Dil Dosti Dance SS... Yaadein pt9-pg18(ON HOLD) - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Nilesh jealous of Ishaan😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update varshini.
continue soon.

more swaron scenes plzzz?
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
taani and kriya's planned work
poor nilesh
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi guys 😊😊😊 I know i haven't updated this ss for long...sorry all beacuse of my work and slow internet...and ya guys Swaron story will be there after this part...this whole part is mostly about Nilesh and Simmi ...and i would like to dedicate it to Anmol...( my little brother...who just keeps reminding me update ...you really dunno dear it gives me lot of inspiration when you have someone who is ready to read your story...and thank you all who have read,,,liked and commented...it means a lot to me...i hope you guys will like the chapter and pls give feed back to me😊😊😊


PART -9

Rey went to Nilesh...

Rey : Dude are u ok

Nilesh : ya...ya im fine

Rey : no ur not baat kya hai

Nilesh : how can she do this to me Rey

Rey : kaun Simmi what did she do ??

Nilesh : what ...how can she think of marrying some one else

Rey : why not Nilesh ...it not like u guys were in any relationship right,..and its not like u love her ...u were just good friends .

Nilesh : Rey y don't u understand man..

Rey : kya samju Nilesh...as far as i know u always ran away from the fact that there was more than friendship between u guys ...it was Simmi who held on to u all this while...ab jab tujhe chod ke jaa rahi hai...y ru feeling so bad...

Nilesh was dumb stuck...coz he had no answer for what he did...he always took simmifor granted..he never expressed toher wht he felt thinking that she will be there with him by default...he understood in this week that he felt so incomplete without her...

Rey : Nilesh u never know the value of a person untill they go far away from u...

Nilesh hugged rey ad cried ...

Nilesh: Mein kya karu Rey...

Rey : i guess uknow what todo...tell her...how much u love her;;;;

Nilesh : agar woh nahi maani tho...what if she doesn't love me anymore...

Rey : But that shouldn't stop u from expressing u feelings right...

Nilesh : Ya...i will gotell her...

Rey : tho khade kyu ho...

Nilesh : haa/...bye bro

Nilesh called Simmi

Simmi : Nilesh ...kya hua

Nilesh : kaha ho tum..

Simmi : Kyun kya hua...iam in a club ..(XYZ)..

Nilesh : Woh i need to talk to u ... im coming there...

Simmi : Nhai nilesh...nilesh wait

Ishaan : all fine...

Simmi: ya its just my .friend...he wanted to catch up...

Ishaan : So

Simmi : So...

Ishaan : decide kiya...what do u think abt me

Simmi : Ishaan its too early ...and i dunno i just don't want to lie...the guy who called me before... im in love with him but he never reciprocated to my feelings...i like u company...u make me feel good/...but i don't want to rush things and i want to analyse things what if im doing only because i seek some comfort...i don't want to do that to u...so give me some time

Ishaan: ok...thats too deep...but i like ur honesty simmi...no problem...but alteast we can be friends right...

Simmi : i alredy thought we are friends.

Ishaan : oh sorry my fault...

Slow dance was going on...

Ishaan : u wanna dance

Simmi : sure...
They were smiling and dancing

By the time nilesh went he saw them dancing...and smiling with each other...it boiled his blood..he calmed himself down as he knew it was his own fault...hecalled Simmi again...She has picked the call

Simmi : Ha nilesh

Nilesh : i want to talk to u...

Simmi: Nilesh...im with a friend...

Nilesh : I need to talk to u..Simmi..

Simmi : Nilesh itna urgent kya hai...

Nilesh couldn't take it anymore and he went and stood infront of Simmi and Ishaan..

Nilesh : hi simmi

Simmi: Hi nilesh ...Ishaan this is Nilesh...nilesh this is Ishaan

Nilesh : Hi Ishaan...(he felt like killing him...) im Simmi's besttt friend...

Ishaan : ok...im simmi's good friend then,...

Nilesh : Simmi can i have a minute...

Simmi : Nilesh woh...

Ishaan : Hey Sims its ok...anyway we were about to leave...u have a talk and i'll wait for u...then i'll drop u home...

Nilesh : Ishaan i think it will take time...i will drop he home don't worry...

Ishaan: are u sure...

Simmi : ya ishaan

Ishaan : ok...then see u later sims bye good night he hugged ger and went

Simmi : kya hai nilesh...it was rude on him to leave him like that...

