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Posted: 12 years ago
I liked the way u portrayed Riya's helplessness.Also this update gave us a glimpse of human behaviour in the form of arjun's& abhi's act wherein arjun took a fairly gud chance to confess his feelings to riya inspite of knowing that dey r being watched by Abhi&Abhi's misunderstood riya by just having seen a partial truth.Both the scenario shows wat a person can do to make the thing which he loves at any cost&believing only u see without hearing it.I liked the question dat arjun asked riya about losing abhi as a friend or BF.I am eagerly waiting for the part wherein the equation between Ariya changed dat she cannot forgive arjun for wat he has done.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@sips_crazy: Nyc SS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update. Don't know why, but the ss always keeps me brooding at the end. Feel like I personally know these people. Anyhow, you are portraying all the emotions in depth. Continue soon, this fabulous work of yours.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sips_crazy hi i have read all Ariya Os- His Salvation,OS-Hope & Arni Os-Promise still reading its really nice u have a different style of writing but i loved it plz pm me yesterday i have read her only sin which looks similar to my bloody valentine also i m not able to read the parts & have read only the prolouge plz pm me ...Arshi25031990
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.
I like the way Arjun console Riya. He listen all her word. Though she was talking about Abhi and her he was listening. He really loves her a lot. Love that dialogue of Arjun which Abhi do u miss the friend or the lover.
Sorry for the late reply. Thnks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago

All the wonderful people ..lots of love to you all...

Another filler update but yes i am gonna bhi more regular in updating now 😃
Thanks for all the likes and commenst , couldmt reply to each one of you but yes going forward woh bhi karungi ...
Abhi is about to leave the story for a while ab U.S ja raha hai na ..and Ariya par concentrate kargi and unki Shaadi par ...and of course Test wale us par ( ab kuch log samjh hi gaye honge 😆😆)
Anyways update in next post and thanks for all the love guys
Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Proof read as usual nahi kiya hai toh please ignore the errors
Chapter 17- Father & Friend

PAST

Justice Choudhury was a name reckoned with power.

He had everything and yet nothing. People used to sing praises for him and yet behind his back they made fun of his son for he was nothing but a failure. He had thought that he would rise to his name but nope he was still struggling .After patiently waiting for all these years it was high time to take things in his hand. The only obstacle to his path of success was his relationship with Riya.

Riya Dutta had everything name, fame, money and a career going great. Until they both were together Abhi would never prosper, he would always be her shadow but he wanted to see his sun shining.

It wasn't the fact that he hated Riya but just she was an obstacle for her sons future .He knew that things were not going good with them and it might be a good to separate them forever for his son good future and for that he knew that only ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte can help him. After all if the media was to be believed and Arjun behavior with Riya during the parties they had met were all the proof that something was brewing and he just had to turn the tide in his favor.

"There is no smoke without fire "

A spark is enough to start a fire that can destroy everything or maybe begin something new

Arjun had been surprised when he had been called by Abhi father; yes that's how he had introduced himself .He was anxious more than being surprised or shocked as to what he required of him.

"Mr Choudhary "

"Hi Arjun, i am glad that you could take time out from your busy schedule "

"How can i help you Sir "

"Well its not about how can you help me, it's about how can i help you or how can we help each other "

There wasn't any reply from Arjun but he only stared him which made Mr. Choudhury continue.

"I know you love Riya "He glanced at the man in front of him but there was no reaction on his face

"I know that you love Riya, and she is a nice girl .It easy for anyone to fall in love with her .My son also loves him but the only problem is that his love is his biggest mistake .I want Riya out of my son's life and only you can help me in that. Once she is out I am sure that my son would be able to concentrate better on building his future than trying to figure out the mess that has been created and i know that you do have a role to play in it."

"And what would you want of me Sir "

"Nothing much, he has got an opportunity for higher studies in US and I want you to sponsor it "

"Why don't you help him "

"Do you really think that your son would take help from me? "

"He would never take any help from me or never use any of my contacts .If he would have taken my help them then I wouldn't be here sitting with you and discussing this. I know that your family offers scholarships to students and I just want to make sure that he gets it. There are various ways that you can help him and I am sure being an officer you would know where to pull the strings."

After a moment of silence ...

"Thanks for the offer Sir, but I don't think that would be required "with that Arjun went away without any backward glance to him or he would notice that Justice Choudhury was now more firm in his decision

ETF Office

"Really that man actually told you to do this Arjun "Sameer was surprised

"Yes, I thought he would tell me to stay away from Riya but this wasn't expected "

"Anyways i am glad that you rejected it Arjun"

"I had to, I am already manipulated the situation twice when in front of Abhi .I am just waiting to see his reaction and of course also Riya too. I really want to see that what she has thought of that. It has been a week and now I am really looking forward to see her "

"Karma is a bitch, it always comes back at you "Sameer said

Arjun hope everything turns good for you but make sure that if it ever comes back to hurt you .Riya has already faced issues with Abhi and then all the media lashings and only because of you .The day she comes across with the truth then all will be undone. None o9f them realized that karma does come back to haunt you in one way or the other .Arjun would have never thought that the day would come when Riya would be so near and yet so distant .The mirage of love that had been built came crashing down and left her broken and him hurt .But would he change his actions ' Nope because if the things wouldn't go his way meant that she would be someone else and that he couldn't now tolerate .They both had already bonded beyond friendship

PRESENT

Riya sat in her cabin and opened the drawer which had all their memories stored .The gifts he had given to her, their photographs and of course the one most important to her 'his notes .He used to send it along with flowers on every important occasion and the last one said

Riya

In all the hate too I can feel your love.

