Dil Dosti Dance SS... Yaadein pt9-pg18(ON HOLD)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys this is varshini... New to Dil dosti Dance forum...i was active in MJHT forum before and sorry for my previous friends as i got busy and stopped coming to IF... I love this show and i just couldnt stop myself from writing this SS...its about whole Gang...i hope you guys will like it 😊 Pls feel free to comment and criticize 😊 Happy Belated Valentines DAy to u all 😊



Story from 4 years ( from now on the show) and i will keep refering to past in between and iam not too confident in hindi so pls forgive and correct me if iam wrong and i feel my titlr is not so apt...pls help me to choose better one 😊



~~~~~Yaadein~~~~
Part -1

June 21st 2016, Newzeland

A girl standing in the front of the the window facing sea side starting at the calm sea trying to calm the waves of emotions running through her... she had thought that walking away will help...day by day its giving her more and more pain... after the bond she has developed with everyone of them... it is her 24th birthday and she is all alone ...alone by choice... may this the only thing she deserves in her life...LONLINESS Her thoughts were distracted by a call

Girl : Hello dad

Voice: Hai Sharon...Happy Birthday My Darling ...Kaisi ho

Sharon : Thank You Papa, Iam good aur aap?

GRP: am good too...beta i have got calls from your friends...i mean kab tak beta ye sab...they really love you

Sharon: Dad please please don't reveal them where i please...

GRP: Sharon i dunno ki tum kya soch ke ye sab kar rahi ho but beta trust me you should never leave your true friends...

Sharon : i know dad but please don't force me please

GRP: ok beta your wish... you know from past 4 years...there has been only two people who are constantly trying to know about your where abouts ...ek Rey aur doosara

Sharon: Swayam...( She went into a trance...)

After long silence

GRP : Beta are you there ?

Sharon : Ha dad sorry ...dad i got to go bye dad take care

GRP : Take care beta ...love you

Sharon : Love you dad

Tears she was holding up till now came out bursting... How much she tried not to think of him something or the other binds her thoughts with him...everything came to her mind...his love his passion...dancing with him ...his smile...her hurting him intentionally.. him never letting her go... she had to leave him she doesn't deserve him...

Sharon : I hope everything was normal... Iam sorry swayam...I Love You...I love so much that i had to leave you ...I Love you...Love you...

I hope you guys like it will continue in some time 😊


Index

Part1-1

Part2-2

Part3-4

Part4-6

Part5-7

Part 6 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3441540/dil-dosti-dance-ss-yaadein-pt9-pg18-on-hold?pn=11�

Part-7 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3441540/dil-dosti-dance-ss-yaadein-pt9-pg18-on-hold?pn=13�


Part-8-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3441540/dil-dosti-dance-ss-yaadein-pt9-pg18-on-hold


part 9-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92449129


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jas_ArSha_MaNan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow its awesome
welcum to the d3 forum
i am jasleen
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i loved the ss
do pm me when u update it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to d3 forum...
U r going to have fun here..
Coming to ur story..
It is great start..
Sharon away frm family nd friends everyone trying to find her out..
Nd she still love swaym ..
Waitin for nxt part..
Pls pm me whn u update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it... continue soon wait...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please pm me wen u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome 2 D3 Forum...
Awesome Start...
Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the D3 forum dear :). Coming to your FF its really good. Sharon seems the main character,nice. Eager to read more about the whole gang :). Plz PM us when u update, busy with exams so the commnts can't be regular though :|.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start!!! N welcome to d D3 forum!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc plz update soon n dear plz pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome starting
dea pls update it soon

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