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Posted: 20 years ago

lol

this is soo funny and exciting wounder wats next!!!

later

Goldi2

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Posted: 20 years ago

thak you very verty much

it was very good. lot of twists

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Posted: 20 years ago
wow this is just amazing plz do continue 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
oh wow i luv ur story... plz do continue soon!
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Part 54

Still eating @ the breakfast table

Jay: So why dont you just divorce her?

Dk: Well i feel sorry for her!! I have been use to having her around so.. heh why not?

Everyone is like angry inside.....

Everyone is sitting after breakfast and Suhas and Vijendra come...

Everyone is shocked...... Sum looks towards Disha... and gives her a dont worry look and she understands.. everyone else looks at her too and they get the idea

Suhas: How are you my son in law??? (SOn in law😆)

Dk: I am fine!!

Dk gives a oh brother look

Jay: Hi.. I am Dk's brother... Well cousin brother

Suhas: (Gives him the evil eye) Hi..

Disha: Aai how are you?

Suhas: I am fine!!

They talk and talk and the way they are talking Jay is like what the heck are these people!!!

Vijendra: So Disha.. how have you been? Its been a while since you have come over!!

Disha: I am good.. i have been busy with things!!

Dk: Busy with what???

DIsha: What do you think??

Dk: Dont give me an attitude!

Suhas: Will both of you please stop it i am getting a headache..

Disha: Tell your son-in-law he started it!

Suhas: Disha!!!!!!!!

Jay: Disha.. leave us alone.. even your parents are fed up with you!!!!!!!

This makes V and Suhas mad they want to tell him off but cant!!!😡

Disha: DOnt but in!

Suhas: Hey listen to him he's right!!!!

V: What???

Suhas: Yes.. you heard me right!

Sum and Sia are so eager to let their laugh out.... but cant😆

Jay: (Himself) This whole family is crazy!!!!

Disha: Stop fighting you too!!

Dk: Hey..what did i say.. i am sick and tired of you talking when other people are talking!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: What... dont start with me!!

Dk: You dont start with me either!!!!!

Disha: You know Aai.. i think i should come w/ you for a couple of days and get out of this mad house

Sum: Mad house???? You're the one that causes it!!!

Suhas: Um.. no we are remodeling so you cant

Disha: Remodeling???

Suhas: Yeah.. isnt that right Vijendra??

Vijendra: Oh yes.. thats right!!

Jay figures that no one likes Disha... not even her own parents

They talk and fight talk and fight and Finally S and V leave and they give money in front of Jay and he knows that she's gonna have to stay longer cuz they dont want her

Everyone goes back and do their normal stuff

Jay: Well well Disha.. it seems like no one wants you to live with them!! I dont blame them.....

Disha: They all love me!

Jay: Who are you kidding?

Disha just goes into her room...

Jay: Brother... could'nt you find anyone better???

Disha listens

Dk: Apparently not!!

Jay: Man.. we are gonna have to do something about her!!

Dk: But what??

Jay thinks!!

Dk goes into the room and they both stare into each others eyes!!

Dk cant take it anymore and hugs her

Disha: Whats this for?

Dk: Oh my god.. i cant do this.... do you know i cant be mean to you it kills me!!!!

Disha: Dont worry i was listening to everything!

Dk: DIsha.. i love you... not once.. not twice but 100x!!!!!!!! i will love til the very end!!!

Disha: I love you too!😳

Couple of days later:

Drama is still going on!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its going crazy... Jay talks to Dk.. about just starting a fight and then making her get out of the house

Dk and DIsha are fighting like crazy and Khushi and Dhruv are watching and are taking it seriously and are crying in the corner......... no one sees them!

Dk: DIsha... how many times do i have to tell you stop interferring in my life!!! I cant take it anymore!

Disha; I am your wife.. i have that right!!

Dk: You know what i cant take it anymore... Just leave get out of here!

Disha: What you cant kick me out!

Sum: Yes he can

Sia: He's your husband.. he could do what ever he wants

Everyone agrees

Disha starts fake crying

Dk: You know what Disha.. i have tried really hard to keep you here.. but you are driving me crazy......

Grabs her by the hand... (and you know how Sum took Disha.. out of the house like that)

Jay is happy and is jumping Khushi and Dhruv (junior) See this and stands in front of them

Jay: Where did these kids come from? (Himself)

K: Daddy... mommy cant leave this house!!

D: Yea.....

Jay: Takes them by the hands..... come on... Mommy will be fine where ever she is!

K: Let me go!!!!!!!! (she is screaming)

Dk and Disha are shocked.....

Jay: Will you stop it? (yells)😡

Everyone doesnt know what to do....

Khushi: Starts crying and throwing tantrums and Dk is like... oh man...this is bad

Jay: Please stop crying

K: I want my mommy and daddy!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jay: Your mommy has left for good!! okay

K: No..... (yells so loud.. Jay cant believe it)

khushi gets so mad and she smacks Jay and Jay gets furious.... and is about to slap Khushi but Dk stops him................

Dk has a angry look to his face!!!!!!!!!

Dk slaps Jay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Jay: what was that for?????

Dk: If anyone ever yells or raises their hands on them i will not tolerate that what so ever!!

Jay: You need to raise your kids properly!! They need to learn to respect their elders!

