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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: aishu3003

niceee update😃

loved ittt😊




thanks 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

Nice update!:)
Beginning is awesome!!:)




thanx 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sweet_sanju

Nice update
Each one described beautifully
loved it
continue soon
thnx for d pm



thanx 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
har ek frns kamina hota haiii
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
loved d update..
nice start...
Waiting for d next part..
loved d description of sharon's friends..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
hmmm.. intresting prolouge...
loved it sweetu ...
rinni ... no imp ...y😭😭
she's too cute yaar...

nywys ... archie alone in girls grup😆😆
update soon...
n thoda jldi ...
itne saare works likhti h ...😆😆😆
toh update aur jldi dede meri maa😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
interesting update
cont soon
cant wait to read ahead
thanka for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
prolouge was posted on feb 22, and chap one in apirl...m really sorry for that...hope you still remember this ff!!

i wont do any bak-bak...

scroll down for update! 😳

sharon's pov

Chap one

(flashback)

As the school left

I walked home alone at 11:00 am on Saturday'i was feeling so awkward' I was in std 9th'.yet I had no friends ' who can walk with me to home' I was divested'not because I had to go home alone'.because my first paper went horrible'. Hindi'I was horrible at it..and I was upset because I knew if I said truth to my mom 'her taunts and lectures will start again' it was not that I din wanted to study'.it was just that'facebook was disturbing'. That was a different thing that I had been to facebook since I was in 7th std'..but during exams facebook used to be my lover'.because it never asked me to study!

I reached home, mom was not there! I was so happy! Mom was a school teacher' HINDI teacher' dadi was busy cooking'. Motiben

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Priya aka "MOTIBEN" : she is two years elder to me yet I am not allowed to call her by name'she is bit fat'tall'she was a throwball player in her school'. Currently she is in fyjc(11th) '.she has taken commerce'. And is in collg called " st.tresa" '. She is a friend to me 'rather than sister!

Kripa di : she is twelve years elder to me'currently she is married'. We have loads of differences, only because of age gap ! or else we love each other like hell ! she too is fat '.

And so am I !

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She was busy with her cell phone'. Dad was watching some old india vs sri lanka match and I was not even welcomed' dad just asked how was my paper 'and again busy seeing the match'. I went in the bedroom'not mine'.we used to live in one bedroom hall kitchen' the building was extaclly opposite to a school "mother mary high school" it had gujarati + English medium'my mom taught hindi to std 10th and 9th + gujarati too'.

We had only one reason to stay in this building ..mom'. as her age grew .her legs did not support the work load she was taking'. Yaa I and my parent we had age diff of 38 years !! so there was a huge gap in our thinking'.

I loved shorts my dad did not !

I loved messy house my mom did not !

I don't like to attain family function mom dad do !

I and my sis we did not mind being fat mom did !

So on and so forth '

The only reason I did like being fat was AMIT he was my jiju ! we never had that jija ' saali relation but I and pranali we always droll over him

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Amit jiju : he was a commerce student but he was interested in arts 'he has done Masters in Arts' he is a copywriter' he is cute..Handsome, tall, his vocabulary was fantastic '. So he had a big ego about it which always came in mine n his n priya's convo !

Kripa di was not less'she has done MA in literature + B.ed ..she is a school teacher at some icse school

Pranali : we had same tutor' she was a darling' she was my BFF ! I was with her since std 7th and this was the last year'. We were going into different class 'but we were not leaving each other's life !

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Yaa so the only reason I was not losing my weight was jiju' didi is more fat then me' shorter than me' darker than me' yet she had jiju'.i know so will I !

I dropped on my bed'and in no time I was asleep! The worst part was 'it had been days that I got no dream '.i know it meant nothing but I was not comfortable with it' all I could see is darkness'.was it indicating something'motiben was screaming on top of her voice'..i was soo uncomfortable'I wanted to sleep and she wanted to have lunch with me' as soon as I heard dad's voice I got up ! I was soo close to him' but yet I fear his anger' I got up and had my lunch' then I went to sleep again'this time also I could see was darkness!

At 7 p.m. I got up' dad asked me to join him going to kripa di's place' she did not had her permanent house'she changed her house every11 months ! And this house was close to ours'we walked till there'there was nothing serious talk going on'dad and I hardly spoke'I just took his hand in mine..And walked'this is what I did always!

There was nothing to do at her place too' I led down on her bed'I was about to sleep 'but her continuous talks did not let me sleep'. She offered me some fruits '.but I said no! We soon left the house'on the way was a panipuriwala dad offered me '.i said yes'but then he said it was formality' I had severe pain in stomach from months so!

We reached home'.and mom was done with the food' motiben asked me to help getting the food out..So everyone can eat...As soon as I saw the food'I felt like pucking ! I rushed in the washroom...and this was the first vomit for the night' there was no chance I was having dinner, but I had a cup of milk'within half an hour all the milk came out'and so did the water'and so the pain started 'I rushed to my medicines as a druggist searches for drug ! I removed a pain killer and took it with a glass of water'.within next five minutes I had the third vomit and the medicine came out '.and the pain grew with time, a lot'. I did not tell mom 'we slept 'at 3 am the pain went unbearable'this was 6th or 7th vomit for the night'.I just sat there in the washroom in pain'

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I am done here'.

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Love tc

Yours shivi


Edited by sweety-reylover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Me first..😊
Update was jst awesome
Loved it..
Continue soon..:)
N thnx for d pm

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