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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am writing on swaron for the first time I wrote an os ..before, but this ff will be first and big try ever…I have a req….to all the fans… of swaron…please share the link of this ff as you can….as my buddy list is filled with KRites….

I want talk much….

Hope you like it…

Sharon's pov

Prologue

I was sitting in the canteen …bunking with the favorite bunch of people…whenever I bunk with them it , I have fun….but I donno what was wrong with everyone that day… sneha , Alisha ,vishakha, rinni , archie

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C.S :

Archie : Yes…archie was the only guy in my group …. He was cool…smart….and typical desi… English was something that he never wanted to use…thus he never learned… the best part of his nature was he used to be alone among all the girls yet he never complained

Alisha : she was big time b*tch….she was the one who was my friend when needed…and life maine jabhi koi spice na ho toh mere saath jagda karna chalu! I soo hated ….i had forgiven her for the past…but whenever the past came to me…I hated her…. But the next moment I had to be normal… soz she was the important part of group !

Vishaka: she was the one who was my bff ! I shared all my dark past with her…so did she…out of 31 days in a month… we fight for 5 days… 5days to say sorry…. And 20 days we cannot meet coz the distance between our house….and the remaining one day….is the best day….we spend the whole day with each other…happily !

Sneha : she was the best chik I have ever met…her specs gave her geeky look….but the advice she gave made her cool and mature… I do not talk to her much….but when I …we talk for hours….i could go at her place wheneva I want… nor she neither her mom had problems with me….rather she help me solve the probs … she was a darling!

Rinni : she was a pakku…chipku…insaan.. to be with her….was like khud ke pairo pe kuldhi marna… but then she was in my life… I donno why….but she was… she kept no importance… in anyone's life…mentioned above…yet she was a part of their life…only because she was a part of my life…

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Yea it was such a boring day…. We all were busy in our ownself…Alisha was temple running….archie was playing some stupid game… rinni was busy bbming her school friends…sneha was busy completing her project… and vishakha was online on facebook! I picked a book from library… 2states ! gosh I was reading chetan bhagat…+ I had earphones plugged in…the song shifted to pelha nasha…and here krish saw anaya ….at iim…. How awesome…. I was a huge fan of love stories…for me twilight was my temple jake and Edward were god!

How romantic ! The way krish saw Anaya ….ekdum yashraj types….pelhe sif aankeh dekhi…phir haath ki chudiya khank ne lagi.. phir ladki ne piche mud ke dekha toh hawa chali…. Ladka ladki ke liye apna kuch kurbaan kar de…ladki badle maine smile karde….aaye haye! Ladka toh smile pe mar hi jaye!

I was so interested in reading the nove…that I din even come to know that someone is calling me…until vishaka… pushed me… I looked out of the book and vishaka was pointing towards my right…I looked in the same direction !

I pluged out my earphone…and stood up…and took out my hand for a formal hand shak….

I was in a big confussion…

Is it the reality for I am dreaming !

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Love…😳

shivani

Edited by sweety-reylover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was one awesome update. (:

I like it how you use all the real names of D3 star cast, but confusion is that will there be people name Swayam and Sharon too or not?

LOL, i like the description on Rini; poor she. 😆

Well, you are very much a nice writer and yeah more i liked the way you started this chapter. 😉

So update next time soon and bigger then this one. Will wait for your PM. :D
Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u r ff is amazing one concept is awesome .and cs is interesting . now i read u r update it was nice one please update ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

That was one awesome update. (:

I like it how you use all the real names of D3 star cast, but confusion is that will there be people name Swayam and Sharon too or not?

LOL, i like the description on Rini; poor she. 😆

Well, you are very much a nice writer and yeah more i liked the way you started this chapter. 😉

So update next time soon and bigger then this one. Will wait for your PM. :D



thanks 🤗

sharon and swayum hoge...

but sneha is not sharon... while shantanu will be swayum...

yaa 😆😆 got same charcter in my real life too :P

thanks again 😉

will update soon...but no promises for big updates 😛
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Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha

u r ff is amazing one concept is awesome .and cs is interesting . now i read u r update it was nice one please update ASAP



thanks 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resss Done




awosm tryyy Shivani 👏👏👏


lovely



n yes plz LIKE on fb frnds


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Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago
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Nice update loved it dear thaks 4 the pm...(L) :)

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