Dil Dosti Dance SS... Yaadein pt9-pg18(ON HOLD) - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Awesome update.
waiting for swaron meeting.
pls,update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

hi guys thanks for the response i got 😊😊 Im not able to thank everyone post by post but thank u so much😊😊 Here is the next part 😊 hope you guys will love it 😊😊 This part is and next part is about Simmi and Nilesh so Swaron,Kriyansh and Tarrey,fans please dont get angry 😊😊 i will post their parts soon😊😊😊


PART -8

Kriya was waiting for Taani after her college

Kriya : Hey taani...

Taani : Hi kriya...

Kriya : So tumne kuch socha hai??

Taani : ha socha tho hai.par kaha se start kare samajh mein nahi aa raha hai...

Kriya : hmm neha aur Vicky ka hum kuch nahi kar sakte abhi...

Taani : hmmm

Kriya : bacha nilesh simmi and amar aur rinni... nilesh simmi ka tho mujhe itna patha nahi par amar rinni ko bahut pyar kartha tha

Taani : kartha tha nahi abhi bhi kartha hai meine bola na...rinni bhi bahut pyar karti hai usse,...par pata nahi he never opens up

Kriya : hmm i think mujhe pata hai kya he thinks he is not worthy of rinni...tab se aisa hi tha

Taani : mujhe bhi yehi lagta hai...

Kriya : Simmi aur Nilesh ka

Taani : ha uske bare mein pocho hi mat...simmi ke liye bahutbura lagta hai mujhe... Simmi all these years she is just waiting for him to show some signs of improvement in their relation ship...but nilesh he always takes simmi for granted...i know bhi careerka pressure hai but it doesn't mean ki he cant express his feelings to her

Kriya : hmmm problem tho hai hi...butiska solution bhi simple hai...

Taani : woh kaise...

Kriya : nothing we should somehow make nilesh realise simmi's importance in his life...

Taani : aur woh tabhi hoga jab Simmi usse door jayegi...

Kriya : Bang on...isme jealousy ka tadka bhi dal diya tho...

Taani : hmmm

They gave a high fi to ea

Kriya : What an idea universe ji

Taani : thank u Krishna ji...

Theylooked at each other...and laughed ot loud

Kriya : i think we should wait for create such a situation jaha nilesh ko lage simmi usse chodke jaa rahi hai

Taani : Actually create karne ki zaroorat nahi hai...ek situation hai

Kriya : kya

Taani : jab main Simmi se mili last week she was tensed ki herparents wanted her to see a guy...

Kriya : wow yaar yeh tho sone pe suhaga hai...Chalo ab humhe kuch aisa karna hoga jaha simmi wo ladke ke pass jaaye..

Taani : ha aur aise mein we have to make nilesh jealous...

So in next two days they were ready with the plan...

Taani went to see D3 gang who were resting after choreographing a routine

Taani : Hey guys J

Nilesh , Bharat : Hey Taani

Simmi, Rinni : Hey Taani

Rey came nad hugged her...

Rey : Tum yaha iss waqt ??

Taani : kyun nahi aa sakti mein

Rey : aisa nahi

Taani : bas tum logo se milne ka man kiya tho aa gayi

Simmi : acha kiya so hows life babes

Taani : good wahi books assignments u should tell whats new

Simmi : whats new ?? nothing

Just then simmi got a mesaage and she looked irritated

Taani : kya hua tum itne upset ??

Simmi : kuch nahi babes

Rinni : whats up simmi u look dull

Simmi : arre guys kuch nahi hai...im little tired and she went to change

Taani : Simmi woh kya hai na i dint get my car and rey is busy kya tum mujhe drop karogi

Simmi : sure babes...

They have entered the car and Simmi kept getting messages and Simmi became more irritated...

Taani : Simmi car rooko

Simmi : kya hua...

Taani : We are goingin wrong way

Simmi : kya...oh im so sorry ...pata nahi...

Taani : ek karte hai hmm... come out

Simmi : arrey taani

Taani : yaha baito

Simmi : ya foot path pe...

Taani : baito na.

Simmi : ok

Taani : baat kya hai ??

Simmi : My mom dad are irritating...me..mummy papa ne bola ek baar milo...but im not interested y don't they understand...

Taani : par kab tak simmi

Simmi : what do u mean

Taani; how many more yrs u will wait for nilesh.aur mana mat karna...

Simmi : babes i love him its not easy to get over these things

Taani :par impossible nahi hai na... dekho simmi even i was in ur situation but my case was different me and rey were together and in ur case u cant wait all life,,,,

Simmi : par phir bhi..nilesh i dunno y he has kept me hanging in between his words speak something else and his actions something else im just confused

Taani : is liye bol rahi hu...usse pakad ke mat raho lethim go ifwasreally urs he will come back yo u...if he doesn't he was never urs... u need to do this for urself ad for him...

