay i want you to meet these people...

Disha: ME?? I dont want to meet them

Dk: You should.. you will like their company

Disha: No i will not

Dk: Dont be stubborn come on!!!


Disha keeps saying no and Dk forces her to come and she doesnt see them


Dk: Disha.. come on...

Disha: Why do i have to meet them?

Dk: Come on... Here you are meet my date

Disha: (looks and is shocked to see Ved and Sia) YOU????????????/😕

All of them are laughing!!

Dk: What did you think? I would go out w/ another woman!!!!!!

Ved: Dish, when he was calling those women he wasnt calling them he called me! and i thought he was going crazy!!

Disha: But those people in the book

Dk: I made that up..... and i put it there so i can look suspicious..

Sia: Bhabhi.. you should've have seen your face!!!

They all enjoy dinner and go home..

Disha goes and sits on the bed and is crying

Dk: Now what happened Disha?

Disha looks at him all sad and she hugs him!!

Dk enjoys the hug!!

Dk: DO you really think there can be a another woman in my life? I have you already.. i dont need anyone else!!!!

Disha: I am really sorry!!!!

Dk: I Should be sorry!! But come on look at it it was pretty funny!

Disha: (laughs)

Dk: Disha... you were always mine, you are mine, and will always be mine!! I love you too much to be w/ someone else!!

Disha: I Am scared of losing you!! Just the thought of it freaks me out!

Dk: I am notgoing anywhere and leaving you!!! Remember we are there til the end!!!! Remember our vows.... I keep my word you are my (wife to have and to hold, for better or for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish; from this day forward until death do us part!!! I remember it all!!!!!!!!!

Disha: (Cries and hugs him some more)


Next Morning:

Anjali has set the table for breakfast and everyone is there even R and T

Rohan: Why are you guys so quiet today? You dont have anything bad to say?

A: Rohan.. leave them alone!!

Rohan: Why?

A: Rohan please!!! For my sake!

Maya: Are you guys okay?

Reema: We are fine! Nothing is wrong

Everyone seems like whats wrong with them... Rohan leaves for work Maya and Ajay (Rohan's dad) leave and go to their room to rest a little....

Reena and Tina are there just looking @ their foods!

A: Why are you playing with your food? Its not nice

R: No bhabhi..

A: I know why you guys are acting like this.. You have to prove to them that you have changed, They now expect that you will be rude to them....

T: We have been really bad!! I dont why i was acting like that

A: Hey everyone changes for the better.... and you guys proved that today!

R: But will they know it?

A: You have to promise not you yell, use profanity, and talk nicely to everyone!!!

R: We will try

A: Not trying you will do it for good!!!


They just think about it for while!!!


Saigal house:

Disha is sleeping on peacefully and Dk has gotten up and taken a shower and is ready

Dk: Disha.. you're still not awake.. Arent you usually the one who has to drag me out of bed!!

Dk goes and sits next to her and is carressing her face and forhead

Dk: Hey sleeping beauty! Wake up!

Disha: Let me sleep for 5 more mins!

Dk: No disha!! WHat is this? U never let me sleep!! Now i am not going to let you sleep!!!

Disha: Please!!

Dk: Come on!!

Disha: Please!! (Gives a cute puppy sad face)

Dk: Fine!! I will leave for work.. (He kisses her on the forehead)

Disha gets up slowly and takes a shower

Sia is in her room is on a stepper putting something and Ved sees her.. Sia is about to fall but Ved comes and catches her!

Ved: SIa.. why couldnt you ask me? I was right here! What if something happened to you!

Sia; If you are here nothing can happen to me!!

Ved puts her down... he is combing his hair he goes by his bed and puts a watch on.... All of a sudden Sia holds her head and screams loud Ved looks at her.. is shocked and Sia falls to the ground..................


Doctor comes to the house and everyone is there... Sia is pregnant w/ her 2nd child... Ved is happy! he is thrilled!!!

Sia blushes😳

Disha: Okay now i am in charge.. leave everything to me!!!!

Sia: I am fine!!

Ved: Listen to Disha Sia!!

Sia: Okay okay!! Dont have a cow!!!

Everyone laughs!!!


Disha calls up Dk and is happy for the two of them!!!!!!!!!!!!!



