Mahnoor FF: New note [Page 70] - Page 8

Originally posted by: Aenna

Fabulousss update a new story i really luv it nd manvis name is manal in dis nice quite different nd d concept is mind blowinggg plzzz update asap..

and plzzz update TTOML also nd yeah 1 more thinggg u hv given me d links of humsufur but it was of part 11 nd i hv not read it from part 4 😕

nd i reallyyy want to read it sooo plzzz try to help me out wid dis...nd lastly thanxx for d pm nd a lovely update 😊

just unres above comment do check

hey one more thing the pm u send me about venice got deleted can u send it once again ...pls???

OMG My Name is Mahnoor, I feel So Famous and Loved Now 😆

Originally posted by: ElenaElenor

Hey sorry, I should have used translated- pishwas (anarkali suit) but it's a tad longer. It's an urdu word. We use this word than anarkali in our house so it got stuck with me.

I like to use different traits of personalities of Virman in every FF of mine. This story is nothing like EHMMB. If I just have one type of personality traits for Virat in every story- it will get boring. My characters are made to be hated and loved at times. I like to write about imperfect personalities on their journey of life.

Virat did not force himself on her nor was he planning to. He tried to make her comfortable but she was nervous and he got that and blamed it on her nerves for the first night. She resisted him at times but at times encouraged his actions (arching her back and leaning into him). She is confused about him as he is confused about her mixed signals but when she clearly asked him to back off he did.

Thanks for liking it! (:

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Really great update, nice to read something different and refreshing... Cant wait to read the next update and thanx for the pm :)

Interesting update... So manvi is manal, thats really different but i like it. Its great to have a new story from you again. Looking forward to reading this Venice and ttoml! Thank you for the pm

Nice update Elena
So finally Virat got what he wanted
I liked Manal... She is so simple and cute
It will be really interesting to see how this relationship progress
Thanks for the PM 😊

M a knew reader nd m going to comment on all ur works but first mahnoor than i'll read others as soon as i get lots and lots of time to read ur wonderful work nd will comment too inshallah
m too a fan of zindagi gulzar hay after humsafar nice to know u like it too
and soo happy after reading mahnoor my god how beautifully u adapted
d contrast u have shown between manal and virat is worth readingi like virats character i know in d upcoming chapters we r goin to know more about him but seriously i read it thrice nd i think m going to get addicted to it more than d show

and last saw ur index have commented also there but d blogs how can i get access to them
pls add me to ur pm list so that i can read ur work first nd d first one to comment 😊

keep it up dear good job ur work is worth to praise

Wonderful update...again i am sayin..i have not watched the pkay...this ss is actually making me to watch it...hopefully i catch up

I really liked the character of virat being a passionate lover...his anger, love everything is just how normal lover guy react ...i seriouse cant wait for the story to develop...

Love it