Dk: (talking to khushi) Dont worry Khushi.. mommy is not leaving this house... but it is your uncle that is leaving!!!!!!!! Disha!!!!!!!!

Disha enters in!!

Jay: What is this??

Dk: What did you tell my wife??? That you will bring the old Dk back.. Well he is dead!!!!!! Yes i am a changed person and i will not go back into my old ways! All of this that was going on... was a fake!!!!

Disha: Yes.. Dk found out about what you told me so we decided to play a little game with you!

Dk: Disha.. does not control me!! We have had a very good relationship for the past 7 years!!!! and i love her with all my heart and soul!! we would've kept on goin making you look like an idiot but when you mess with my daughter you are crossing all the limits.. now i want you to pack up your things and go home...... i dont want people like you in my house who only know how to break relations!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Jay is angry and mad!😡 He leaves and starts packing his stuff!!!!!!!!

Khushi: Daddy you guys were pretending??

Dk: Yes we were!!

Khushi: I dont like this.. That wasnt nice what you did to Momma...

Dk: I know it wasnt.. but i am not letting go of you momma so easily

Dk looks at her and 😉😉 and she 😳

Khushi: Good!!!!!!!!!! (hugs Dk)

Sum: I am glad this is over!!!!!!!

Sia; Me too!!!

DHruv: it was worth it though... but you guys were so funny!!!!!

Everyone laughs 😆

Next Morning:

Jay leaves on the next flight back home and that's the last time they will ever see him again!!!!

Dk and Disha

Disha: It was fun fighting with you!!!!!

Dk: Why????? 😕

Disha: Its funny watching you explode.. because you cant get mad at me!!!

Dk: Disha.... if i ever get mad at you... I would hate myself!

Disha: (Gives him a tight hug)

Dk: I cant live w/o you Disha....

Disha: I cant live w/o you!!!!

Dk: Why dont we go on a vacation for a couple of days just you and me!!!!!

Disha: Dk???? Kids......

Dk: Everyone's here.. please just for 2-3 days!

Disha: No.. whos going to take care of Neha.? and also taking care of Rohit also... no...

Sia is listening to all of this from outside

Dk: Please Disha... i am only asking you for 2-3 days!!!!

Sia: Bhabhi.... (Pretends like she's miles away)

Disha: Yes Sia.....

Sia: Bhabhi.. OH sorry i hope i didnt disturb you!

Disha: No... you didnt.. tell me what happened?

Sia: Bhabhi.. i was listening from outside.. and i think you should go.. after everything thats been going on.. you two need to take a break!

Disha: Sia.. no.. you cant take care of everything by yourself!!

Sia: But i have mummyji and Mom... everything will be fine.. plus i was talking to them about long back and they agreed!!!

Disha: I dont know!! i will have to think about it!

Sia: Okay.. but i wouldnt miss this if i were you!

Sia leaves

Dk hugs her from behind...

Dk: Say yes please

Disha: No..

Dk: Fine.. until you give me a yes i am not going to leave you!!!!!

Disha: You will have to!

Dk: No i am not!!

Disha: Okay.. Mummyji..........................

Dk: Its not going to work!!!!!!

Sum: Yes Bahu...

Dk: Ma... shes just pretending

Disha: Mummyji.. tell him to let go!!! please!!

Dk: Ma.. i asked her to go out with me for 2-3 days.. and shes saying no...

Sum: Why??? I think you should go!!!

Dk: See Ma says yes.. Now please say yes!!

Dk signals Sum to step out which she does...

Disha: Dk..

Dk: PLease

Disha: OKay then! We'll go!

Dk: Alright then!!

Disha: Now will you let go..

Dk: No.. i kinda like it!!

Disha: Dk...........

He lets go of her!! She starts packing.. not like there's much to pack..........!!! and get ready for the trip...

Dk: Okay.. look i talked to everyone and we will be gone for 6 days...

Disha: 6 days? No thats too long!

Dk: Sorry Disha... i cant take it back

Disha: 6 days being away from home

Dk: Disha... we have got a chance... we wont get a chance like this!!!

Disha agrees.........

Disha: where are we going?

Dk: SOmewhere relaxing!

Disha: Tell me

Dk: Its a surprise

Dk blindfolds Disha... and starts walking towards their destination.. Disha has no clue of where they are going!! Dk takes Disha inside a room....

He takes off the blindfold..

Disha: Room??? where are we?

Dk points at the window and Disha looks and sees water............

Disha: We are on a ship!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Yes Disha... 6 days on a cruize!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Disha is all exited and she cant believe it! and is smiling and like jumping up for joy!

Dk: You like it?

Disha: Like it??? i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She hugs him really tight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I will cont tomorrow ... Their little honeymoon!!!!!!!

Night night!!!!!!


stonex thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago

Thank you again

its very nice.

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Posted: 20 years ago
OMG wow....it was sooooo funny!! I loved it when they were fighting..WOW!!! Can't wait for the honeymoon...ooooo im so excited!!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
It waz funny of how they fought 😆 Can't wait 4 the honeymoon!!!!!!!😳
goldi2 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago

lol

thats was funny and qutEE!!!!!!!

owujnder wats next during there 6 days!!!

later

Goldi2

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Posted: 20 years ago
👏yes it was funny😆, plzzzz cont it is realy great story👏👏👏....plz write some more romantic scenes😳

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