NIGHT NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!! I WAS CRACKING UP WHILE WRITING THIS TODAY!!! 😆 HOPE YOU ENJOYED.. WRITE FEEDBACK... AND PLEASE THINK OF MORE IDEAS FOR ROMANTIC SCENES!!!!! THANX A BUNCH!!!! IF YOU DONT WANT TO POST THEN JUST SEND A PRIVATE MESSAGE.. AND I WONT SAY WHO SUGGESTED IT!!! IT WILL STAY B/T U AND ME!😃😃😃


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graeat story keep it upp and write the next part soon👏👏
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Amazing keep on going!!!!!!!👏👏👏
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Part 46

Rohan has come home from work.. Anjali is putting clothes away... He comes up behind grabs her from behind and spins her around...

A: Rohan.. What are you doing?

Rohan: I am happy Anjali!

A: For what?

R: Because i have booked the tickets for our honeymoon!

A: Really? Where?

R: Somewhere far!!!

A: Oh come tell me!!!

R: Okay You and Me are going on a 7 day trip to...

A: TO where??????????😕😕

R: Paris!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A: Really????

R: Yes.. just you and me and no one else!

A: When do you we leave?

R: Day after tomorrow

A: ROhan... i have to start packing....

R: Oh do that later!!!

A: Rohan....!!

They are both happy!!!

Saigal house:

Its the middle of the night and Everyone is sleeping... Dev (Their son.. i forgot about him) cant sleep because he is too scared.... he grabs his little teddy bear and his blanket and goes to Dk's room.. he opens the door, gets on the bed and sleeps towards Disha..... He feels uncomfortable... then turns towards Dk... and he falls asleep..... Disha and Dk both have thier backs turned.... Later Disha turns around and sees Dev.... and smiles... Then Dk feels something and turns around and sees that Dev is holding on to him!!! 😳


Disha wakes up and gets the kids ready all 3 of them except Dev... cuz they have to go to skool...

Sia: Bhabhi why did you take the trouble.. i could've got Divya ready

Disha: Whats the trouble?? And Divya is like my daughter!!!

Dhruv (Senior) Walks the kids to skool cuz thats his job!

Dk gets up and leaves Dev sleeping...

Dk and Ved leave for the office

After a couple of hours.... some worker comes and tells them that somebody is taking the money from the account and Dk gets furious

Dk: What??? How can that be?

Ved: YEs.... our money is safe... Who is stealing the money?

Guy: I dont know Sir. But he is taking the majority

Dk: Find out for me.....


Dk is like really angry😡

Ved: Brother calm down.. We will find him!!

Dk: I hope so....

Ved: Do you suspect anyone?

Dk: No..... WHo can do this?

Dk and Ved stay in the office til late and Disha is calling Dk but Dk's not picking up he's no mad to talk... he knows that if he picks up... Disha will know that he is mad.. and she will say control your anger... etc...

They later leave and Dk is on the phone and is yelling they arrive home and Dk is furious and goes striaght to his room

Disha sees this She walks in and Dk hangs up

Disha: Dk.. what happened?

Dk: Nothing!! Someone is taking out money from our account.. and i am dying to find out who!

Disha: Calm down Dk... If you have this anger you wont get anywhere........

Dk justs looks at her and he leaves...

SUm walks in:

Sum: Disha... why didnt you say anything!

Disha: Mummyji.. i Know dk.. when he is mad he gets furious.. he will calm down just give him time!! Let him take some fresh air

Sum: But still...

Disha: Its okay!

Sum leaves

Dk is sitting outside and Disha sits next to him

Disha: Dk...

Dk: Please Disha leave me alone for a while

Disha: 😕😕 look i am not going to say anything to you...... i just wanted to sit next to you!!

Dk: Thanx but i really need to be alone... i am thinking and i might say something that i will later regret...

Disha: Dk....

Dk: (Yells) Disha please!😡

Dk phones rings and he has found out one of his workers is taking the money and he talks and to him for a while he hangs up and turns around and sees that DIsha is gone and is sad!!!!!

Dk: Man... i should'nt of yelled @ her!!

Dk goes into his room and Disha has fallen asleep...... Dk is sad!😭😭😭


Dk: Disha.. i am really sorry!!!!! I shouldn't of yelled @ you like that!! I know you were trying to help me!!!!

He goes to sleep and Disha is turned... and is crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


G2g bye!! cont. 2nite!
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thanks again for the great story
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hey nice story

keeps on getting better and better👏

will definitely wait for the next part😃

love KP😳

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