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Part 51

Dk: Ma..

Sum: Dont say anything!! 😡

Dk: I am really sorry.. we over slept.

Ved: Yea Me too!

Sum: I am not mad because you over slept... do you realize what today is?

Dk: Sunday??!!!😕😕

Sum: and what were you suppose to do today?

Dk: I dont know what!!!

Sum: Today you were to suppose to pick up someone

Dk: OH My God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will be back

See his cousin (Dhruv's nephew Jay is coming in town today!! and Dk was suppose to pick him up... but forgot..

Dk is driving around the airport and spots him..

Dk: Jay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jay: Dk...

They both hug

Jay: How is my brother???

Dk: I am so sorry i forgot to pick up!!

Jay: No worries.. i knew you would forget anyways!!!!!

Both laugh

They get home

Dhruv and Sum both hug him and so does Ved!!

Jay: Who are these beautiful young ladies???

Dk: They are you bhabhi's!

Jay: My brothers got married!! i can believe it!

Dk: This is my wife Disha... and She is Sia, Ved's wife!!

Jay: Nice to have met you!

DIsha and SIa smile!!!!

Sum: How was your flight?

Jay: What can i say chachi.... same ole flight..... boring!!!

Disha: Do you want to eat anything?

Jay: No... because i knew bhaiyya would forget my flight so i ate something!!

Dk: I said i am sorry!😆


Dk shows his room to Jay and gets comfy!!

Jay: Dk you are a changed man!!!

Dk: Why you say that?

Jay: Your married! Before you werent like that!

Dk: Yea but its all because of Disha!!!

Jay: I can see that!!!!!

Dk: Forget about me.. How about you! Has some crazy girl fallen for you!

Jay: No not yet!!

They talk and Dk leaves

Later that Night... Jay was insisiting Dk and Ved to go out.. So they both went out...

Jay gets some drinks but Dk and Ved dont have anything!!!

Jay: Oh come on guys..... i cant drink this on my own!!

Dk: Oh no way... I stopped!!

Jay: what?????

Ved: Yep!!!

Jay is thinking to himself.... "Couple of years back... He had several relationships w/ different women drinking partying.. and now none of that!! Man i dont know what this Disha did to him!! I think she is controlling him! i have to check this Disha out" 😕😕😕

Dk: Hello Jay!! Where are you lost?

Jay: No where.. Oh well i can enjoy cant i?

Ved: Be my guest!!

They talk about the past and stuff and everything thats happened!!!!!

It is 1:00 a.m. and they arent back.....

Disha is pacing back and fourth and hoping that Dk hasnt drank!!

Dk finally comes in

Disha: Dk... where were you?? Do you know how worried i was about you?

Dk: Dont worry i am fine!!

Jay is listening to thier convo!

Disha: You didnt drink did you???

Dk: Of course not!!

Disha: Good.. you better not have!!

Jay is like.. Dk you're gone!! and he leaves... (he took it the wrong way)

Dk: You know i swore upon you that i would never touch the stuff!!!!

Disha: Okay now go to sleep its late!

Dk: You should've gone to sleep!! You dont have to worry about me!!

Jay is thinking:

"I have to get Dk back on track... he is a totally changed man! what has gone into him! Before everything went his way... he controlled everything now some one is controlling his life... "

Next Morning:

Dk is like sleeping like baby but poor guy has to wake up and go to work

Disha: Dk.. get up you have to go to office

Dk: 5 more mins!!!

Disha: No come on!! Ved is up and ready he is waiting for you!!

Dk: tell him to leave and i will be there..

Disha: Dk.. i know you went to sleep late but after you get back today.. you can go to sleep early.. now come on and get up!!

Dk: Please Disha!!!!!!

Jay saw the whole thing again!!! and is like 😳 and leaves

Disha starts tickling Dk's ear

Dk: Disha.. stop it!!!!

Disha: DOnt like it....

She tickle's him even more and Dk gets up

Dk: Okay okay you win!!!!!

Disha: I always do😳

Dk is about to kiss her....

Disha: No.. go take your shower!

Dk: Come in just one!!

Disha: Dk... ur wasting time...

Dk: Okay okay !!!! Hey did u do that???

Disha: what?? (She looks and Dk kisses her on the cheeks.... and gets up)

😳 Disha blushes😳

Dk takes his shower and goes to work....

