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Summer99

@Summer99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

you have depicted their mutual grief very well

really liked the way you describe the emotions along with the landscape

really would love to see the place

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

beautiful update!
I think i missed eariler that Arnav is diabetic here! The scene you recreated was beautiful! Hope this helps to create new friendly bond bet Arshi!
The scene at the cemetery was touching. I felt very bad for Khushi. I think the pain they both share may bond them together.
Eagerly waiting..

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Sorry for the delay in reply... I was really busy whole weekend and just got reading...

very nicely written Jenny...

felt so nice reliving the scenes form IPK...

Waiting for the next...

Love Ya! 😛

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

AWESOMEST update till now... I really really really loved it... ❤️❤️
Every bit of this update was amazing...👏
So i was right..😃 Arnav has started falling for her... I hope Khushi would fall for him soon...

Do update soon...😊😊

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

That was a memorable scene. Khushi's grief that she has lost her mother and a acceptance that in fact her grandmother is more her mother...and grieving at her fathers grave...in the patchy evening sunlight...wow...it will stay in my mind for a long time,

What was even more memorable was that the walls around Arnav's heart finally broke at the words encrypted on Khushi's fathers grave and he let out all his misery, anger and grief and moved towards acceptance and beyond...loved it.

The scene where he is almost passed out and she helps him by giving something sweet...one of my most favorite scenes in the show too.

Look forward to more...

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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moushumi_90

@moushumi_90

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

awww...update was so cutee,emotional also

why khushi's mother live somewhere else...she was behaving so wierd

arnav has lots of grief...hope khushi will help him to come out from this :)

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Loved all the chapters👍🏼

You are such a versatile writer...

Putting Arnav and Khushi in different scenarios has produced such a beautiful backdrop to your new love story .Waiting eagerly for the next update😃

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

lvd d update
thanks for d pm

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#609

thanks for PM that was amazin👏

loved how u captured every feeling perfectly n the way how Arnav watches her when shes not lookin is fab👍🏼

one thing though in prologue i noticed wee girl called Khushi Mrs does that mean khushi is married?😭

anyways plz continue looking forward to more PMs in future😉

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#610

I have never really understood the importance of showing arnav as a diabetic in the show, but there are type 1 diabetics out there, a lot of them. But that particular scene in the show was unique. The damsel was not in distress, the knight was. The heroine was not flanked by the hero, it was the other way round. I liked it. Here too, I liked it, the significance is yet to be understood. But somehow I felt both had witnessed each other in a state of vulnerability.

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