SS: Of Lemons & Limes #3 (Chapter 13-16) - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: avantisharma

Yayayay..!*me dancing in my criminal law class*
update aapki taraf se hona no matter it is desires or lemons...!!!
Pakka update kroge na.?



Oye!!! IFing from "criminal" law class?? 😆

Pakka promise! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
s0 is s0mething happening 0r everything is happening???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti



Oye!!! IFing from "criminal" law class?? 😆

Pakka promise! :)



isn't it funn..! Well the lecturer is very boring so make myself busy on IF.! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti



Oye!!! IFing from "criminal" law class?? 😆

Pakka promise! :)

Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it too too much
this was totaly completaly superb
really different I think in this update we had a changed Arnav he is more soft now toward Khushi
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dude!..do you have any idea how well you write! 😉

I came across the story last night..and could not sleep until I read it till the last chapter!😳

In the starting..the story is so cute!..with Arnav getting attracted to Khushi's lemon fragrance. And then Arnav giving Khushi lifts daily!..loved their cute cute conversations!..I still remember Khushi telling Arnav, 'Amma says you will be killed drowning in pond if you have just one morsel.' I still cant stop laughing remembering that! LOL! That was seriously nice! 😆

and then the way you wrote how they both were attracted towards each other and then their almost (se thoda zada) kiss! OMG!! Im still in that dreamy world! I could imagine everything happening! Haashh! But this Aman!!!!..Argghhh!😡

But glad they both took that moment in a positive way!!😃

And then when Arnav's phone was left with Khushi..I thought Anjali will call..and she'll get to know about Khushi and then she'll also join hands with Devi Maiyaa..and bring both together!😆

But then both ended up in same room!..Wow!..when Arnav was under Khushi's bed hiding, and Buaji in their room, my heart was beating faster and faster thinking what would happen if now Arnav's phone rang and Buaji will catch him hiding!! LOL!😆 Their would have been a lot of drama! 😛

But I loved your version!😉 we got to see a naughty naughty Arnav! 😳 I wish that their had been a good night and take care kiss!😳

While sleeping also, I was thinking of what will come next in the story! And moreover, I also had a short dream in which Khushi was their in Arnav's room and was hiding in his washroom because unexpectedly Anjali popped up in his room! LOL! 😆

I know, I think a lot!..and I also know that my thoughts are very stupid! But plz excuse them!😳

I am so much in love with this story! Looking forward to next update! Update soon! 😊

and plzz PM me when you update it!

PS- Did I tell you that I am in love with your version of Devi Maiyaa! 😉

Edited by .sakshi. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
farah, iam a new reader of your work
thanks to samiya for her email with this link - iam indebted to her for the same
wonderful going farah
iam in love with this SS
i love the way you write - all emotions beautifully penned
i love the way u narrate Devi Maiyaa's reactions to arshi's acts
great writing and great story -
would love to read more of this story and hence will keep a track of this thread
if possible, pls pm me when u update next
priya
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for update!
I like to share my feeing about the story...La should be the first to know that Arnav has feelings for Khushi... may be because of her call at night, somehow she will know that Arnav phone was with Khushi and Khushi forgot to tell him about her call when he was with her... making her 2+2 and good in maths.
well what ever you shell out for us in this cute story ... it would be good and better my logical mind could ever imagine so please write you next update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Farhaaa😳😳

Main aa gayiii😃


Ayee hayeee😳😳 Their small arguments are heart of everything😳😳

I loved his lovestruck face❤️ Both are mesmerised by each other😳😳

I loved the beach.. where it is???😳😳😳


Btw.. Its 19 March.. when ull b updating😛😛😛

Update soon😛😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thx for the lovely pix from your holiday..where is this island?

And thx for the lovely update...your store telling is really awesome!

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