Dhruv and Yash take the kids to school and after dropping them off they go for their long walk.... Sum and Naina walk to the temple and they stay their for 1 hour... Ved has gone to meet Gargi in jail.. Which means that Only Jay and Disha are @ home!

Disha: Can i get you something?

Jay: Nope! Not at all!!

Disha: well if you do let me know!!

*****Jay is not those guys that hit on women.. so hes not gonna do anything like that..... just to let you guys know


Jay: I must say Bhabhi... Dk is changed man!

Disha: We have been married for about 6 years now...

Jay: Yeah but doesnt he have any fun in his life???

DIsha: Shocked? WHat are you trying to say?

Jay: I mean he wasnt the same man he was before he met you

Disha knows that

Disha: And...

Jay: Yesterday we went out and he didnt even drink 1 little drop of whiskey... Are you trying to ruin his life??

Disha is shocked and hurt😭

Jay: Why are you so controlling in his life?? Let him breathe.... and i heard you telling him if he had anything to drink last night... So who cares if he did!!!!

Disha: (Just listens and is saddened)

Jay: Thats why i dont want a women in my life.. because they are always to controlling.... and you guys have 4 kids... no wonder he doesnt have any fun anymore.... he's busy babysitting!!!!!!!

Disha closes her eyes!

Disha: Look.....

Jay: (Cuts him off) I was hoping to have a good time coming here but you spoiled my whole plans.... I cant have fun w/ Dk acting like that! I hope you are happy!!!!!

Walks off!!

Sia: Bhabhi!!!

Disha quickly wipes her tears

Sia: Where are you lost??

Disha: No where.. um.. i am going to go check on Neha.....

Neha is sleeping and Disha lies next to Sia....

Disha is crying her eyes out like crazy😭 and Jay's words are echoing over and over again...........

Sia walks in her room:

Sia: Bhabhi....

Disha: (Wipes her tears again) Yea Sia

Sia: Bhabhi whats wrong??

Disha: No nothing!! Nothing @ all!!

Sia: Something is up.. come on we have never hid anything from each other...

Disha: Its really nothing!!

Sia: Swear upon this sister of yours that nothings wrong with you!

DIsha looks at her and she cries and hugs Sia... 😭

Sia: Bhabhi??? What happened?

Disha: (tells everything what Jay told her)

Sia is shocked

Sia: What????? But...

Disha: I Know... and i guess he is right

Sia: He told you off and you agreed!!! Look i dont know Dk as much as you do but i dont think he cares about any of this...

They talk and talk

Disha: Sia you have to promise me that you wont say anything to anybody!!

SIa: You have to tell Dk..

Disha: No... i dont want fights here because of this..... i'll pretend it never happened! And i am scared that he will get mad at me and i dont want that!!!!!

Sia: I promise!!!

Sia leaves the room and is sad😭

Later that day:

Disha falls asleep and Sia goes and checks up on her.. she sees that she's sleeping so she takes Neha.... Dk and Ved come home from work and Dk goes into the room and finds Disha sleeping

Dk: Hey Disha.. wake up!

Disha gets up

Disha: Your back.. what time is it?

Dk: 6...

Disha: 6?? I have to make dinner...

Dk: Its taken care of already.... are you okay???

Disha: Yes i am fine!! I will be back

Dk is like whats wrong with her!? 😕

Everyone is talking and laughing and Disha is trying to be happy but its not working....... She goes inside the room but no one notices except for Sia!! 😭

Jay asks Dk to go out again... Dk says why not...

Dk goes into his room and gets ready.....

Dk: Arent you going to ask where am i going?

Disha: No... its your life you can do what ever you want!

Dk is surprised

Dk: Are you sure you are okay??? Your mood is off today!

Disha: I am fine!!!

Dk: I will be back.. i will try to come early

Disha: Dont worry stay out as late as you want😭

Dk leaves and is confused......

Jay and Dk go clubbin Dk is just there and Jay is having lots of fun.... By dancing and drinking.... its almost 2 and Dk is worried cuz he knows that until he is not there Disha wont sleep!!! Cuz that has always happened.. not once that DIsha has never been waiting for him!!

Dk makes some excuse that he has to go...... and blame Disha again thinking she might have told him something!

