Arshi OS: All About You (Note on Pg 21)

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@SuperstarSanaya

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

I loved it... 😃

Khushi's self talking about being the Kamya Information Center.. She felt that clench at being the No choice over Kamya. And that was not jealousy for her friend.. or anything in bad terms, She still Loved her Friend like the same but felt neglected in front of Kamya's persona. Brilliantly described Khushi's state.

She wanted to be that stranger's choice. First Choice. Loved how she address him as hers and then right away corrected herself. 😳

And the end conversation.. 👍🏼 She was always that Stranger's First Choice.. 😳

Arnav was more than a Perfect Dream Boy in this OS.. ❤️

Starting to end.. every word was flashing the Anony_mous effect. Wonderfully written 😊

You should definitely write more OSs as such.. 😃

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Seethu

@Seethu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Congrats on you first OS!! It was excellent .. Nice work again :) Thanks for the PM

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foesb

@foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Just found the OS! A nice and a realistic one although in reality we don't come a cross guys who look like Barun😉 anyway the point is it was written so nicely,Khushi's insecurities in the beginning and the relief she felt when he revealed he was and is interested in her was conveyed nicely 😊 I think in this OS we got lot of conversations between Khushi and herself than between the characters!

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Swetha Reddy

@swekus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

woww... that was a sweet n a cute story👏

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

TFs for this lovely OS. I don't know why but I felt as if Arshi was meeting again in the same cafe that the Friends stars always hung around. It made me feel better because I am a great fan of that sitcom. Anyways, your OS was very beautiful. Loved how Khushi wanted someone to love and appreciate her for who she was and then Arnav became her dream man.

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MamiaRehman

@MamiaRehman

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

How lovely... finally her fate bring something special for her... which is only meant to be her...

awesome... loved it...👏👏👏

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Way too cute anonymousji

You are a superb writer :)

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Avery good OS!! arnav is too good!!a gentleman!1

Thanks for the pm!!

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

that's one of the simplest, most sincere one shots I've ever come across, such beautiful characters.

love
sonia

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Thank you all SO SO SO much for appreciating this OS. Means a lot to me. I have got some very sincere feedback from you guys and I really value it. Shall keep all that in mind in my next OS. I am not planning to convert it to SS for a few reasons:

1. I haven't thought it THAT through that I can write 20-25 chapters on it :D

2. I can take only so much of nice Arnav Singh Raizada. For me he is always better when he is flawed and complicated!!

3. I already have a few idea bubbling in my head, so wanna pen them first :)

Please let me know : Idea of my next OS which I am planning is based on a TV couple of an American political sitcom. I want to take a dialogue or two as it is from that too. Please let me know that if you guys know of some rule on the forum that stops me from doing that. I will give due credits. Does that come under Plagiarism or not because as far as I have read the rules I can write it with proper credits. Any help will be welcomed!!

Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago

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