This Chap was very well drafted, behna.. Loved every bit of it!
My favorite part being Riya-Abhi's interactions.. I can't help but feel for the guy, (Keeping aside my Arjun Prem!) đ
Though I do agree with Riya that he should have fought for them, I'm sure the situation would've been a lot more chaotic and difficult, considering Arjun himself had played a role in manipulating it.
Riya's justifications to him, as to why she is still bound to Arjun is the cherry on top!
But none of that changes the fact that I fell in love with him."
This pretty much sums up everything.. She may hate him, despise him for toying with her life, yet the very fact that she loves him with a broken heart, is proof enough that this prem kahani is made in the heavens!
Arjun and his possesiveness-turned-into love, is enough to make any woman go weak in her knees.. Lord, this guy really needs her like his next breath! đ I wish things come back to normal, pretty soon..
It really is heart-wrenching to watch them fight with each other, while they are themselves burning from within..
@Past: Oh oh! Jab jab jo jo hona hai, tab tab so so hota hai.. Only, like Krishna manipulated things in the Mahabharata, Arjun did them here.. None were wrong, only right in their own stands!
Take a bow, behna.. Superb work!
This is one of the finest pieces of fiction, I've read on IF! đ