Dk comes home and finds Disha.. sleeping and is thinking she has never ever went to sleep until i came home!! She turned to her back towards Neha.... and Dk goes up to her and kisses her on the forehead to Both Disha and Neha.... He goes to sleep and Disha was awake and is crying!!!!!!!!!😭

Next Morning:

Jay is like lost in space had a big hang-over......

Jay: Well i hope you are happy!!

Disha: what did i do now?

Jay: HE left early yesterday.. why did you have to call him for?

Disha: I never called him.. when he came home i was asleep....

Jay: Sure you were!! I know you wanted him home early...

Disha: Look... i told you i didnt call him okay!!!!!!!

Jay: What ever!!!!!! I dont know what magic you have.....but before i leave... the old Dk will be back. it will take time but i will get him back on track!! You have messed him badly!!

Jay leaves and Disha is worried like crazy... Sia has heard everything!!!! Dk is getting up and its 9:00a.m. he is wondering why Disha didnt wake him up yet!! He gets up and gets ready.... and comes out

Dk: YOu didnt wake me up?

Disha: Oh i must have forgot

Dk: Forgot???? Disha whats wrong with you?

Disha: (yells a little) Look nothing is wrong with me okay!! So i didnt wake you up.. big deal....

(Jay is watching everything.....)

She walks off and Dk is hurt!!

Jay: (himself) Oh brother suck it up!!!!!!!!! so she was a little rude take it like a man!!!

Sia is there and wants to tell him everything but she cant!!!!!😭

Dk goes to work.... he is thinking why is Disha acting to funny.. she has never talken to me like this b4!! i hope nothing is wrong!

Disha is crying on her bed and doesnt know what to do!!!!!!!!

Disha: "Why is everything slipping away slowly? i yelled @ Dk when it wasnt his fault" She just thinks about everything and is sad!

Dk's @ work and he is not concentrating on his work

Ved: Brother.. ur not with it today... are you okay?

Dk: HUh?? did you say something?

Ved: Brother.... are you okay??? Where are you lost?

Dk: I am thinking about Disha..

Ved: Oh is that what it is.. Look i think about SIa all day but i still get my work done!

Dk: Its not like that.... Something is really bothering her and shes been acting differently.. but i dont know what it is?

Ved; Have you tried talking to her?

Dk: I tried.. but.. its like shes not the same Disha...

Ved: Thats strange!😕😕

Meanwhile Jay is on the phone booking some tickets so he can take Dk somewhere and Disha is listening to this and closes her eyes and is sad!!

Dk comes back early from work:

Disha by the way.. was on the couch giving Neha milk.. and Jay was right there talking on the phone....

Jay: Hey big brother... i have booked some tickets we are going to London....

Dk: look i dont want to go! I am sorry i am not in the mood

Dk leaves and Jay throws this phone on the floor and Disha gets scared!!

Jay looks at her w/ evil eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha takes Neha in her room and puts her on the bed..... cuz she fell asleep... She gets up and turns around and Dk is there

Disha: (looks away)

Dk: Please Disha.... i cant take this anymore.... please tell me what is bothering you!!! I will not live in peace if u dont tell me!

Disha: I have told you

Dk: No you are lying to me!

Disha: (looks down)

Dk: You have never talked to me like this.... never!!!!! and all of a sudden this attitude comes out of no where

Disha: (starts crying)

Dk: Why are you crying????😲

Disha: I am just really tired and i need my sleep thats why i have been cranky. i am sorry i didnt mean to make you worry!!

Disha leaves and Dk grabs her arm

Dk: YOu think i am going to buy that!!! I am not going to leave until you tell what is bothering you!!!!!!!!!!

Dk makes Disha sit on the bed and she sits next to him.... (Sia was listening the whole time)

20 mins pass by and Dk is still there and Disha is just crying away but hasnt said anything

Sia: Dk bhaiyya i will tell you whats wrong with Bhabhi!!!!!!!!!👏

Disha is shocked

Disha: Sia.. please leave

Dk: No Sia... tell me whats going on?

Sia: You really want to know why she has been acting like this..... Because of Jay

Disha: No.. she's lying

Dk: Sia go on

Sia: (Sia tells everything to Dk and Dk is shocked and Disha is crying)

Dk: What??

