SS: Of Lemons & Limes #3 (Chapter 13-16)

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lighttheworld

@lighttheworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Beutiful. The photo. Its really beutiful. The sea, the sound of waves and the silence in it...
Your story is also nice.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Read d whole story... needless to say tht it was too good... reminded me so much of ipkknd... i loved how u brought them togethr n also ur totally cool devi mayya... am glad how d jaadu hain nasha hain scene turned out with no bitterness... pls pm me wen u update.. this is too grt to b missed!!

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drmj5612

@drmj5612

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

i was scared with, "Lavanya Calling"..

but, Thank God, nothing happened.. Phewww..

Arnav had a small little night trip to Gupta House to retrieve his phone..

which turned out much interesting 4 us n Devi Maiyya to see (actually read)... 😳

itne pyaar se if someone massages ur feet n toes, who would want to stop them.. poor Khushi, she is not at fault... ☺️

n i bet Arnav is enjoying every bit of it.. naughty boy... 😉

n Buaji's timing..!!!! she has to turn up always on wrong time.. 😲

i had fun reading it..

Thanks 4 d PM.. 😛

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

omg,,,,omg,,,,,,,,,omg,amazing upate dear.

his phone left with her intrestin.he went his home to taking his cell great.

their convarsation and they spend the time togather.

nice ane perfact update thanks alot.

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Dynamix215

@Dynamix215

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

*sigh
how romanticcc :*
I just wish they'd stop being do stubborn •_•

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

Beautiful update...
Though i was worried about lavanya calling.
But update was loaded with breath hitching one liner of ASR like 'Tum thik ho ', Mujhe dekhne do Khushi' miss Arnav *sigh*
loved Devi Maiyas 'earth, calling Arnav' epic.
Poor Arnav under the bed was 'unbelievable'
Wow that island snap from your trip was beautiful thanks for sharing.
will wait for next part.

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

so lovely update...

arnav is in khushi's home...

secretly frm window...

so cute...

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melonie

@melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

Hi,

Wonderful update. Loved all Khushi and Arnav's moments. Some words and scenes bring back so many memories...makes me miss IPK terribly. Thanks to all the wonderful writers like you for keeping the memories alive 🤗

Pls cont soon..

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shona136

@shona136

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

awww such an awesome update...i truly was flying in the air seeing these two love birds feeling it inside them...love is in the air...hope they realize it soon...arnav now knows that both of them feels something comon for eacth other... i m so excited for the upcoming updates...!!! 😉😉😉

well done dear...!!👏