No matter whatever happens, I will love you always

Yours

Arjun

"Riya woh Mr. Mehra case file?"

Shree saw Riya lost somewhere and finally thought to have the overdue conversation with her .He jerked her out of the thoughts and sat next to her.

You know someone told " pyaar aur jung main sab jayaz hai ,tujhe kya lagta hai Ri"

"Apne pyar to paana aur usko hasil karna dono alag baat hoti hai shree"

"Matlab ek insaan jo kise se bahut pyaar karta hai, agar woh uske liye kisse bhi hadd tak jaye toh woh galat hai"

"par kisi aur ko hurt karke , usse dhoka dekar ,usse baatein chupa kar, yeh sab sahi hai shree"

"Nahi yeh sab bhi sahi nahi hai ."

"Riya , hum log dil se sochte hain dimag se nahi .Pyar cheez hi aise hai ki dimag kaam karna band ho jata hai .Ab mujhe hi dekh lo na kisse pata tha ki Neha ki liye main Apni family se bhi lad padunga kyunki woh galat hai ,par maine kiya na "

"par tum sahi the Shree"

"Sahi toh arjun sir bhi hain Riya"

"Shree tum-"

"Main sab janta hun , tujhe kya lagta hai ki Abhi deserving that tere pyaar ke liye . Apne dil par haath rakh kar sach bol agar Abhi ki jagah Arjun sir hote toh kya woh tujhse kabhi koi sawal poochte .

Nahi Na, Kyunki har rishte main bharosa hona chaiye jo tere aur abhi ke rishte main nahi tha ,isliye woh tooth gaya. Par apna aur Arjun sir ka rishta tu khud tod rahi hai Ri ."

"Bhagwan bhi insan ki maaf karta hai , toh tu kyun nahi kar sakti .

Anyways its your decision and ab main kuch aur nahi bolunga but sochna zaroor .Jo bhi hua usse apna aaj mat kharab karo .Arjun sir se zyada tujhe koi pyaar nahi kar sakta yeh baat hum dono acchi tarah jante hain.

Anyways , the main reason for which i came 'Me and Neha are getting married . July main shaadi hai and i hope tab tak Arjun Sir bhi wapas aa jayenge "

"Congratulations Shree, i am so happy for you "

"Dont worry Ri , i am also happy for myself too "

Really Shree , kuch nahi ho sakta tumhara , ab chalo zara sab ko yeh good news dete hain

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

me first dhinka chika

stalker me !!!

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Awesum chapter sia

loved loved loved it

in the past
Arjun said no to Abhi's father ...den y he sponsored it later

n abhi's dad is such n annoying person

coming to present,

love shreee as always

he s such a gr8 frend

he s very right in saying that arjun se jyada no 1 can love her

hope ria realizes dis soon

i m telling dis since long ...Eagerly want to know arjun's reaction wen he wiill realize dat ria has forgiven him in future...

the note dat u wrote for arjun's side was just superb

loved it
Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey.. I was just going to sign off and your PM happened to pop up! Lucky me! 😉

Whoa!! So he is Abhi's father?!! 😲 Darn.. and he manipulated them all.. Obviously, Arjun Ji must've ended up sponsoring his scholarship.. But how! And why?! Coz he'd refused right..

Kuch toh choot raha hai, behna..

Aww.. We BB's love Shree, don't we?! 😉😳 He's absolutely right.. No one will love her more than Arjun Ji.. Yes, he was probably wrong in having manipulated the situation and broken her trust.. But I'm sure those MU's will be dismissed away, once she learns of Abhi's father's involvement and what must've followed that!

Aha.. Looking forward to the upcoming plot.. Glad u packed and sent Abhi off.. Ab aayegi Test uski baari.. 😉 And of course, how and why their marriage took place.. 😊

Thanks for the PM! Update soon! 😃

P.S.: I hope tumne woh khatarnaak idea apne dimaag se nikalkar gutter mein phenk diya ho.. Varna.. 😡 Phew.. 😉😛
Edited by mohabbatgirl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...
so Abhi's dad is a reason too...he wanted Riya out of his life...hmm interesting..
atleast there is a partner in crime if any!

I loved Shree...advice dene mein usse koyi nahi haraa saktha...

loved the line about Karma...very true!

cont soon!
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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