Sia: Yes... and she didnt want to say anything cuz she was afraid that you wouldn't believe her!! Jay has made her life a living hell!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is shocked and is sad!!!!!!!

Sia: I am sorry Bhabhi.. but i couldnt see you in this condition

Sia leaves and Dk and Disha stare @ each other...................

THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL CONT TOMORROW!!!!!!!!

COME ON I CANT LEAVE IT W/ A HAPPY ENDING TODAY... I HAVE ALWAYS DONE THAT... MIGHT AS WELL LEAVE YOU IN SUSPENSE FOR A WHILE AND MAKE YOU GUYS WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TOMORROW!! DONT BE MAD I LOVE YOU GUYS!😉


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Posted: 20 years ago

Thank you very much again

it was very very good

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Posted: 20 years ago
nice suprise but rite soon!!!! Nice story
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Posted: 20 years ago
WOW!! plz continue...i want to know what happens next!!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago

THE STORY IS FAB👏👏👏

WRITE SOOOOOOOON, CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PART,PLZZZZZZZ

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Posted: 20 years ago

hey gulli

nice job👏

keep it up😉

this jay man is gonna get his butt kicked or what!!!!!!!!😆

lol!!!!!!!!!hehehehehehehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆

love KP😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 52

Dk and Disha stare at each other later Disha looks down... Dk gets down on his knees and looks at Disha

Dk: All of this happened and you didnt tell me???

Disha: (closes her eyes)

Dk: Say something Disha... Why are you quiet?

Disha: (cries)😭

Dk: You know i trust you more than myself.... why did you hide such a big thing from me!!

Disha: Maybe he's right!

Dk: what?? are you out of your mind DIsha? if i am here in front of you today like this its because of you!!! Its a good thing Sia told me this i couldnt even work properly today!! I cant see you like this Disha... If you are hurt than i am hurt 100x more! DOnt you understand!!

Disha: (hugs him)

Dk: I wont spare him!!

Disha: No dont do anything drastic!!!

Dk: Disha..... If anyone messes with you i will not spare them!!!!!!

Dk walks out all angry and Disha is scared!

Dk is about to yell at Jay.. When Disha comes

Disha: Dk.. Ved just called from the office.. there's a problem you must go fast!!

Dk: Wait Disha...... Jay..

Disha: Hurry Dk...please!

Dk knows that Disha is lying.. he goes back into his room all mad.....

Disha comes back

Dk: Why did you stop me?

Disha: Because dont do anything that you're going to regret!

Dk: Trust me i wont regret anything!!

Disha: Please for my sake

Dk gets mad! But listens to Disha!!

From outside Dk sees Jay coming so he pretends he's on the phone w/ Ved... and he starts talking and Disha is like what the heck is wrong with him!😕😕😕 and then she sees him and realizes!

Jay comes into the bedroom gives DIsha the evil eye.. and Dk sees that😡

Jay: Brother..... where do you want to go today???

Dk: No where! I am not in the mood today

Jay: Please brother! Lets go out somewhere!!

Disha: (Yells) No he's not going anywhere!!

Jay and Dk are shocked

Disha: Yes you heard me.... right!! He's not going anywhere because i said so!!!!! DO you have any problems Jay?? I hope not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

👏

Dk is like whats gotten into her but DIsha 😉 @ Dk and knows she's up to something!!

Jay: Are you going to let her talk to me like that!!

Disha gives signals to Dk telling him to get mad @ Disha..... Dk doesnt know how to get mad her !! lol!!!😆

Jay; Hey where are you lost???

Dk: OH yes... Who are you talk to my brother like that!

Disha: Listen i have said it once and i will say it again.. you are not going anywhere!!!!

Dk: I cant believe you.. you have never talked to me like this before!!!!

Disha: Well too bad cuz you better get use to it!!

Jay's like... Disha i am not gonna spare you😡 Jay leaves in a huff and Dk and Disha start laughing like crazy😆


Disha: You know Dk... Jay promised me that he will get back the old you before he leaves!!

Dk: If thats what he wants that's what he will get!!

Disha: What???

Dk: Yes.. you heard me right!! The old Dk Saigal will come back!! And we will fight so much that he wont even know whats going on!!!!!!!!!!!!! but you better let everyone know or else they will be scared!!!!!