Simmi : ur right

Taani : aand about the ladka...ek baar mil lo...its not like ur getting married to him now na...whats wrong in meeting

Simmi : hmmm Thanks babe...tumhe nahi pata how good im feeling now...

Taani : hmm ab tho correct raste par chalogi na..

Simmi : shup up late ho gaya chalo

Taani : chalo

In next few days kriya and taani's plan worked...

Simmi who used to make sure nilesh ate and who used to perster him for 100 things in a day was talking with him as i he was some normal friend...no pestering during lunch...

Nilesh : Simmi ne mujhe lunch keliye nahi bulaya...busy hogi...

Just then he saw her talking on phone smiling or may be blushing

Nilesh : Simmi kisse baat karrahi hai...

Just then Simmi came...

Simmi : hey guys..

Rey , Nilesh ,Rinni, Bharat : ha

Simmi : I will not bevailable in evenings this week...woh kuch kaam hai...

Rey : ya cool ...

Nilesh : pura week...kya kaam

Simmi : ha kuch kaam hai..

And again she went on talking on phone...

It was same the next day and the next day also...

Nilesh couldn't concentrate on his work... nor could he sleep properly...he was habituated simmi's attention and care...but y all of a sudden this change and he could not understand the change coming in him...

Nilesh : kya hogaya mujhe Simmi must be busy..bas

After some days when taani came to dance studio again...

Taani could notice the restleness Nilesh was facing hw was staring at Simmi now and then but Simmi has kept everything very casual...so that he couldn't even complain...

so Taani has decided to put her secondplan in action...

She went to simmi...

Taani : So simmi hows life

Simmi: much better babes...

Taani : bola na...acha yeh batao mili usse...how is he (making sure that Nilesh was around )

Simmi : hmm mili...he is ishaan ..actually im meeting him everyday...he is a gentleman...pata nahi but in these three days i liked him...

Taani : Wow thats great yaar... picture hai kya dikaho...

Simmi : ya we kind of took one together...

Taani :send me the pic...

Simmi : kyun

Taani : arre yaar bas aise hi...OMG he is so handsome yaar...u both look so good to gether...

From behind Taani made sure Nilesh was listening to everything...

Nilesh was boiling with anger and what not emotions...just then simmi got a call from Ishaan

Simmi : hi Ish... acha just shut up

She went on talking and laughing...and happily chatting...

Meanwhile Nilesh just couldn't understand what was happening to him...all he wanted to do was smash that Ishaan...whoever and... he himself was not understanding what is happening...he dint even know when tears came ...when he felt like...wy he felt like this...

Just then Taani came with Rey and she was discussing something with Rey

Taani : Rey aap ne dekha... he is Ishaan...he is been choosen by simmi's parents for her...dekhiye they look made for each other na

Rey :What do u mean...ladkha ...Simmi is getting married

Taani : Married nahi baba...but they just wanted to her to see him...agar baat bani tho u know...

Rey : Par ...he looked at Nilesh who was already going through lot of emotions

Taani : aur pata hai...Simmi met him...thats y she is not available in evenings... she told me he is a gentle man and he was nice

Rey : Woh thats thats nice...he was noticing signalling taani to stop...

Taan:i : kya hua...

Rey : Taani i guess i have some work...if u don't mind

Taani : koi baat nahi mein khud chali jaavongi...

Rey : bye tc

Taani : bye

Taani : teer correct nishane pe laga...

Nilesh on the other hand

the idea of simmi being some one else's killed him ...simmi loving ...eating ...sleeping...someone else...he couldn't take it...

She called Kriya

Kriya : Ha taani bolo

Taani : Hamara part tho hogaya...Nilesh is ver disturbed...

Kriya : Thats great yaar

Taani : Ab sab Krishna ji par hai...

Kriya : Ha... chalo is weeken milte hai

Taani : Ha teekhe bye :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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reallyy veryu nic update.

i really loved it...

krita plan works wao just amazing ...

now nilesh relaise his love for simmi


p.s:- plzz swaron ka thoda passionta sa diknana
Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
nice update..
loved it..
taani n kriya's plan is working slowlly..
aww nilesh is restless just by the thought of simmi being with someone else😳
now he will surely realize simmi importance..
update soon..
n thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
sorry double post😳
Edited by anushka1129 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Very nice update! Hopefully nilesh accepts his feelings and proposes to simi soon! Please update soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
wow!!!!!!!!! there first target went on right track... loved it...
the way taani and kriya work together... in which simmi and nilesh
part of plan worked... it get interest to read more...
do continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Awesome update
Luvd it...
Amazingly written
Nd finally kria nd taani plan is working..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
nice
loved to see that kriya and taani's plan is working
and now nilesh is getting jealous and realized simmi's importance
I know its a d3 ff but stilll want to see some taarey scene
its a request only

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
jealousy working for simmi

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