SS: Of Lemons & Limes #3 (Chapter 13-16)

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#931

oh lavanya took it all in such a good sport, nice i like her.

his reaction to lavanya revealing her discussion with khushi hayeee so deep

i hope he follows lavnaya's advice and dont screw up

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#932

That was very good! I am glad Lavanya backed off gracefully.. But was also smart to figure out khushi and Arnav!! Can't wait for the next part!

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#933

I liked the way how lavanya handled the situation.. and she's smart girl.. hope arnav will tell his feelings to her.. I just love this ff.. it give me so good feeling.. u made my day Honey!!

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Natalia

@Natalia

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Splendid...

I am soo looking forward to the first fadak padhta hain, nut this scene hear plays out like the farak padhta hai uttered by Arnav after he thought Khushi had met with an accident! The grabbing, and the intense rage and concern.. Don't know how you will play it out... I am sure your's would be MUCH better.

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Amazing update!

Break up hogaya!! Lavanya took it in such a mature way, just like in the show! So so glad that you love Lavanya and decided to leave her a positive character 😛

Arnav has finally realised that he 'likes' her..
But he needs to realise..soon..that he actually Loves her 😉

Maybe he really does need Lavanya's help..just kidding 😆

Poor Khushi.. She feels ASR meant nothing hogaya 🥺
Now eagerly awaiting the first "Faraq padta hai" 😳
But as usual it will confuse Khushi more than ever 😆

Loved Devi Maiyya as usual.. "Don't screw up," 🤣
Loved the update!

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#936

superb update! loved it

lavanya is someone nice who deserves to be loved and it was admirable how she accepted the break up and even advice arnav not to screw up!

loved seeing a nervous arnav who was freaking out because khushi was not replying her phone! this made me remember when khushi first saw shyam in rm and went to devi maiya's mandir and arnav was so worried and kept calling her

i thought they were going to meet in this update and im loving the precap! eagerly waiting for the farak padta!

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Nkayani

@Nkayani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#937

Loved it!!!! Cant wait for arnav to come to the temple

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#938

loved the update
and your devi maiya, shes awesome heree=]
And arnav better not screw up here=]
and lavanya was actually strong here

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#939

Finally Arnav jag Gaya...can stay away from his nimbu rani can he...! Loved the convo between Arnav and La...very mature and precise...DM is having a hard time echoing don't mess it up so Arnav is kept in a straight line...hahahah...!

waiting for the next part..

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#940

Loved this update... may be it came late, but you are forgiven for the length of it... Beautiful and very thoughtful writing there... Only few writers can bring in the vulnerability of Arnav out of ASR... You are one among them... I could feel Arnav's vulnerable nature in today's update... In his own way he wanted to assure that he was indeed not actually breaking La's heart and he just wanted to know if he had given her any false hopes anytime...

La --- should I even write how level headed she is... there was a tinge of pain... a tinge of jealousy... But a lot of sweetness in her character... "ASR Chamkili"... this just showed the girl has "Brains" when it comes to "LOVE" n feelings which our mighty "ASR" lacks a lot... ASR n Khushi please borrow some love brains from LA... Else I m sure these two will screw up high time...

n poor Khushi, still so Innocent that she feels she can be over with her feelings for arnav n start afresh.. cant she not realize she is way too far and there cannot be turning back now...

I will have to tell this out here... Thank you Barun Sobti for making Arnav Singh Raizada as an magnanimous character... I am telling it out here because I could clearly imagine the voice modulation n the tone in which "Sumjhi Tum" was told in IPKKND when I read it here... This man deserves all the credit for etching ASR in our minds the way it is... I am not sure if any other person would have even brought in 10% of the effect that our Sobti boy brought in for this character...

Now I cant wait too read the temple scene... added with we are going to have all time favorite line of ASR "Faraq Padtha Hi".. n ya I wanted to thank you for updating this first before "D for desire"... But now it is time to update "D for Desire"... hope we get that too this week..

Edited by preethi.saseeda - 12 years ago