The Saree Shop :Part 3 Pg 22 20/06

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

I can't believe i got this place whoe wow 🥳

Superb update.

Arnav getting glimpse real love and longings from the old man ... hair pulling 😆

Chamk detergent 🤣 i was thinking the scene from ipk ...for one year Khushi buying detergent and Mami's comment...

Seems like his side business now got result ...it might be Khushi right?

Next time please update soon

Edited by riafna - 12 years ago

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

welcome back. very evocative update

urmi confused me a bit how old is she?

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Nice update. Almost skimmed past it. He to a lesson in love from someone who has been waiting longer than him. How old is Urmi? Not sure if she is a child or young lady. His side job brought him to her doorstep? Hope you update soon.

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Shinja

@Rainbow_petals

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Wow , beautiful..
Arnav listening to old man's love story..
Urmi , how old is she?
I hope very young 😆
oh detergent packets.. IPK memories !
Is the person at door Khushi?
Wow waiting to read more..

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Unrequited love is quite strange - mixture of pain & pleasure, gloom and happiness.
Arnav can relate to Ganguly but the only difference is he doesn't even know where Khushi is right now.
So it's Khushi who opened the door and smiled at him, I guess so.
Please try to update soon.

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Swati

@Swati_

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Hey Sona..*hugs*
Ah...you finally updated this...:-) :-)
Sona..i did not get the PM...have you stopped sending them?

Coming to the part...
I loved it...
Arnav is so sweet and simple in this...usually he is the hot business tycoon in other stories...but here he is a simple worker...this fact about him is very endearing for me...
I dont want his and Khushi's story to be like Ganguly...poor guy...:-( :-(
He still loves his school mate so much...

I felt very very bad for Arnav...he is working so so hard for his living..Poor Poor boy...
I hope Khushi brings happiness in his life...

Sonaji the update was short...:-( :-(
You are a wonderful writer and you have made me absolutely crazy for your studies...

Love you hon...
Update soon...
Take care...

Edited by Swati_ - 12 years ago

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glimmernglitter

@glimmernglitter

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

OMG you updated!!!!!!!!!!!

I so love the way you have penned this.. it has such an adorable and untainted charm to it that I can't help but be drawn into the web you so magically weave... 👏

Please do update soon next time...

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Eeep! I am late! Shall try and read tomorrow or soon! But...this is not exactly a res, but a promise to read and comment soon! Too late now and my eyes refuse to stay open :)