Dk and Disha shakes hands!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳


i will cont tonight..!!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
wow this is real kool just tooo good i hope that really happened when the d's reunite
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Posted: 20 years ago
Brilliant continuation...cant wait 4 more!! Dk aur Disha ki jodi...WAH!!
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Part 53

Dk and Disha explain everything to everyone and they all decide to go with it!!!

Jay is coming so everyone is acting normal again!!

Dk: Jay.. i was thinking lets go out today!! Like a club or something!

Jay: really??? Sure why not!!!

Disha: Club?? Oh no your not!!

Dk: Stop telling me what to do!!

Disha: (Shocked) I have that right in case you forgot!!

Sum: Bahu.. let me son do what ever he pleases.... you are too controlling

Jay is smiling at Disha.. thinking he is winning!!

Disha: Fine do what ever you want!!!!

Dk: Ok then!!

Later that night:

Dk and Jay are just drinking..... Dk really isnt.... everytimes Jay turns in face he throws his drink on the floor and quickly drinks from an empty glass... Jay is thinking that he's drinking! (wat a fool)

Dk: YOu know i want to thank you for making me realize what i was missing in my life all these years!!

Jay: You know brother... i told Disha off about that!!

Dk is shocked.. jay tells him everthing wat he told Dk... and Dk is both angry and hurt!!!

They drink and drink and its 3:00 a.m. Disha is really really worried..... She sits in the living room and both Jay and Dk walk in

Dk: What are you still doing up?

Disha: Dk.. do you realize what time it is?

Dk: Um... 3!! I know who cares.. We had a good time today

Jay: Yea... let us have fun!!

Dk: Hey man good night.... Dk goes into his room and is peeping out!!

Jay: I told you... old DK is back! He drank about 10-15 glasses of whiskey!!!!! And he's not going to listen to you anymore!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: (looks hurt)

Jay: I won Disha.. i have finally won!!! Be a little more bossy and you will be out of this house forever!!!!!!!!!!!!

DIsha walks off goes into her room shuts the door and Dk is in the bathroom

Disha is standing there and Dk comes behind and hugs her!!

Dk: I missed you Disha!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: 10-15 glasses huh?

Dk: Yup!!

Disha: How did you pull it off???

Dk: Easy... everytime he looked away i threw it on the floor!!

Disha is smiling and so is Dk.... They both hug!!😳

Next Morning:

Disha is getting the kids ready for skool..... After Dhruv takes them as usual... Disha goes and sees that Neha is awake and she gives her a bath and feeds her....

Disha sees Jay is awake and goes to her room and leaves the door open on purpose

Disha: Dk.. get up!!! (yells) You have to go to work!!

Dk: 10 mins...

Disha: No now!!! (she whispers in his ear) Jay is coming!!

Dk: Look just leave me alone and let me sleep get out!!!

Disha: (Starts lecturing him)

Dk: Will you please be quiet!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Get up now!!

Disha starts taking the blanket when Dk smacks her on her hand....

Jay is watching this and is like... Disha.. you will not stay here for long!

After he leaves... She sees that he's in the bathroom gone to a take a shower


Dk: Disha... i am so sorry!!!!!!!!😭

He takes her hands and starts rubbing them! He feels bad!!!!

Disha: Dont worry about it!! I will remember this one!!!

Dk: He kisses her on her hands!!! (Aww..😳)

Breakfast table:

Dk and Disha are at it again!!!!

Jay: Will you please shut up Disha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Leave Brother alone!!!

Disha: Excuse me!!

Dhruv (Senior): Yes you heard him... you have been controlling our lives ever since you came here!!!!

Sia: Bhabhi... just let us live in peace!!

Disha is sad (fakes it) and leaves.......

Jay: Why dont you just get rid of her????

Sum: We have tried but she doesnt...

Dk: Yea... I wanted to divorce her.. but her parents.... poor people.... they begged me to keep her here..... they paid me enough so i got stuck with her!!!!

Dk to himself: Disha... i love you i love you i love you i love you (100x to himself)😆

Sia is holding her laugh in.. so is s everyone else!!!!!

Disha listened to this and calls up Suhas and Vijendra and tells them everything!!!! Vijendra and Suhas are planning to come over there and join in....

What will they do????? oh man tune it 2nite!!!!!!!! its gonna be crazy!!!

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