By this time Nilesh's blood boiled and he got out of control

Nilesh : Wow Simmi great when did he meet u a week before aur itna concern...great...jao go i think it was my fault thinking that u will be with me...handsome and better and ich guy jo hai...obviously ...

Simmi : Nilesh shut up...

Nilesh : y simmi thats wht ur doing na... i thought that u ae a commited girl...but tum bhi...jaha better option dekha waha chala...

Simmi just slapped nilesh hard on his face...

Simmi : How dare u...im ashamed of my self for loving u Nilesh...ya u what do u want me admit...that i have loved u right...ya i did and i was always sure about my feelings unlike u...and ya commitment according to u just coming behind losing my self respect all the time like a bitch...then please go get a life... ya i liked ishaan...whats wrong with that...its my life...u never reciprocated to my feelings so u have no right to tell me what i have to do with my life... i hate u just go to hell

And simmi ran from there...

Senses came back to Nilesh...he jsut slapped himself for tellingall those things to Simmi...he neve meant a word in it...its just that he became mad on seeing her with someone else...he ran behind her..

Simmi ran out of the club and she kept running untill she couldn't take it anymore...she sat on the road and started crying...out of all the people Nilesh calling her cheap lady made her feel like killing her self...

Meanwhile Nilesh cam running behind he searching for he...he got relief after seeing her...he came and kneeled down next to her and saw her cying made him fell like killing himself...

Simmi has sensed someone next to her She saw Nilesh and it hut he more and more...she stood up to go from there Nilesh held he hand

Simmi : Leave me nilesh

Nilesh : ek baa suno...

Simmi : aur kya sunana hai tumhe...iam a disgusting ugly short...ya cheap...bitch..ya

Nilesh came and kissed her...Simmi was surprised and dint react in the first...but nilesh waited for her to respond...she responed venting all he frustration...and nilesh calming her down...After a while they broke ...And Simmi came into senses...

Simmi : How dare u...just leave me...i don't need u o ur sympathy...

Nilesh :But i need u Simmi...more than anything else in the world... everything in my life is incomplete without u Simmi... jab se tum mujse dur chaligayi kuch teek nahi hai...kuch bhi nahi...im incomplete without u ...im sorry simmi im sorry everything...but i have always loved u... seeing u wth someone else killed me...i have lost my control i dint know guuse mein maine im really sorry...disgusting tum nahi mein hu...punish me ...hit me...but don't leave me...i love u simmi...i'll die with out u... he had tears inhis eyes

Simmi was dumb stuck she has never expected this from him...she had lost all her hopes...she was too numb to react...

Nilesh : Simmi please baby kuch tho bolo...u right chahe lo aur chata maro...but speak na...he took her hand and stated slapping himself...

Simmi came back to her senses...

Simmi : oh god yeh sach mein ho raha hai... she smiled to her self...did he just say i love uu to me;;;;

She stopped him from slapping himself and he went and hugged him...tight...

Simmi : i love u nilesh...i love u

Nilesh was taken back by her reaction...he just lifted her and twiled her around...and kept her down...

Nilesh : i love u ...and i m sorry...

Simmi : love u too...

They both couldn't register the fact that they have just confessed their feelings they sat on the road like that for long...

After a long period of silence they looked at each other and laughed their hearts out...

Simmi : u know i always wanted this to happen but after confession its wierd

Nilesh : ya it is... but thank u simmi

Simmi: kyun...

Nilesh : for bearing with me...

Simmi : pleasure is all mine

Again they laughed...They got up and stated walking...hand in hand...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Nilesh n simmi r my second fav couple in d3 n I really want their story to start in the show.Coming to update.I loved it.Confession part was really nicee..:)
I m happy that this whole update belongs to nimmi.
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
atleast here nilesh n simmi lovestory start..
n finally they are one now..
really loved the confession❤️..
it was so cute..
update soon..
n thanks for the pm :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
The story is moving soo perfectly 👏
all the parts are beautifully penned dwn diii... ⭐️
u r a suprb writer 😳
and as i hav alrdy told u..bt wld luv to mention it here once again..that it is because of this ss that i ws able to connect to nimmi's luks in ystrdyz epi...so thnq fr tht.. 😳
update asap!!!
Thnx fr d pm..
Edited by sneha_sharon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was super cute
reading nimmi is also fun
thanks for the pm
thanks for the update
do update soon
plz swaron in the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Nilesh realised his mistake with Simmi nd want to confessed her
In cluc they went through big fight bt finally he confessed his feeling.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
finally nilesh confessed his feelings...
super cute Nimmi confession...

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