Arshi OS: All About You (Note on Pg 21)

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teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

awesome os dear...loved it...😊

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

You write so well. Will be glad it you change this into a ff.

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

I think if you give due credit it's fine...but honestly don't have any idea on IF's rules for writers 😳

But I know I will be happy to read your work :D Waiting for your updates.

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Cute OS.The best thing was it's simplicity and flawless narration. The paragraph where you describe Kamya'a and Khushi's friendship is beautiful. It happens between any two friends as one is bound to overtake the other in terms of looks and nature.

I love your writings. They are simple , yet gripping.

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Ace11

@Ace11

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

This one is even better than your first... ...if that's possible... Can relate to Khushi for the first time as she is urban. You have another winner in hand...loved it...Oooh no...It's an OS... Please continue it and make it an FF... Please...

Edited by Ace11 - 12 years ago

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maaneet93

@maaneet93

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

OMG that was soo cute!
Hahaha I'm prolly like Khushi, clueless as to if a guy is interested in me or a friend :P

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Sweta...

@Sweta...

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Great Os loved the way khushi got jealous thinking kamya was with arnav hahahah and then the date was the next really nice Os :) thanks for the pm :)

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diya1123

@diya1123

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

That was such an awesome OS dear loved it to the core I am getting addicted to your writing would love to see a little romance plz plz plz write another update to this one puuuhhhlleeeaaaxzzz 👍🏼

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bunnylovessunny

@bunnylovessunny

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

I totally get it when you say Arnav is perfect when he's actually flawed and complicated! :D I absolutely agree! Without those Gray shades the guy so not Arnav Singh Raizada! :D

Oh, you can write an Os based on a sitcom and you can adapt a few dialogues, but yeah make sure you mention it before or after writing the Os, i'm sure nothing's gonna happen, although I would suggest you put the credits after, because it'll kind of keep the flavour of the one shot going :)

Looking forward to it :D