The Saree Shop :Part 3 Pg 22 20/06

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

OMG OMG U finally updated!!!! 🥳

jumps around in pure joy!!!!!!!

My oh my, that was something I had never imagined the story having this background... Poor Khushi, it was heart breaking to read what she had gone through... The simplicity with which you described what had occurred in the past left a profound and tangible impact 👏 It explains very well though, Khushi's determination to find that particular saree..

What never ceases to amaze me is the amount of detail you put into your updates, everything from the mannerisms to the colors to the slight nuances of daily humdrum routine are so perfectly etched by you that it takes me to a different world altogether...

My heart just constricted when I read that Arnav was planning to make her a saree! 😳 I mean that is the epitome of love... I especially loved how you portrayed his emotions after he finds out her reason for finding that particular saree.. that was mindblowing 👏

I am amazed by your writing skills and I simply cannot wait for you to update this! Could you please share the links of your other works on Arhi???

Thanks a lot for updating, please continue soon 😳

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

A beautiful update! Really emotional! Loved it 😳

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

And a res for part two!

Will update this weekend! :)

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pips27

@pips27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

as usual,beautiful writing😳

took me to another arshi world😳

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

That was poignantly beautiful. This Arnav is truly one in a million. He is willing to go through all that exertion just to get her happiness in return. *Sigh* Do men like this still exist? Btw was this the end? I sincerely hope that there will be another part to this tale.. Please? Thanks for the pm.

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

We have a part 3 right? Right? This was damn heartbreaking. Arnav's decision was the best part

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indiavizion

@indiavizion

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

nice storyline...and arnav is very diff...

khushi is trying so hard to find her father's last gift and it was touching to see arnav help her by sewing a saree for her...

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Khushi desperately searching for the saree makes perfect sense to me now...That saree is important to her because her father chose it for her but it never reached her..

Arnav will now make the saree for her? just to see her smile back,just to comfort her,just to make her feel better..his love for her is amazing...

beautifully written..

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Oh that was beautiful, Sona, but then again when is your work not beautiful?

The story took a turn towards the better, the more human, the more sensitive, the more lovable with the reason for Khushi looking for that particular Sari and Arnav deciding to make one for her because thats all he could do for her...beautiful.

And whats better? He is doing so for her and not completely for the idea of getting her through it...he is doing so to lighten her pain...sigh. Even more in love with this Arnav...

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago