SS: Of Lemons & Limes #3 (Chapter 13-16)

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multifaceted

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Posted: 12 years ago

#951

That was a wonderful update...loved it

thanks for the PM

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Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#952

After the last chapter, I was so heartbroken for her but in her own way, she is a logical girl. Making peace with what she felt was never hers. Little does she know that her Devi Mayya has other tricks up her sleeves and made the person who got her so desperate to turn into the Cupid who will help her get what is hers. I love the last conversation between them. Felt like when she went to,the temple after her paag phera(don't know spelling) and he went looking for her like a mad man. That scene was so cute. If there is a Farak padta hain scene, then pls make him complete it, I hated that it took him so many tries before spitting it out to her. Great update!

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sias2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#953

loved loved loved it...ohhh I so wanna know what happens next

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smiley13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#954

Lavanya is really smart..she really handled the situation well.I like this lavanya...
waiting for the faraq padta hai moment...
nice update...

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reallyhappy

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#955

dis was amzin..:)La new wt was wrong wid ASR..n she finally guessd seein d box dt Khushi n Arnav wer sumwt uhmm..kinda attrctd or may b intrstd in each othr..Khsuhi left n dt was hurtin Arnav..he tried cllin her n she dint receiv..n wen pickd up his cll he blastd..nw he's cumin at d temple..temple 2 c her..fark padta h?usse aage kuch b nai? :Oagain dey wud b here...repeatin d history..oh m lovin it..:D

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clarissajohn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#956

ha ha such lovely update

dont screw up had me LOL

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Swati Hansraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#957

I sincerely am in love with ur Devi Maiya. she is super cool!

God! it was just so delightful and exquisite to imagine Arnav having those doubts and apprehensive fear and that image of him trying to call Khushi and then that phone convo, brought back so many memories...

Loved it!

A very delightful, sweet and absolutely devine update.

Now iam gonna wait for that 'farak pardta hai' wala dialogue in ur especial estyle!

Update soon and thanks for the PM.

Take care

Swati